Reading— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 답변이 질문에는 직접적으로 응했지만 표현이 다소 어색하고 문장이 완결되지 않았습니다. 문장을 1~3개의 완전한 문장으로 간결하게 정리하고, 이유를 구체화하세요. 연결어를 사용해 이유와 결과를 명확히 설명하면 더 자연스럽습니다. 예: 취미로 언제 읽는지, 어떤 종류의 책을 좋아하는지 등을 덧붙여 구체성을 높이세요.

Example: Yes, I do. I enjoy reading because it helps me relax after a busy day and lets me organize my thoughts. For example, I often read short novels and essays before bed, which helps me sleep better.

Suggestion: 짧고 단문 위주로 답했지만 문법과 표현이 부정확하고 불필요한 말(umm)이 포함되어 있습니다. 이유를 말할 때는 연결어(so/because/which)로 문장을 연결하고, 구체적인 이유(눈의 피로, 집중력 등)를 제시하세요. 최대 3문장 이내로 정리하세요.

Example: I prefer reading on paper because I can concentrate better and it causes less eye strain. For instance, when I read a printed book I can focus for longer periods without getting distracted.

Suggestion: 의도는 파악되지만 문장이 매우 어색하고 의미 전달이 불명확합니다. '공부할 때'와 '그렇지 않을 때'를 명확히 구분해 각각 간단한 이유와 예시를 제시하세요. 연결어와 정확한 어휘(remember, understand, skim 등)를 사용하면 좋습니다.

Example: I need to read carefully when I study because I have to understand and remember important concepts for exams. On the other hand, I don't read carefully when I browse news or social media because I only want a quick overview.

Suggestion: 의견은 분명하지만 단어 선택(‘canning’ 오타)과 문장 연결이 부자연스럽습니다. 선호 이유를 연결어(so/therefore)로 매끄럽게 연결하고 구체적인 상황(예: 출퇴근 시간, 기사 등)을 추가하세요. 문장은 1~3개로 간결하게 유지하세요.

Example: I prefer scanning because I don't have much free time, so I skim articles and chapters to get the main ideas quickly. This way I can read more books and still keep up with my schedule.

× During reading a book.

✓ I read while relaxing with a book.

The original is a sentence fragment lacking a main verb and subject; it doesn't fit the previous sentence. Suggest making it a full clause that connects to the previous idea or combining with the previous sentence. Use a subject and verb to form a complete sentence (e.g., 'I read while relaxing with a book').

× Because I can more concentrate it.

✓ Because I can concentrate more on it.

Word order and pronoun placement are incorrect. 'More' should modify 'concentrate' and the preposition 'on' is needed with the pronoun 'it' when referring to 'paper' as the object. Correct order: adverb (more) after verb or 'concentrate more on it'.

× Umm. Relief.

✓ It is more relaxing for me.

This is a fragment; 'Relief' alone does not form a complete answer. Use a full clause to express the idea, such as 'It is more relaxing for me' or 'I find it more relaxing.'

× I prefer canning because I don't have much free time so I tend to scan.

✓ I prefer scanning because I don't have much free time, so I tend to skim.

The verb form 'canning' is a spelling error; the correct gerund is 'scanning' for looking quickly, though 'skim' is more natural collocation. Also add a comma before 'so' and ensure gerund usage is correct.

× In order to read more books.

✓ This helps me read more books.

Fragment lacking a subject and finite verb; it should be attached to the previous sentence or rewritten as a full clause (e.g., 'This helps me read more books').

× I like reading because it helps me unwind and I can organize my thoughts.

✓ I like reading because it helps me unwind and organize my thoughts.

Repetition of subject in the second clause is unnecessary. Omitting 'I' before 'can organize' makes the sentence smoother and more natural while keeping meaning.

× When I study I need to read carefully because double gives the resource of tests, so I need to remember the structures.

✓ When I study, I need to read carefully because studying provides the resources for tests, so I need to remember the structures.

The original uses 'double gives the resource of tests' which is ungrammatical and unclear. Replaced with 'studying provides the resources for tests' to convey intended meaning. Also add a comma after the introductory clause and keep present tense consistent.