Reading— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Работайте над грамматикой и структурой предложения: используйте полные предложения и правильные формы глаголов, избегайте повтора и лишних фраз. Начните с чёткой темы (например, 'Yes, I enjoy reading'), затем добавьте 1–2 конкретных поддерживающих детали (почему и как часто). Следите за согласованием времен и артиклями.

Example: Yes, I enjoy reading. I read every day because books help me relax and broaden my knowledge. For example, I often read short stories in the evening to unwind.

Suggestion: Улучшите согласование и выбор слов: используйте правильную форму глаголов и артиклей, говорите последовательно о каждом варианте (paper vs e-books) и приводите конкретные причины. Избегайте прямых буквальных переводов ('very cheaper' некорректно — 'much cheaper').

Example: I like both paper books and e-books. E-books are convenient when I travel because I can carry many titles on my phone, and they are usually much cheaper than printed editions. However, I enjoy paper books at home because I prefer the feel of real pages.

Suggestion: Сформулируйте мысль полностью и конкретизируйте: назовите типы текстов, требующих внимательного чтения, и приведите примеры, когда можно читать бегло. Избегайте повторов и неполных фраз; используйте связки ('for example', 'but', 'on the other hand').

Example: I need to read carefully when I'm studying lesson materials or important subjects, for example, when preparing for exams or writing essays. On the other hand, I skim news articles or social media posts when I only need the main idea.

Suggestion: Сделайте ответ более плавным и структурированным: начните с общей темы, затем поясните причину и приведите конкретный пример. Уберите повторяющиеся слова и объедините короткие неполные предложения в одно связное целое.

Example: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand the main ideas and remember important details. For example, before exams I read my English notes slowly and underline key facts to review later.

× Yes I'm really bookworm and I read everyday books and reading books allowed me to relax and not only relax but also it improve my mind and I usually read a.

✓ Yes, I'm really a bookworm and I read every day; reading books allows me to relax and not only relax but also improve my mind, and I usually read a lot.

The sentence has multiple issues: missing article before 'bookworm' (use 'a' for singular countable nouns), 'everyday' should be 'every day' when meaning each day, subject-verb agreement with 'reading books allows' (singular subject requires 'allows'), 'it improve' should be 'improve' because the subject is 'reading books' and 'also' connects verbs rather than requiring 'it', and the sentence is incomplete so I added 'a lot' to finish the thought. Suggestion: break the long sentence into shorter clauses, ensure articles before countable nouns, use 'every day' for frequency, and match verbs to their subjects.

× I prefer ebooks and paper books because it's convenient for me.

✓ I prefer ebooks and paper books because they are convenient for me.

The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to plural noun phrase 'ebooks and paper books'; use 'they' and plural verb 'are'. Suggestion: make sure pronouns agree in number with their antecedents.

× I read ebooks when I go to somewhere or when I traveling.

✓ I read ebooks when I go somewhere or when I am traveling.

'Go to somewhere' is incorrect; use 'go somewhere' without 'to'. 'When I traveling' lacks auxiliary verb; use present continuous 'I am traveling'. Also ensure parallel structure: 'when I go somewhere or when I am traveling'. Suggestion: learn correct verb + preposition patterns and use appropriate auxiliary verbs for continuous tenses.

× Another big advantage is that ebooks is very cheaper.

✓ Another big advantage is that ebooks are much cheaper.

'Ebooks' is plural, so use plural verb 'are' (subject-verb agreement). 'Very cheaper' is ungrammatical: 'cheaper' is comparative and should combine with 'much' or 'far' not 'very'. Suggestion: use 'much cheaper' or 'a lot cheaper' for emphasis, and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× I need to read carefully when I when I read something lessons, lessons, subjects and.

✓ I need to read carefully when I study lessons, subjects, or read something important.

The original repeats 'when I' and leaves the sentence incomplete and ungrammatical. I rephrased to a clear structure: 'when I study lessons, subjects, or read something important.' Suggestion: avoid repetition, complete the list of items, and use parallel structures when listing.

× I prefer detailed reading to scanning because it helps me and not only understand the main ideas but also remember for important details.

✓ I prefer detailed reading to scanning because it helps me not only understand the main ideas but also remember important details.

The phrase 'not only understand the main ideas but also remember for important details' is ungrammatical: 'for' is unnecessary before 'important details', and the correlative 'not only... but also' should directly connect parallel verb phrases: 'not only understand... but also remember...'. Suggestion: keep the two parts parallel and remove extraneous prepositions.

× For example, I read my English English notes slowly but underline key facts before a test.

✓ For example, I read my English notes slowly and underline key facts before a test.

The sentence had a repeated word 'English English' and used 'but' which suggests contrast; however the intended meaning is sequencing or additional action, so 'and' is more appropriate. Also maintain present simple for habitual actions: 'I read... and underline...'. Suggestion: remove duplicate words and choose conjunctions that reflect the relationship between actions.