Reading— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Chú ý ngữ pháp, phát âm và diễn đạt tự nhiên hơn. Cần bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp (Yes/No) rồi thêm thông tin bổ trợ ngắn gọn (tần suất, thời lượng, lý do). Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như “To be honestly” (nên là “To be honest”), “I feel unwind” (nên là “I feel relaxed”), và “reading help me have interest a day” (không rõ nghĩa — nên cụ thể như “it makes my day more interesting”). Giữ tối đa 3-4 câu và dùng liên từ đơn giản khi cần.

Example: Yes, I do. I read once or twice a day for about 30 minutes because it helps me relax. Reading also makes my day more interesting and gives me new ideas.

Suggestion: Cải thiện cấu trúc câu và dùng từ vựng chính xác. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như “have own interest” (nên là “have their own advantages”) và “I like read” (nên là “I prefer reading”). Nên giải thích ngắn gọn với 1-2 lý do cụ thể, dùng liên từ như “because” hoặc “since”.

Example: I prefer reading on a screen because it is more convenient and usually cheaper. For example, I can access many articles and e-books online without buying physical copies.

Suggestion: Cần trả lời trực tiếp cho cả hai phần của câu hỏi và làm rõ ý. Sửa ngữ pháp: “I need to read carefully when I am studying or when I need to check information.” Tránh câu không hoàn chỉnh như phần hai của học sinh. Giải thích ngắn gọn khi không cần đọc kỹ và dùng ví dụ cụ thể. Giữ 2-3 câu. (Vietnamese)

Example: I need to read carefully when I'm studying or checking important information, such as instructions or official documents. However, I don't read as carefully when I skim social media or general news because I'm just looking for the main idea.

Suggestion: Cần tránh trả lời ngắn và mơ hồ. Hãy đưa ra một lựa chọn rõ ràng (scanning hoặc detailed reading) và giải thích lý do ngắn gọn với một ví dụ. Sử dụng cấu trúc: câu chủ đề + lý do + ví dụ nếu cần. (Vietnamese)

Example: I prefer scanning when I need to find information quickly, such as checking an email for a date. But for study or complex texts, I choose detailed reading to fully understand the content.

× To be honestly, I love reading a lot.

✓ To be honest, I love reading a lot.

'To be honestly' is incorrect because the fixed phrase is 'to be honest' (an expression meaning 'frankly'). 'Honestly' is an adverb; the correct idiom uses the adjective-like expression 'to be honest'. Use 'to be honest' to introduce a personal opinion.

× I often read once or twice a day around 30 minutes.

✓ I often read once or twice a day for around 30 minutes.

Missing preposition 'for' before a duration. Use 'for' to indicate length of time ('for around 30 minutes'). Also keep present simple 'read' for habitual action.

× When reading, I feel unwind and reading help me have interest a day.

✓ When I read, I feel relaxed, and reading helps me enjoy the day.

'Feel unwind' is ungrammatical; use adjective 'relaxed'. Also need subject-verb agreement: 'reading helps' (singular subject). 'Have interest a day' is incorrect phrase; use 'enjoy the day' or 'be interested during the day'. The sentence was restructured for natural English.

× Both read on paper and on a screen have own interest.

✓ Both reading on paper and reading on a screen have their own appeal.

Original lacks gerunds and possessive pronoun. Use gerunds 'reading' to act as nouns and 'their own' to show possession. 'Appeal' is more natural than 'interest' in this context.

× For me I like read on a screen better because when read on screen it is convenient and cheap.

✓ For me, I prefer reading on a screen because it is convenient and cheap.

Use 'prefer' instead of 'like ... better' and use gerund 'reading'. Omit repeated 'on screen' and use pronoun 'it' to refer to reading on a screen. Maintain present simple for preference.

× I don't need to have money to buy book.

✓ I don't need to spend money to buy books.

'Buy book' needs plural or an article: 'buy books' or 'buy a book'. 'Have money to buy book' is unnatural; use 'spend money' or 'pay for books'. Also plural 'books' fits general meaning.

× I need to read carefully when I am studying or I need to show an information.

✓ I need to read carefully when I am studying or when I need to present information.

'Show an information' is incorrect: 'information' is uncountable and does not take 'an'. Use verbs like 'present' or 'show' with 'information' (no article). Added 'when' for parallel structure.

× But when I am online I usually read for environment and.

✓ But when I am online I usually read to get an overview.

Original 'read for environment and' is incomplete and unclear. Likely intended 'read for entertainment' or 'read to get an overview'. Suggest 'to get an overview' for scanning online; if meant entertainment, use 'for entertainment'. Fixed sentence to be complete and grammatical.

× I don't know.

✓ I don't know; it depends on the situation.

Single short reply is acceptable but can be improved by adding context. 'I don't know' is grammatical, but adding 'it depends on the situation' makes the answer fuller and relevant to the question about preferring scanning or detailed reading.