Walking— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Focus on directly answering the question, correct vocabulary (walk vs work), grammar (verb forms, articles), and reduce repetition. Keep answer to 2–4 clear sentences: state how often you walk, give one specific reason, and one short example. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example'.

Example: I don't walk very often, but I try to walk for about 30 minutes every day because it helps me feel refreshed and energetic. For example, I recently started going to the gym and combining a short walk before my workout improves my focus during work.

Suggestion: Answer directly about childhood habits, use past tense consistently, avoid filler words, and be specific about frequency and reasons. Limit to 2–4 sentences and use linking words like 'because' and 'for example'.

Example: Yes, I often walked to school when I was a child because many of my friends could not afford transport. For example, I used to walk with classmates every day, which also gave us time to chat before lessons.

Suggestion: Use correct verbs and nouns (walk in parks, not work), be concise and specific about reasons (peace, fresh air, exercise). Organize with a topic sentence plus one or two supporting points using linking words like 'because' and 'for example'.

Example: People like walking in parks because they offer fresh air and a peaceful environment for exercise. For example, many people go to parks in the morning to jog, stretch, or simply relax away from city noise.

Suggestion: Use conditional and future forms correctly ('I would like to'), be specific about location and duration, and avoid repetition. Give one clear sentence stating preference and one supporting detail about why and how long. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so'.

Example: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk in the large park near my house because it is peaceful and green. I usually walk there for an hour or two when I have a break from work or study to relax and clear my mind.

Suggestion: Answer the question directly (say where you went recently), use past tense, be specific about what you did and with whom, and avoid unclear phrases ('oil for work'). Keep to 2–3 concise sentences and include a brief reason or detail.

Example: Recently I went for a walk in the local park. I went with my friend Faria and we talked about many topics while enjoying the greenery, which felt very refreshing.

× Actually I do not work so much, but I try to work almost 30 minutes one a day because it's give me feel refreshed and strength.

✓ Actually I do not walk so much, but I try to walk for almost 30 minutes once a day because it makes me feel refreshed and stronger.

Singular/plural issues and word choice: 'work' should be 'walk' to match the question. 'one a day' is incorrect; use 'once a day'. 'give' must be conjugated to 'makes' to agree with singular subject it. 'feel refreshed and strength' mixes a verb and noun; use adjective 'stronger'. Suggestion: check countable/uncountable forms and use correct verb agreement and collocations.

× For example, recently I started working and go to gym, so it's give me a lot of strength and I actually focus my work.

✓ For example, recently I started working out and going to the gym, so it gives me a lot of strength and helps me focus on my work.

Third person singular verb form: 'give' should be 'gives' to agree with singular subject 'it'. Also verb forms needed: use gerunds 'working out' and 'going'. Add 'the' before 'gym' and 'helps me focus on my work' is the correct collocation.

× So it is it is a very quite good habit that you usually.

✓ So it is a very good habit to have.

Sentence structure and redundancy: 'it is it is' is repeated and 'very quite' is contradictory; choose one ('very' or 'quite'). 'that you usually' is incomplete. Suggest using concise structure 'a very good habit to have'.

× Well, when I was child, I always try to walk, uh, for during my school day because there are a lot of friends do not have sufficient money to use vehicles.

✓ Well, when I was a child, I always tried to walk during my school days because many friends did not have enough money to use vehicles.

Tense and article errors: 'was child' needs article 'a child'. Habit in the past requires past tense 'tried'. 'for during' is redundant; use 'during'. 'there are a lot of friends do not have' is ungrammatical; use 'many friends did not have'. 'sufficient' is fine but 'enough' is more natural here.

× So that's the reason I always try to work with my friends.

✓ So that's the reason I always tried to walk with my friends.

Verb form and word choice: In past context use past tense 'tried'. 'work' is incorrect verb here; 'walk' fits meaning. If intended continuous habit in past, use 'used to walk' or 'always walked'.

× For example, umm, I remember at my past history, uh, that I go to school by foot.

✓ For example, I remember from my past that I went to school on foot.

Tense and preposition: Use past tense 'went'. 'at my past history' is unnatural; use 'from my past' or 'in the past'. Use preposition 'on foot' not 'by foot'.

× Uh, it's a very, uh, very.

✓ Uh, it was a very common routine.

Sentence fragment: 'very, very' is incomplete. Provide a noun to complete idea, e.g., 'a very common routine' or 'a very frequent habit'.

× People love to work in park because it's given natural vibe and also there have no population now as people can easily focus their working and some activities they doing like exercise and other gym activities.

✓ People love to walk in parks because they give a natural vibe, and there is less crowd now so people can easily focus on their activities like exercise and other fitness activities.

Preposition and subject-verb agreement: 'work in park' should be 'walk in parks'. 'it's given natural vibe' incorrect passive; use 'they give a natural vibe' referring to parks (plural). 'there have no population' wrong; 'there is less crowd' or 'there are fewer people'. 'focus their working' should be 'focus on their activities'. 'they doing' needs auxiliary or gerund 'they do' or 'doing' with correct structure.

× So it's a quite natural places people actually love to work and give a refreshment and for example every morning.

✓ So they are quite natural places; people actually love to walk there to get refreshed, for example every morning.

Article and noun agreement: 'a quite natural places' mixes singular article with plural noun; correct to 'quite natural places' or 'a quite natural place'. 'give a refreshment' is odd; use 'get refreshed' or 'feel refreshed'. Also sentence needed punctuation and flow.

× If I had a chance I try to walk long way like in there in for example near in my house there have a big park and but I could not complete the park is one walk because there have several time to spend when I work.

✓ If I had the chance I would try to walk a long way; for example, there is a big park near my house, but I could not always complete a full circuit because I have limited time when I work.

Conditional and tense errors: Conditional second type requires 'If I had... I would...' not present 'try'. 'long way' should be 'a long distance' or 'a long way'. Use 'there is a big park' and 'near my house'. 'could not complete the park is one walk' is ungrammatical; say 'could not always complete a full circuit'. 'have limited time' matches ongoing situation.

× So when I break my work or study, I try to long work like one or two hours and.

✓ So when I take a break from work or study, I try to walk for one or two hours.

Verb and noun usage: 'break my work or study' should be 'take a break from work or study'. 'try to long work' incorrect; use 'try to walk for one or two hours'. Remove trailing 'and'.

× I think park is the best oil for work is a park.

✓ I think the park is the best place for walking.

Word choice and article: 'oil for work' is incorrect metaphor; likely meant 'place for walking'. Add 'the' before 'park' and use correct noun 'place'.

× Give me refreshment.

✓ It gives me refreshment.

Missing subject: Imperative-like fragment; add subject 'It' (the park) and verb 'gives' for a complete sentence.

× The all around us greenery, the varieties of people we meet during the work station.

✓ The greenery all around us and the variety of people we meet during our walks are enjoyable.

Grammar and number agreement: 'The all around us greenery' should be 'the greenery all around us'. 'varieties of people' should be 'variety of people' or 'various people'. 'work station' is wrong; likely 'walks' or 'walking sessions'.

× After that, uh, the recently my work session joined the one friend, his name is Faria.

✓ Recently, during a work session, a friend named Faria joined me.

Tense and word order: 'the recently my work session joined the one friend' is ungrammatical. Use 'Recently' and proper passive/active structure 'a friend named Faria joined me'.

× We are quite, very friendly each other, talking lot of topics, so it's a good way.

✓ We are very friendly with each other and talked about a lot of topics, so it was a good time.

Pronoun and verb forms: 'friendly each other' needs 'friendly with each other'. Match tense: if referring to recent past, use 'talked'. 'talking lot of topics' needs 'talked about a lot of topics' or 'talking about many topics'.