Reading— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 발음과 유창성에서 약간의 반복(Umm, actually, Actually)과 중복 표현(‘reading a book’, ‘I enjoy it every day’)이 있습니다. 응답은 주제 문장(예: Yes, I like reading)으로 바로 시작한 후, 구체적인 예시(작가나 최근 읽은 책 제목, 읽는 이유 등)를 한두 문장으로 덧붙여 자연스럽게 연결하는 연습이 필요합니다. 연결어(for example, because, also)를 사용하면 논리성이 좋아집니다. 문장 수는 3~4문장으로 유지하세요.

Example: Yes, I really enjoy reading. I usually read both fiction and popular science magazines because they help me relax and learn new things. For example, last month I finished a science article about climate change that changed how I think about energy use.

Suggestion: 문법(‘prefer X to Y’, ‘my eyes are dry’)과 단어 선택(‘electronic devices watching’)에서 오류가 보입니다. 이유를 말할 때는 더 정확한 표현과 간결한 구조를 사용하세요. 연결어(because, so)와 비교 표현(prefer A to B)을 올바르게 사용하고, 구체적인 예(책, 노트 등)를 추가하면 좋습니다.

Example: I definitely prefer reading on paper to reading on a screen because my eyes get dry and tired when I stare at devices for a long time. Also, paper helps me take notes and flip back to previous pages easily.

Suggestion: 응답이 불분명하고 문장이 논리적으로 이어지지 않습니다. 질문의 의도를 파악하여 두 상황(주의 깊게 읽어야 할 때 vs. 그렇지 않은 때)을 명확히 나눠서 답하세요. 주제 문장으로 시작한 뒤 이유와 구체적 예(예: 시험 공부, 이메일 확인 등)를 제공하고, 연결어(when, because, but)를 사용해 구조를 갖추세요.

Example: I need to read carefully when I'm studying for an exam or when I'm reading official documents because I must understand details and avoid mistakes. Conversely, I don't read carefully when I'm skimming news headlines or browsing social media, since I'm just looking for general information.

Suggestion: 시제와 표현(‘preferred’, ‘detailed reading’)을 정확히 사용하고, 불필요한 망설임(uh)과 어색한 표현(‘diploma reading’)을 피하세요. 이유를 명확히 제시하고 과거와 현재를 비교할 때는 연결어(when, but, now)를 사용해 논리적으로 말하세요. 구체적 사례(어떤 과목이나 자료)를 더하면 설득력이 높아집니다.

Example: When I was younger I preferred scanning because I wanted to get the main idea quickly. Now, as a university student, I prefer detailed reading because my courses require deep understanding of complex topics, such as research papers and textbooks.

× Yes, I really like reading a book.

✓ Yes, I really like reading books.

The original uses 'a book' which suggests one specific book, but speaking generally about a hobby requires a plural noun 'books'. Use plural for general preferences: 'reading books'. Suggestion: Use plural nouns when talking about general habits (e.g., 'I like reading books').

× Umm, actually, Actually, I like fiction and information books like science magazines.

✓ I like fiction and informational books, like science magazines.

'Information books' is unnatural; the correct adjective is 'informational'. Also capitalization 'Actually' repeated and inconsistent. Use 'informational books' to describe non-fiction books that provide information. Suggestion: Use correct adjective forms (informational) and avoid unnecessary repetition.

× I enjoy it every day.

✓ I enjoy reading every day.

'Enjoy it every day' is vague; refer back to the activity with the gerund 'reading' after 'enjoy'. English uses verb+ing after 'enjoy'. Suggestion: Use 'enjoy' + verb-ing to name the activity you enjoy.

× I definitely prefer to read on paper than on a screen because my eyes have some dry so I don't like electronic devices watching so I read always paper.

✓ I definitely prefer reading on paper to reading on a screen because my eyes get dry, so I don't like looking at electronic devices and I always read on paper.

Multiple problems: 'prefer to read on paper than' should be 'prefer reading on paper to reading on a screen' (use 'prefer A to B' and parallel gerunds). 'my eyes have some dry' is incorrect; say 'my eyes get dry'. 'electronic devices watching' is incorrect word order; use 'looking at electronic devices'. 'I read always paper' should be 'I always read on paper'. Suggestion: Use 'prefer A to B', maintain parallel structure, use 'get dry' for eyes, 'look at' for screens, and place adverb 'always' before the verb.

× I think that the time when I need to try carefully is something about you.

✓ I think the times when I need to read carefully are when the material is new to me.

Original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'Need to try carefully' is incorrect; use 'need to read carefully'. 'Something about you' makes no sense here; likely intended 'new to you' meaning 'new to me'. Also subject-verb agreement: 'the times ... are'. Suggestion: Express the idea clearly: identify the condition ('when the material is new to me') and use correct verbs.

× New and when that time is.

✓ I mean when the material is new and I don't already know it.

Fragment 'New and when that time is' is not a complete sentence and misuses tense/structure. Provide a complete clause in present tense to explain the condition. Suggestion: Avoid sentence fragments; combine into a full sentence like 'when the material is new'.

× I already know about that.

✓ If I already know the material, I don't need to read it carefully.

Original lacks context and clarity. 'Already know about that' is informal and vague; specify 'the material' and contrast the condition. Suggestion: Be explicit about the subject ('the material') and use clear contrast.

× Actually, when I was young I prefer scanning, but nowadays I prefer diploma reading because as a university student, uh, more specific knowledge is required to me, so I need detailed reading.

✓ When I was young, I preferred scanning, but nowadays I prefer detailed reading because as a university student I need more specific knowledge, so I need to read carefully.

Tense mismatch: 'when I was young' requires past tense 'preferred', not present 'prefer'. 'Diploma reading' is incorrect phrase; likely meant 'detailed reading'. 'required to me' is wrong; use 'I need' or 'is required of me'. Also 'need detailed reading' should be 'need to read carefully' or 'need detailed reading' with clearer phrasing. Suggestion: Match tense to time expressions (past for 'when I was young'), use correct collocations ('detailed reading'), and use 'need' or 'is required of me' rather than 'required to me'.