Reading— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be clearer and more grammatical. Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid hesitations and repetition, and provide one or two specific reasons or examples. Use linking words (because, so) correctly and limit to 2–4 sentences.

Example: Yes, I enjoy reading because it helps me relax and focus. For example, when I read fiction before bed I feel calmer and sleep better, and when I read academic articles I can concentrate more easily on my studies.

Suggestion: Reduce filler words and give a clear reason. State preference first, then give one or two specific, coherent reasons using linking words (because, for example). Correct basic grammar (I found out, it is easier). Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Example: I prefer reading on a screen because I find it more convenient and adjustable. For example, I can increase font size and carry many books on my tablet, so I read more often.

Suggestion: Organize the answer with a clear contrast: say when careful reading is necessary and when skimming is acceptable. Use precise vocabulary (academic materials, skim quickly) and avoid unclear phrases. Give one concrete example for each case and use linking words (but, however).

Example: I need to read carefully when studying for university exams or reviewing research articles because I must understand details and evidence. However, when I read business news or emails I often skim them quickly to get the main points.

Suggestion: Clarify the preference (scanning or detailed) and give concise reasons with a linking word. Use correct vocabulary (detailed reading, skim/scan) and avoid vague phrases. Provide a brief example of when you use detailed reading.

Example: I prefer detailed reading because I like to fully understand the material. For instance, when I study course texts I read carefully and take notes so I can remember and reflect on the ideas.

× Yes I do 'cause when I'm writing my mind in is in calm.

✓ Yes, I do, because when I write, my mind is calm.

Original uses incorrect verb form and word order: 'writing my mind in is in calm' is ungrammatical and uses wrong pronoun/possession structure. Use simple present 'write' to match habitual action and correct subject-verb order 'my mind is calm'. Also replace informal 'cause' with 'because' in formal answers.

× I'm trying to be in peace to realize what I'm reading and it gives me peace.

✓ I try to be peaceful so I can understand what I read, and it gives me peace.

Mixed progressive and stative verbs: 'I'm trying to be in peace to realize what I'm reading' is awkward. Use simple present 'I try' for habitual actions and use 'understand' instead of 'realize' for comprehension. 'Be peaceful' is a natural adjective phrase.

× So I always trying to read when I have opportunity.

✓ So I always try to read when I have the opportunity.

Missing auxiliary for present continuous: 'I always trying' should be 'I always try' (simple present for habits) or 'I am always trying' with auxiliary. Also include the definite article 'the' with 'opportunity'.

× Uh, some years ago I uh, find out that I prefer reading on a screen.

✓ Some years ago I found out that I prefer reading on a screen.

Tense inconsistency: 'some years ago' requires past tense 'found out' not present 'find out'. The preference can remain in present 'prefer'.

× I don't know why, uh, but I prefer umm, I, I think umm, the reason is uh, that uh, on the screen, umm, origin is easily for me.

✓ I don't know why, but I think the reason is that reading on a screen is easier for me.

'Origin is easily for me' is nonsensical and uses wrong word forms. Replace 'origin' with 'reading' and use adjective 'easier' not adverb 'easily'. Also streamline repetition and fillers.

× When I'm reading university's data or something for my subject, I have to read carefully and when I'm writing like about business, about finance and psychology, I have opportunity to read in married and to be quickly sometimes.

✓ When I'm reading university data or material for my subject, I have to read carefully, but when I'm writing about business, finance, or psychology, I sometimes read quickly.

Multiple errors: 'university's data' should be 'university data' or 'university material' (avoid possessive). 'I have opportunity to read in married' is ungrammatical — probably meant 'I have the opportunity to read more quickly' or 'I sometimes read quickly'. Removed incorrect preposition 'in' and incorrect word 'married'. Adjusted word order and articles.

× I prefer to tell reading 'cause when I'm reading and when I'm spending my time, I'm always trying to get it fully.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because when I'm reading and spending my time, I always try to understand it fully.

'Tell reading' is incorrect — should be 'detailed reading' or 'close reading'. 'Get it fully' is unnatural; use 'understand it fully'. Also 'trying' to 'try' for habitual action is better.

× So I'm always trying to read it steeply, to think about it's clearly and that's it.

✓ So I always try to read it thoroughly and think about it clearly.

'Read it steeply' is incorrect word choice; use 'thoroughly'. 'Think about it's clearly' has wrong pronoun and adverb placement — should be 'think about it clearly'. Use simple present 'try' for habitual actions.