Part 1
Examiner
Do you like reading?
Candidate
Yes, I like reading because this is a way to spend my free time. As a high school students, I sometimes have some spare times and I don't know what to do about, so I will choose to read a book in order to gain more knowledge and make me relax.
Examiner
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Candidate
It depends and I like read on paper when do a exam. As a student, I think reading on papers allows me to highlight some keyword so that I will not be careless and I can secure a higher score.
Examiner
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Candidate
I prefer to read carefully when I'm having an exam. For example, when I'm taking history exams, I read every single word since sometime the questions can very tricky and once you read somewhere wrong you will misunderstand the whole questions and fail the exam.
Examiner
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Candidate
I personally prefer detailed reading. You know, this kind of reading method can help me prevent from ignoring some important word like when I'm having exam I focus on the and or or.
Do you like reading?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答需要更直接并且句子更简洁,注意语法和单复数(如 high school student, spare time),避免重复表达;增加一两点具体细节(类型或最近读过的书)并使用连接词使回答更连贯。
Example: Yes, I enjoy reading in my free time. I often read historical novels and science articles because they help me relax and learn new things. For example, last month I finished a biography of Winston Churchill which gave me new insights into leadership.
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Score: 68.0Suggestion: 需要直接给出偏好并改进语法(like to read on paper when I take exams, reading on paper allows me to highlight keywords),用连接词解释原因並给出具体例子(例如注记或标注)。
Example: I usually prefer reading on paper, especially during exams, because I can highlight and make notes easily. For instance, when revising for tests I underline key dates and facts, which helps me remember them better.
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Score: 72.0Suggestion: 回答清楚且有例子,但需修正语法(sometimes, can be very tricky),可补充何时可以略读並用连接词对比,使结构更完整。
Example: I need to read carefully during exams, especially subjects like history where questions can be tricky. In contrast, I skim articles or news when I just want a general idea and don't need every detail.
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 表达需更自然并修正语法和用词(prevent from → prevent, focus on words like 'and' or 'or'),避免口语填充词(You know),并说明何时用快速浏览以显示能力的对比。
Example: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me notice small but important words like 'and' or 'or' that can change meaning. However, I use scanning when I need to find specific information quickly, such as a name or date in an article.
× As a high school students, I sometimes have some spare times and I don't know what to do about, so I will choose to read a book in order to gain more knowledge and make me relax.
✓ As a high school student, I sometimes have some spare time and I don't know what to do, so I choose to read a book in order to gain more knowledge and relax.
问题:名词单数/复数和固定搭配使用错误。说明:1) “students” 与不定冠词/单一身份不匹配,应为单数 student。2) “spare times” 常用短语是 spare time(不可数),不能用复数。3) “don't know what to do about” 表达不完整,去掉 about 更自然。4) “make me relax” 用法不当,改为不带宾语的动词短语 relax 或使役结构 “help me relax”。建议:注意可数与不可数名词的用法,确定说话者身份单复数一致;使用常见固定搭配(spare time);句中动词时态和表达保持一致,避免多余介词。
× It depends and I like read on paper when do a exam.
✓ It depends, and I like to read on paper when I do an exam.
问题:动词形式和冠词错误。说明:1) “like read” 应为 like to read 或 like reading;2) “do a exam” 中 exam 以元音音素开头时用不定冠词 an(an exam),且通常说 take an exam 或 sit an exam,比 do an exam 更常用。建议:使用正确的动词搭配(like to read / like reading),并使用正确冠词(an)以及常见动词搭配(take an exam)。
× As a student, I think reading on papers allows me to highlight some keyword so that I will not be careless and I can secure a higher score.
✓ As a student, I think reading on paper allows me to highlight some keywords so that I will not be careless and I can secure a higher score.
问题:名词单复数与不可数名词使用错误。说明:1) “reading on papers” 中 paper 作材质时通常用不可数形式 reading on paper;2) “some keyword” 应为复数 keywords 或用 a keyword,根据上下文需复数。建议:注意材料名词用不可数形式(paper),以及可数名词关键词用复数(keywords)。
× I prefer to read carefully when I'm having an exam.
✓ I prefer to read carefully when I'm taking an exam.
问题:现在时/动词搭配不当。说明:1) “having an exam” 在英语中不如 “taking an exam” 常用;2) 时态上 prefer 描述一般习惯,使用一般现在时搭配动作短语更自然。建议:用常见搭配 take an exam,并保持一般现在时描述习惯性行为。
× For example, when I'm taking history exams, I read every single word since sometime the questions can very tricky and once you read somewhere wrong you will misunderstand the whole questions and fail the exam.
✓ For example, when I'm taking history exams, I read every single word because sometimes the questions can be very tricky, and if you read something wrong you will misunderstand the whole question and fail the exam.
问题:时态、词形和连词使用错误。说明:1) “sometime” 应为副词 sometimes;2) “can very tricky” 缺少系动词 be,改为 can be very tricky;3) “once you read somewhere wrong” 用词不当,改为 if you read something wrong;4) “whole questions” 应根据上下文改为 singular question(指题目整体)。建议:注意副词 forms(sometimes)、完整谓语结构(can be),条件句用 if 或 once 并搭配合适代词 something,注意 questions/question 单复数一致。
× I personally prefer detailed reading. You know, this kind of reading method can help me prevent from ignoring some important word like when I'm having exam I focus on the and or or.
✓ I personally prefer detailed reading. You know, this kind of reading method can help me avoid ignoring some important words, like when I'm taking an exam I focus on 'and' or 'or'.
问题:数量词、介词和单复数错误以及表达不清。说明:1) “prevent from ignoring” 表达应为 prevent someone from doing 或更自然用 avoid ignoring;2) “some important word” 应为复数 important words;3) “when I'm having exam” 改为 taking an exam;4) 末尾想表达关注连词 and/or,应写清楚 'and' or 'or'。建议:使用正确动词短语(avoid ignoring 或 prevent sb from doing sth)、注意可数名词复数形式、使用常见搭配 take an exam,并用引号或明确词汇表述连词。