Reading— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the response more natural and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting reasons. Avoid awkward phrases like “not a friend of reading” and unnecessary words. Use linking words such as “however” or “but” to connect ideas. Also correct grammar errors: say “I’m not fond of reading” or “I don’t read often,” and “because it helps me gain knowledge.”

Example: I’m not very fond of reading, but I do read occasionally because it helps me learn new things. For example, I read non-fiction books about history once a year to improve my general knowledge.

Suggestion: Make the answer more concise and correct grammar. Begin with a direct topic sentence. Use one clear reason and a brief example. Replace awkward phrases like “find out” and avoid repetition of “on the paper.”

Example: I prefer reading on paper because it helps me remember new vocabulary — I can underline words and write translations in the margins, which makes revision easier.

Suggestion: Organize the response with a clear topic sentence then specific details. Correct article and number expressions (“an important message,” “details,” “one by one”). Use linking words such as “for example” or “however” to contrast when careful reading is necessary and when it is not. Mention a brief example of casual reading to show contrast.

Example: I need to read carefully when I receive important messages, such as emails from my boss, because I don’t want to miss any details. However, for casual things like social media posts I usually just skim them quickly.

Suggestion: Correct and clarify the opening phrase — say “it depends on the purpose.” Provide two contrasting, specific examples using linking words like “for instance” and correct grammar (“an important message,” “read word by word,” “I just scan”). Keep it concise and avoid repeating “for example.”

Example: It depends on the purpose: for instance, I read word by word when it’s an important message to avoid mistakes, but I usually scan newspapers or magazines to get the main idea quickly.

× To be honest I'm not a friend of reading, but once in a while I will read a book because of can be to gain my knowledge.

✓ To be honest, I'm not a friend of reading, but once in a while I read a book because it can help me gain knowledge.

Errors: 'friend of reading' is colloquial but acceptable; main problems match preposition and verb usage: 'because of can be to gain my knowledge' is ungrammatical. Replace with 'because it can help me gain knowledge.' Suggestion: use 'because' + clause (subject + verb) or 'because of' + noun. Remove unnecessary articles and infinitive forms and use simple present for habitual action.

× I definitely prefer to read on paper because I find out that reading on the paper easy for me to memorize vocabulary because I can write down the new words on the paper.

✓ I definitely prefer to read on paper because I find reading on paper easier for me to memorize vocabulary since I can write down new words on the page.

Errors: extra prepositions/articles: 'on the paper' and 'on the paper easy' are incorrect. Use 'on paper' (general medium) and 'on the page' or 'on paper'. Also comparative form 'easier' required. Use 'since' or 'because' to link reasons. Remove redundant 'the' before 'vocabulary' and 'new words'.

× Especially when I receive a important message from my boss or someone else because I don't want to miss a details of the information.

✓ Especially when I receive an important message from my boss or someone else, because I don't want to miss any details of the information.

Errors: 'a important' should be 'an important' (vowel sound article). 'a details' is wrong because 'details' is plural and needs no 'a' or should be 'a detail' if singular. Use 'any details' for negative context. Also include comma and keep consistent noun number.

× So every time I receive the important message I will read carefully 1 by 1.

✓ So every time I receive an important message, I read it carefully, one by one.

Errors: 'read carefully 1 by 1' is awkward. For habitual actions use simple present 'I read'. Also include object 'it'. Replace numeric '1 by 1' with words 'one by one'. Add article 'an' before 'important message'.

× To be honest, it depends on what kind of citizen.

✓ To be honest, it depends on what kind of text it is.

Original sentence misuses 'citizen' where 'text' or 'material' is intended. This is a vocabulary/pronoun/reference error: 'what kind of' should refer to the item being read. Suggest using 'text', 'document', or 'material' to clarify meaning.

× For example, if a important message I will read the word 1 by 1 because I don't want to miss any details.

✓ For example, if I receive an important message, I will read the words one by one because I don't want to miss any details.

Errors: 'a important' -> 'an important'; sentence missing verb phrase 'I receive' (sentence structure). 'the word 1 by 1' should be 'the words one by one' or 'words one by one'. Use plural 'words' and spell out 'one by one' in formal speech.

× For example like a newspaper or the magazine, I just scanning and read the content.

✓ For example, with a newspaper or a magazine, I just scan and read the content.

Errors: 'For example like' is redundant; use 'For example' or 'Like'. 'the magazine' should be 'a magazine' for general reference. 'I just scanning and read' mixes forms; use parallel verbs: 'I just scan and read' (base form) or 'I just scan the content and read selectively.'