Reading— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more fluent and concise. Remove fillers (uh, I, I) and combine ideas into one clear sentence. Add a brief reason or example to enrich the answer and show range.

Example: Yes, I enjoy reading, especially science fiction. For example, I like Isaac Asimov's novels because they combine scientific ideas with fascinating plots.

Suggestion: Correct small grammar and word order issues and avoid hesitation. Use linking words to contrast preferences and give a short reason or condition.

Example: I usually prefer reading paper books because I find them easier on my eyes. However, when a book is only available digitally, I read it on an electronic device.

Suggestion: Organize the answer with a clear topic sentence and specific examples. Replace vague words like “stuff” with precise terms and reduce fillers. Use linking words (for example, because) to explain why careful reading is needed.

Example: I read carefully when the material affects my rights or work. For example, I carefully read personal data and privacy agreements, and I also study technical manuals and scientific articles because errors could have serious consequences.

Suggestion: Make the structure clearer and avoid repeating words. Use a concise topic sentence, then contrast with linking words and give specific examples of when you scan versus read in detail.

Example: It depends on the purpose. If the text is important for my job or understanding complex ideas, I read it in detail to fully comprehend it. On the other hand, I scan articles or emails when I only need a quick overview.

× Usually I prefer book reading in on paper, but not all of novels or non fiction books are presented in the paper.

✓ Usually I prefer reading books on paper, but not all novels or non-fiction books are available in print.

The phrase 'book reading in on paper' mixes prepositions and word order; correct idiom is 'reading books on paper'. 'Not all of novels' is incorrect; use 'not all novels'. 'Presented in the paper' is awkward for availability; use 'available in print'. Use hyphen in 'non-fiction'. Improve word order and preposition choice.

× So uh, I have to read them in on electric devices.

✓ So I have to read them on electronic devices.

Use the preposition 'on' with devices. 'In on' is incorrect. 'Electric devices' is less common than 'electronic devices' for reading; also remove filler 'uh' for clarity.

× Usually I read more carefully, uh, some kind of agreements like, uh, personal data usage agreements or stuff like that.

✓ Usually I read certain documents more carefully, such as personal data usage agreements or similar items.

The original is wordy and has awkward collocations. 'Some kind of agreements' is vague; 'certain documents' fits better. Maintain present tense but improve noun choice and structure for natural English.

× Or when it related to my, uh, job issues, for example, some technical resources or, uh, scientific, uh, articles.

✓ Or when it relates to my job, for example technical resources or scientific articles.

Verb form must agree: use 'relates' (present tense) with 'it'/'when'. Remove 'issues' after 'job' for natural phrasing. Eliminate filler words and unnecessary commas. Use 'technical resources' without 'some' for clarity.

× It's all depends on purpose of reading.

✓ It all depends on the purpose of reading.

Correct structure is 'It depends' or 'It all depends'. Also include the definite article 'the' before 'purpose of reading'. Remove contraction 'It's all depends' which mixes forms.

× If I need to read something related from my job or some something really important to me.

✓ If I need to read something related to my job or something really important to me.

Use the preposition 'related to' (not 'related from'). Remove duplicate 'some something'. Keep present tense and correct preposition.

× I prefer uh deep reading for understanding the meaning of thoughts are printed on my on paper or uh, digital book.

✓ I prefer deep reading to understand the meaning of the ideas printed on paper or in a digital book.

Use 'prefer ... to' + infinitive or 'prefer deep reading to understand'. 'Thoughts are printed on my on paper' has wrong word order; 'ideas printed on paper' is natural. Use 'in a digital book' rather than 'on'. Remove extra 'my'.

× But when I just need to take something somet. Brief, I read briefly.

✓ But when I just need to get a brief overview, I read briefly.

Original has typo 'somet.' and awkward phrasing 'take something'. 'Get a brief overview' is idiomatic. Maintain contrast with 'but' and keep present tense.