Part 1
Examiner
Do you like reading?
Candidate
Yes, I like her reading a book on the Amazon Books or other Japanese traditional apps on the Internet because I live in the Australia right now.
Examiner
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Candidate
I prefer the on the screen because it's screen if I have a tablet so I can read the a lot of various type of the book what I want.
Examiner
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Candidate
If I want to interesting the this sentence on the book, I really careful to reading this sentence and if I don't really interesting this book, I just look around the book.
Examiner
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Candidate
It depends on the situation. If I want to read carefully I read a detail everything, but if I not interesting at this page, I just scanning the this page and then go to move to the next page.
Do you like reading?
Score: 42.0Suggestion: Be direct and natural: start with a clear topic sentence saying whether you like reading, then give 1–2 specific reasons. Correct grammar (pronouns, articles, prepositions) and avoid unnecessary details. Keep to 2–3 sentences and use linking words like “because” or “and” correctly.
Example: Yes, I enjoy reading. I often read e-books on Amazon or Japanese reading apps because I like exploring contemporary Japanese fiction, and living in Australia makes online apps convenient for me.
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Score: 48.0Suggestion: Give a clear direct answer then support it with specific reasons and a linking word. Fix grammar (remove extra articles, correct word order) and be concise. Mention 1–2 concrete benefits of screen reading.
Example: I prefer reading on a screen because I use a tablet. It lets me carry many books, adjust the font size for comfort, and quickly search for words or notes.
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Score: 46.0Suggestion: Answer with a clear contrast using linking words like “when” and “if.” Use correct verbs and phrase order, and give a specific example of what makes you read carefully versus skim. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.
Example: I read carefully when a passage is interesting or important, for example when learning new vocabulary or studying for an exam. If the text is boring or irrelevant, I usually skim to get the main idea and move on.
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: Give a concise answer with a clear topic sentence and a brief explanation using linking words like “if” and “but.” Correct verb forms and articles, and provide a short example of each mode.
Example: It depends: I prefer detailed reading when I need to understand or remember information, such as studying. But if I’m browsing or the content is uninteresting, I scan the page to find key points and continue.
× Yes, I like her reading a book on the Amazon Books or other Japanese traditional apps on the Internet because I live in the Australia right now.
✓ Yes, I like reading books on Amazon or other Japanese apps on the Internet because I live in Australia right now.
The original sentence uses incorrect pronoun 'her' before 'reading' and incorrect article 'the' before 'Australia'. Remove 'her' to use the gerund 'reading' as the object of 'like'. Use 'books' plural and 'Amazon' (not 'Amazon Books') for clarity. Do not use 'the' with most country names like Australia. Also simplify 'on the Internet' and 'apps' phrasing for natural English.
× I prefer the on the screen because it's screen if I have a tablet so I can read the a lot of various type of the book what I want.
✓ I prefer reading on a screen because if I have a tablet I can read many different types of books that I want.
Remove extra articles and fix quantifiers: use 'a screen' or 'on screen' and 'many different types of books' rather than 'a lot of various type of the book'. Replace 'what I want' with 'that I want' for relative clause. Ensure articles and quantifiers agree with countable nouns.
× If I want to interesting the this sentence on the book, I really careful to reading this sentence and if I don't really interesting this book, I just look around the book.
✓ If I find a sentence in a book interesting, I read it carefully, and if I am not interested in a book, I just skim through it.
Use correct adjective forms: 'interesting' describes the sentence's effect, but the speaker should use 'find ... interesting' or use 'interested' to describe themselves. Use adverb 'carefully' not 'careful'. Replace unidiomatic 'look around the book' with 'skim through it'. Adjust verb forms and articles for natural expression.
× If I want to read carefully I read a detail everything, but if I not interesting at this page, I just scanning the this page and then go to move to the next page.
✓ If I want to read carefully, I read everything in detail, but if I am not interested in a page, I just scan that page and then move on to the next one.
Use correct present tense forms: 'read everything in detail' instead of 'read a detail everything'. Use 'am not interested' rather than 'not interesting'. Use base verb 'scan' rather than 'scanning' in this construction, and 'move on to the next one' is idiomatic. Fix articles and word order.