Reading— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more fluent and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and hesitations, and fix pronunciation errors (e.g., 'reading'). Add one specific detail or example to make the answer more informative.

Example: Yes, I love reading books. Reading helps me relax and unwind after a busy day, for example I often read short stories before bed to calm my mind.

Suggestion: Clarify and correct vocabulary and reduce repetition. Use one clear reason and support it with a brief, specific example. Replace unclear phrases (e.g., 'living on the the next') with accurate words like 'reading on electronic devices'.

Example: I prefer reading on paper because it helps me concentrate better; for instance, when I read novels in print I can focus for an hour, but on my phone I get distracted by notifications.

Suggestion: Provide a clear contrast with correct vocabulary and structure. Begin with a topic sentence answering both parts (when careful vs when not), then give specific examples. Avoid filler words and pronunciation errors ('leaving' -> 'reading').

Example: I need to read carefully when studying academic papers or instructions because I must understand details and facts. However, I don't read carefully when I'm enjoying light stories or fiction; I usually skim for general plot and enjoyment.

Suggestion: Give a fuller, coherent answer with linking words. Say when you use skimming and when you use detailed reading, and give a concise reason or example. Avoid repetition and finish the sentence.

Example: It depends: I usually skim newspapers to find headlines that interest me, but I read in detail when an article is important or related to my work so I don't miss crucial information.

× Yes, I love reading books When I'm reading books, I, I feel I'm, I become calm and relaxed, which helps me and also leading, uh, leading helps me to.

✓ Yes, I love reading books. When I'm reading, I feel calm and relaxed, which helps me to unwind.

The original contains run-on sentence, repetitions, and unclear verb forms ('leading'). This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Fix by splitting into two sentences, removing repeated words and fillers, and replacing unclear phrase 'leading helps me to' with a clear verb 'unwind'. Use simple present progressive 'I'm reading' and simple present 'I feel' consistently.

× I prefer reading on paper because I feel more relaxed when I'm reading on paper. In contrast, when I'm living on the the next on the electronic devices I can't concentrate on.

✓ I prefer reading on paper because I feel more relaxed. In contrast, when I'm using electronic devices I can't concentrate.

The phrase 'living on the the next on the electronic devices' is incorrect preposition and verb choice and contains extra words. This is an incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11). Use 'using electronic devices' and remove unnecessary prepositions like 'on' at the end. Also eliminate repetition 'on paper' in the second clause for conciseness.

× Umm, when I'm leaving on papers, uh, something related to academic, I need to lead, I need to focus on leading. But when I'm leading some stories that.

✓ When I'm reading academic papers, I need to focus and concentrate. But when I'm reading stories, I read more casually.

Multiple errors: 'leaving on papers' and 'lead/leading' misuse are preposition and verb choice errors (ID 11). Replace 'leaving on papers' with 'reading academic papers'. Use verbs 'focus' or 'concentrate' without unnecessary prepositions. For the contrast, use 'reading stories' and a suitable verb phrase 'read more casually' to complete the thought.

× Depends. It depends. When I'm reading some newspaper like newspaper, I usually skim skim them and I focused on the news that I really want to know about because it.

✓ It depends. When I'm reading a newspaper, I usually skim it and focus on the news I really want to read about.

Errors include unnecessary repetition, wrong noun form and incorrect verb tense 'I focused' (should be present 'I focus') and wrong plural agreement 'newspaper like newspaper'. This fits verb + -ing and tense issues (ID 8 and ID 6). Use 'reading a newspaper' (correct article), 'skim it' (newspaper is singular), and present tense 'I focus' to match general habitual action. Remove trailing incomplete clause 'because it'.