Walking— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be clear and accurate: use correct verbs (walk, not work), avoid repetition, keep to 2–3 concise sentences, and add a brief reason with a linking word. Also correct grammar (prevent weight gain; reduce weight) and avoid irrelevant seasonal comment unless explained.

Example: Yes, I walk quite a lot because it helps me stay fit and prevents weight gain. For example, I try to walk thirty minutes each day to keep my energy up.

Suggestion: Answer directly with a clear past-tense statement, reduce hesitations and repetitions, and give one specific supporting detail using a linking word (e.g., because, so). Correct phrasing: 'when I was a child' and avoid contradicting 'walk' vs 'play'.

Example: Yes, I did when I was a child, because we spent most afternoons playing outside with friends. As a result, we ran and explored the neighbourhood instead of going for formal walks.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence with 2 specific reasons, use linking words (for example, because) and avoid unclear or incorrect phrases ('go sleep with others'). Be concise and include concrete details (fresh air, relaxation, exercise).

Example: People like walking in parks because they can relax in fresh air and enjoy green scenery. For example, families often go there to chat and children play, while others walk for light exercise or stress relief.

Suggestion: Start with a clear conditional sentence and specify a realistic location. Avoid vague ideas about 'society' and correct grammar (amenities). Use linking words to explain why (because, so) and give one specific reason related to scenery, safety, or convenience.

Example: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk along a coastal promenade because the sea view is peaceful and the route is safe and well maintained. That would make the walk more enjoyable and relaxing.

Suggestion: Answer in past tense with a clear location and a brief reason. Reduce hesitations and repetition, use linking words (so, because) and give a specific detail about the route (distance, scenery).

Example: Recently I walked around the large parking area in front of my apartment because it is convenient and safe. The route takes about twenty minutes and I often do several laps for exercise.

× Yes, I love to work a lot because I don't want my body gain weight and to reduce weight walking is the best solution.

✓ Yes, I love to walk a lot because I don't want my body to gain weight, and walking is the best solution to lose weight.

The student used 'work' instead of 'walk' (word choice) and omitted 'to' before 'gain' (infinitive). Also the phrase 'to reduce weight' is awkward; 'lose weight' is the correct collocation. Maintain present tense and use infinitive 'to gain' after 'want'.

× So in my opinion we should work a lot and summer is the best time to work.

✓ So in my opinion we should walk a lot, and summer is the best time to walk.

The verb 'work' is incorrect for walking; use 'walk'. Also maintain modal 'should' with base verb 'walk' and keep consistent meaning across the sentence.

× Yes, I did when I was child.

✓ Yes, I did when I was a child.

The noun 'child' needs the article 'a' in this context. Also the auxiliary 'did' is fine for emphasis in past simple. Add 'a' for grammatical completeness.

× Uh, we have plenty of time to play outside, so we didn't need to walk, uh, randomly as we, uh, we, as we ran to play with our playmates.

✓ We had plenty of time to play outside, so we did not need to go walking; instead we ran to play with our playmates.

Tense inconsistency: speaker mixes present 'have' with past context. Use past 'had'. 'Didn't need to walk randomly' is awkward; 'did not need to go walking' is clearer. Remove repetitions and clarify sequence: they ran to play.

× I think they love to spend uh, uh, specific, uh, time of the day in the park.

✓ I think they like to spend a specific time of the day in the park.

Use 'like to' or 'love to' consistently; 'spend a specific time of the day' is the correct phrase. Removed filler words and simplified. 'Spend time in the park' is the correct prepositional use.

× Uh, it might be with their friends and family or might be with their neighbor.

✓ It might be with their friends and family or with their neighbors.

Use plural 'neighbors' to match 'friends and family' as a general group, and keep the pronoun 'their'. Also remove duplicated 'might be'.

× Uh, they may want to go sleep with others or having umm, a good.

✓ They may want to relax with others or have a good time.

'Go sleep' is incorrect; use 'sleep' or 'go to sleep' but context implies 'relax'. 'Having a good' is incomplete—complete phrase is 'have a good time'. Use parallel verb forms 'relax' and 'have'.

× If I had the chance of having a long walk, I would prefer.

✓ If I had the chance to take a long walk, I would prefer it.

Use 'chance to' + base verb rather than 'chance of having'. Also 'I would prefer' needs an object or complement—add 'it' or specify what you prefer.

× I would have preferred the society where every amenities and every complex is in the right place and there is a long way to work.

✓ I would prefer a community where every amenity and every complex is in the right place and there are long paths for walking.

Tense shift: keep conditional present 'would prefer'. 'Society' is better as 'community'. Use singular 'amenity' for 'every amenity'. 'There is' should agree with plural 'paths' -> 'there are'. 'Long way to work' is awkward; 'long paths for walking' clarifies purpose.

× Well, there is a car parking a lot in front of my apartment.

✓ Well, there is a large car park in front of my apartment.

'Car parking a lot' is nonstandard. Use 'car park' or 'parking lot' and an adjective 'large' if intended. 'There is' is fine here but the noun phrase needed correction.

× So I just, uh, walked along the long route and it's, uh, it's quite easy and it, uh, it doesn't take long time to come back to my home so I can, uh, go walk round and round.

✓ So I just walked along the long route; it was quite easy and it didn't take long to get back to my home, so I can walk round and round.

Maintain past tense for the action 'walked' and match 'was' and 'didn't take'. Remove redundant fillers and correct collocations: 'take long' -> 'take long to', 'get back to my home'. For habitual present 'I can walk' is acceptable at the end, but tense consistency suggests describing past experience: change 'can' to 'could' if referring to the past: 'so I could walk round and round.'