Reading— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct, concise, and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence saying whether you like reading, then give one or two specific supporting details using correct verb forms and linking words. Avoid irrelevant phrases (e.g. mentioning a person unless necessary).

Example: Yes, I enjoy reading, but I mostly read online rather than in libraries or bookstores. For example, I usually search for articles and e-books on websites because it is faster and more convenient.

Suggestion: Answer directly first, then give clear, specific reasons linked with connectors (because, so, therefore). Use correct vocabulary (e.g. 'carry', 'access') and correct grammar for comparison. Keep to 2–4 sentences.

Example: I prefer reading on a screen because digital books are easier to carry and I can access many titles anywhere. Also, e-readers and apps let me adjust the font size, which makes reading more comfortable.

Suggestion: Clarify the question and structure your response: state one clear situation when you read carefully and one when you do not. Use correct verbs and precise vocabulary (e.g. 'study', 'proofread', 'skim') and link ideas with words like 'when' and 'while'.

Example: I need to read carefully when I study for exams or when I proofread my own writing because I must understand details and spot mistakes. On the other hand, I skim articles or news when I only want the main idea and don't have time for a deep read.

Suggestion: Give a direct preference and one clear reason using correct phrasing. Use linking words such as 'because' or 'however' and avoid repetition. Explain briefly why detailed reading may be stressful or when you would do it.

Example: I prefer scanning rather than detailed reading because scanning helps me get the main points quickly and it reduces stress. However, I do detailed reading when I need to learn or analyse something deeply, such as for a report.

× Ask Catherine. Read that book.

✓ Ask Catherine to read that book.

The original is missing the infinitive marker 'to' after 'ask' when requesting someone to perform an action. Use 'ask someone to do something' for indirect commands. Suggestion: 'Ask Catherine to read that book.'

× Because I'm not get accustomed to going to the library or a bookstore rather than reading a book, I usually search in for any articles on the website.

✓ Because I'm not accustomed to going to the library or a bookstore and prefer reading online, I usually search for articles on websites.

Errors: 'not get accustomed' mixes forms; correct is 'not accustomed' or 'do not get used to'. 'Rather than' is used incorrectly; use 'and prefer' here. 'search in for' is wrong; correct preposition is 'search for' or 'look for'. Also 'any articles on the website' is vague; use 'articles on websites.' Suggestion: simplify and use correct participle and prepositions.

× Other flights read on the screen because paper books are thick and too heavy to bring out, but in the screen enables me to ring anywhere I wish and easily accessible for many books.

✓ Other people read on screens because paper books are thick and too heavy to carry, but screens enable me to read anywhere I wish and give easy access to many books.

Multiple problems: 'Other flights' is likely 'other people' (word choice). 'Read' should agree with plural subject 'people' (they read — it's okay), but sentence structure and verbs are incorrect. 'bring out' should be 'carry'. 'in the screen enables me to ring' is ungrammatical; correct form 'screens enable me to read' and 'easily accessible' must be rephrased to 'give easy access.' Suggestion: use plural noun 'people', correct verbs and phrase 'enable someone to do something.'

× When I need to reboot carefully, someone wants me to think about the story of the book.

✓ When I need to read carefully, I want to think about the story of the book.

'reboot' is incorrect word choice; context requires 'read'. 'someone wants me' is incorrect perspective; should be 'I want' or 'I need' depending on meaning. Suggestion: use correct verb 'read' and keep the subject consistent: 'I want to think about the story.'

× I'm not experiencing such a thing in my past that.

✓ I have not experienced such a thing in my past.

Tense and aspect are wrong: 'I'm not experiencing' (present continuous) conflicts with 'in my past'. Use present perfect 'have not experienced' to describe past experience up to now. Also word order 'in my past that' is incorrect. Suggestion: use 'have not experienced such a thing'.

× Upper file scanning because I think reading books is a kind of reducing stress if I if I'm focusing on reading books carefully and read detail one which makes me very stressed so I.

✓ I prefer scanning because I think detailed, careful reading can increase my stress, while scanning helps me relax.

The original is fragmented and repetitive ('if I if I'm', 'read detail one'). 'Upper file' is unclear; context suggests 'I prefer scanning'. The sentence lacks a main verb and has poor clause connections. Suggestion: simplify and contrast scanning vs detailed reading using clear clauses and correct verb forms.