Reading— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答已触及主要观点并提供原因，但表达冗长且有语法和逻辑不够清晰的问题。建议：1) 开头用一句清晰的主题句直接回答（肯定或否定）。2) 用一到两句具体原因或例子支持观点，避免重复词汇（如“reading”重复过多）。3) 简化句子结构，注意时态与搭配（例如“post graduate student”应为“postgraduate student”；“feel stressed in reading”可改为“find reading stressful recently”）。4) 控制在最多5句内，更自然地连接句子。

Example: Yes, I enjoy reading because it helps me learn new things and explore different stories, both real and fictional. However, since starting my postgraduate studies, I have found reading more stressful because I need to read large volumes of academic papers under tight deadlines.

Suggestion: 回答意思明确且比较了两种形式，但用词和逻辑有些混乱（例如“prefer to read the paper on a screen”不太自然）。建议：1) 先给出直接偏好。2) 用连接词（however, when）清楚区分两种情况。3) 用更贴切的词汇，如“on paper”与“on a screen”或“printed”与“digital”。4) 提供一两个具体原因支持选择，控制句子长度。

Example: I usually prefer reading on a screen because it's more convenient and allows me to search and skim quickly. However, if I need to study a paper in depth, I prefer a printed copy because it's easier to annotate and concentrate.

Suggestion: 回答有逻辑但有语法和表述不完整的问题（结尾不完整“rather than just”）。建议：1) 用一到两句直接说明何时需要仔细阅读，随后用连接词给具体原因或例子。2) 修正不完整或不自然的短语（如“highly connected with”可改为“directly relevant to”）。3) 增加具体细节说明哪些内容（方法、数据）需要仔细阅读。

Example: It depends on how relevant a paper is to my research. If a paper is directly relevant—especially the methodology and data sections—I read it carefully to understand the methods and results; if it's only tangential, I usually just skim for the main points.

Suggestion: 回答存在用词不当和逻辑混乱（如“understand these people throughout life”与上下文不相关），影响表达清晰性。建议：1) 明确直接回答偏好并解释原因。2) 用恰当词汇描述阅读对象（如“papers”或“texts”而非“people”）。3) 使用连接词（although, however）时注意位置，避免重复。4) 给出具体情境说明何时会进行快速浏览（scanning）。

Example: I generally prefer detailed reading because it helps me fully understand the content and nuances of a text, even though it takes more time. However, if I'm short on time or only need the main ideas, I will scan the paper to pick out key points.

× Yes, I do like reading because I can learn something new and experience a different story, both real and fictional in reading. But after becoming a post graduate student, I feel stressed in reading.

✓ Yes, I do like reading because I can learn something new and experience different stories, both real and fictional. But after becoming a postgraduate student, I feel stressed about reading.

问题类型：动名词/动词-ing 用法错误与介词搭配不当。原句中“experience a different story, both real and fictional in reading”结构混乱，‘in reading’位置不当且不必要；应使用复数“stories”表示泛指多种故事。另“stressed in reading”搭配不正确，应使用介词“about”或短语“stressed by reading”。建议：把冗余或位置不当的“in reading”去掉或改为合适的介词；注意可数名词的单复数。

× Actually, I prefer to read the paper on a screen because it is convenient to understand the content of a paper smoothly and quickly. However, if I need to know the paper throughout, I would choose a printed one.

✓ Actually, I prefer to read papers on a screen because it is convenient to understand the content of a paper smoothly and quickly. However, if I need to read a paper thoroughly, I would choose a printed one.

问题类型：介词与动词搭配错误及冠词使用不当。原句“prefer to read the paper on a screen”中“the paper”不应特指，改为复数“papers”或用不定冠词；此外“know the paper throughout”中‘know…throughout’搭配错误，应为“read…thoroughly”。建议：使用正确动词与副词/介词短语搭配（read thoroughly），并注意冠词或复数形式的选择。

× Actually, it depends on how relevant the paper is to my research. If it is highly connected with my research, especially on the part of methodology and data, I will read it carefully rather than just.

✓ Actually, it depends on how relevant the paper is to my research. If it is highly related to my research, especially in the parts about methodology and data, I will read it carefully rather than just skimming it.

问题类型：现在时使用与搭配问题及句子结构不完整。原句“highly connected with my research”搭配生硬，常用“related to”；“especially on the part of methodology and data”应改为“in the parts about methodology and data”；句尾“rather than just.”不完整，应补全对比内容如“rather than just skimming it”。建议：使用习惯搭配（related to, in the parts about），并保证比较结构完整。

× I prefer detailed reading because it is an important way to understand these people throughout life, including their details. Although time consuming, however, I prefer scanning these papers if I just need to know their main ideas.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because it is an important way to understand these papers thoroughly, including their details. Although it is time-consuming, I prefer scanning papers if I only need to know their main ideas.

问题类型：动名词/现在分词形式与词汇搭配问题。原句“understand these people throughout life”与语境不符，应为“papers”而非“people”，并且“throughout life”不合适，改为“thoroughly”；“Although time consuming, however,”中应使用完整短语“Although it is time-consuming”且不需要同时使用Although和however（冗余）。建议：注意词汇的准确性（papers vs people）、使用完整的现在分词结构（it is time-consuming），并避免冗余连词。