Walking— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản và mạch lạc: trả lời trực tiếp, dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sửa thì và cấu trúc (ví dụ: 'I walk a lot' thay vì 'I work a lot'), tránh câu rời rạc. Nên dùng 2–3 câu, thêm chi tiết cụ thể (khi nào, ở đâu, vì sao).

Example: Yes, I walk a lot because I live near the river. I usually walk along the riverbank every evening for about 30 minutes to relax and get some exercise.

Suggestion: Cải thiện hoàn chỉnh câu và diễn đạt ý rõ ràng: dùng cấu trúc đúng (e.g. 'I used to'), sửa từ sai và thêm chi tiết cụ thể; tránh từ không rõ nghĩa ('G and birth'). Viết 2–3 câu: câu chủ đề + chi tiết/cảm nhận.

Example: Yes, I used to go for a walk with my mother every morning in the park. She would point out different plants and birds, which helped me learn to appreciate nature from a young age.

Suggestion: Cải thiện tổ chức ý và từ vựng: trả lời chung trước rồi nêu lý do cụ thể sử dụng liên từ. Sửa ngữ pháp và cụm từ (ví dụ: 'release stress'→'relieve stress'; 'feel tighter' unclear). Dùng 2–3 câu, nêu lợi ích cụ thể (thư giãn, tập thể dục, không khí trong lành).

Example: People walk in parks because it helps them relax and get some exercise. Walking in a green, quiet place can relieve stress and clear the mind.

Suggestion: Làm rõ mục tiêu và cấu trúc câu: bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề 'I would like to...' và giải thích lý do với chi tiết cụ thể. Sửa lỗi từ (e.g. 'refresh air'→'fresh air') và loại bỏ lặp từ. Giữ 2–3 câu logic.

Example: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk along the riverbank to enjoy the city views and breathe fresh air. A long walk there would help me recharge after a busy week.

Suggestion: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và độ chính xác: dùng thì phù hợp (e.g. 'Recently I went for a walk...'), sửa cụm từ không tự nhiên ('during for walk'), làm rõ hoạt động (talking with neighbours, enjoying scenery). Hạn chế từ không trang trọng ('gossip') hoặc giải thích ngữ cảnh. Dùng 2–3 câu rõ ràng.

Example: Recently I went for a walk around my neighborhood. It is a pleasant area where I can chat with neighbours and enjoy the scenery; sometimes we just catch up about daily life.

× I usually do take a walk every day.

✓ I usually take a walk every day.

The auxiliary 'do' is unnecessary in affirmative present simple sentences. Use simple present 'take' with 'usually' to describe habitual actions. Grammar Problem Type ID:6

× Along the riverbank and every more.

✓ I walk along the riverbank every day.

Phrase is unclear and contains redundant words. Combine with previous sentence and use 'every day' to indicate frequency. Grammar Problem Type ID:26

× Used to go for a walk with my mom every morning in the park.

✓ I used to go for a walk with my mom every morning in the park.

The sentence lacks the subject 'I'. 'Used to' expresses a past habitual action and requires a subject. Add 'I' to form a complete sentence. Grammar Problem Type ID:23

× Through that my mom always explained to me the different G and birth so that I learn from appreciate nature early on.

✓ During that time my mom always explained to me about different plants and birds so that I learned to appreciate nature early on.

Original has wrong words ('Through' and 'G and birth') and wrong tense/agreement. Use 'During that time' and correct nouns 'plants and birds', and past tense 'learned' for past habit. Use 'appreciate' with 'to' (learned to appreciate). Grammar Problem Type ID:26

× I like to walk in park every day.

✓ I like to walk in the park every day.

Use the definite article 'the' with 'park' when referring to a specific or general habitual place. Grammar Problem Type ID:17

× After walking I like release relief, stress and take clear my mind.

✓ After walking I like to release stress and clear my mind.

Use infinitive 'to release' and 'to clear' after 'like'. 'Release relief' is incorrect; 'release stress' or 'feel relieved' are correct. 'Clear my mind' is the correct word order. Grammar Problem Type ID:8

× During walking I after that I feel tighter.

✓ After walking I feel more relaxed.

Original is ungrammatical and 'feel tighter' is unnatural. Use 'after walking' and appropriate adjective 'relaxed'. Grammar Problem Type ID:26

× When I have a time, I like go along walk along the riverbank so that I can enjoy the city view and take the refresh air.

✓ When I have time, I like to walk along the riverbank so that I can enjoy the city view and breathe the fresh air.

Do not use 'a' with 'time' in this context. Use infinitive 'to walk' after 'like'. Remove duplicate 'along'. Use 'breathe' for 'take the air' and 'fresh' instead of 'refresh'. Grammar Problem Type ID:22

× It help me take energy after cleaning my my.

✓ It helps me regain energy after cleaning my house.

Subject-verb agreement: 'It helps' (adds 's'). 'Take energy' is unnatural; use 'regain energy'. 'my my' is a typo; likely 'my house'. Grammar Problem Type ID:27

× Recently I went for a walk around my neighborhood.

✓ Recently I went for a walk around my neighborhood.

This sentence is correct as written; past simple 'went' is appropriate for a recent past action. No change needed. Grammar Problem Type ID:5

× It's a nice place during for walk.

✓ It's a nice place for walking.

Incorrect word order and extra word 'during'. Use 'for walking' or 'to walk' to express purpose. Grammar Problem Type ID:26

× I can talk with my neighbor and enjoy the view and sometimes I just gossip with.

✓ I can talk with my neighbor and enjoy the view, and sometimes I just gossip with them.

Add object pronoun 'them' after 'gossip with' to complete the verb phrase. Use comma before 'and' joining clauses. Grammar Problem Type ID:11