Reading— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be careful with pronunciation and grammar (e.g., 'leading' → 'reading', 'book written' → 'books written' or 'books by'). Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Reduce hesitations ('uh') and avoid redundancy. Try: state liking, give a specific author and why, and mention a reading habit — all within 2–4 concise sentences. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas.

Example: Yes, I really enjoy reading. I especially like books by Haruki Murakami because his stories blend realism and surrealism in an engaging way. For example, I often read his novels in the morning when I have quiet time before work.

Suggestion: Give a clear, grammatical topic sentence and provide specific reasons. Avoid filler words and broken sentences. Say why paper books are better for you with at least one concrete reason (e.g., easier on the eyes, tactile feeling, memory retention). Use a linking word such as 'because' or 'so' to connect cause and effect.

Example: I prefer paper books because they are easier on my eyes and I remember the content better. Also, I enjoy the tactile feeling of turning pages, which helps me focus more than reading on a screen.

Suggestion: Provide a clear, complete answer: two contrasting situations using linking words like 'when' and 'but' or 'whereas'. Be specific about types of material (e.g., exam questions, legal documents vs. novels or emails). Avoid sentence fragments and include examples to clarify 'especially' and 'keyword'.

Example: I need to read carefully when I'm answering exam questions or studying instructions because I must understand keywords and details. But I don't read as carefully when I'm enjoying a novel or a magazine, where I skim for the main ideas and atmosphere.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence ('It depends') and follow with two specific examples contrasting scanning and detailed reading. Improve grammar (e.g., 'It depends' not 'It's depends') and structure: use linking words like 'for example' and 'whereas'. Keep sentences concise and avoid fillers.

Example: It depends on the material. For example, I usually scan business books to find useful facts quickly, whereas I read novels in detail to enjoy the plot and characters.

× Yes, I love leading especially I like uh, book written by Haruki Murakami, so I usually read the book in the morning every day.

✓ Yes, I love reading. Especially, I like books written by Haruki Murakami, so I usually read them in the morning every day.

The sentence has several issues: 'leading' is a misspelling of 'reading' (word choice). 'book written' should be plural 'books written' to match general preference, and 'the book' should be 'them' to refer back to the plural noun. Also the sentence was a run-on; adding a period and starting 'Especially' as a new clause improves clarity. Suggestion: use correct word forms, keep number agreement between nouns and pronouns, and split run-on sentences into shorter ones. Grammar problem type ID:13.

× I prefer uh, paper books, uh, because uh, uh, paper books help me. More. Consent.

✓ I prefer paper books because they help me concentrate more.

The original has awkward disfluencies and a wrong word 'consent' instead of 'concentrate'. Repeating 'paper books' is redundant; use a pronoun 'they'. Place adverb 'more' after the verb phrase 'concentrate' for natural word order. Suggestion: remove filler words and choose the correct verb 'concentrate'. Grammar problem type ID:22.

× If I have a especially question and the keyword. I. Need to read carefully. Whereas.

✓ If I have a difficult question or a question with an important keyword, I need to read carefully.

Problems: 'a especially question' is incorrect article and adjective order; it should be 'an especially important question' or 'a difficult question'. The fragment 'and the keyword.' is incomplete and 'I. Need' is fragmented. 'Whereas' is misused at the end with no contrast clause. Suggested correction combines fragments into a single coherent conditional sentence. Use correct articles before vowel sounds ('an') and proper adjective order. Grammar problem type ID:26.

× It's depends. When I read the, uh, business books, I prefer uh, scanning uh, whereas I uh, read the novels. I read uh, detailed reading.

✓ It depends. When I read business books, I prefer scanning, whereas when I read novels I prefer detailed reading.

Errors: 'It's depends' is wrong; use 'It depends' (subject-verb agreement). 'the, uh, business books' has unnecessary article 'the' and fillers. 'I prefer scanning' is fine but 'whereas I uh, read the novels. I read uh, detailed reading' is ungrammatical and repetitive. Use parallel structure: 'prefer scanning' versus 'prefer detailed reading'. Also 'detailed reading' is a noun phrase; keep consistent verb 'prefer'. Suggestion: remove fillers, fix subject-verb agreement, and use parallel forms for comparison. Grammar problem type ID:10.