Walking— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答直接且相关，但略显冗长且有重复信息。可以用一句主题句直接回应是否常走动，然后用一到两句具体细节支持，避免重复“work a lot/constantly walking”。同时可以加入连接词使衔接更自然。

Example: Yes, I walk quite a lot because my job as a pastry chef keeps me on my feet. For example, I move between the oven and workbench all day while baking and decorating cakes, which means I get plenty of steps without planning exercise.

Suggestion: 回答包含原因和频率，但表达不够地道，且有语法和用词问题（如“work together”不合适）。建议用主题句说明频率，随后用具体细节和连接词展开，并注意时态一致。

Example: Yes, I did. My grandparents believed regular exercise was important, so we used to walk in the nearby park every weekend, enjoying fresh air and simple games together.

Suggestion: 内容明确且有原因，但句子结构单一且缺少连接词与更具体的例子。可用主题句+两三项具体理由，并加入连接词使逻辑更流畅。

Example: People often walk in parks because the peaceful environment helps them relax. In addition, greenery like trees and grass improves air quality and provides shade, and benches allow people to rest and socialize.

Suggestion: 回答简洁且相关，但可以更自然地表达并加入具体细节来丰富画面（例如地点特色、时间或活动），同时用连接词加强句子衔接。

Example: I'd choose a large park with winding paths, plenty of trees and benches where I could stop and read. A morning walk there would refresh me and help clear my mind.

Suggestion: 回答具体且有描述，但有口头禅“Uh”且叙述可以更紧凑。建议用一句主题句交代时间地点，再用一两句具体观察或感受，并避免填充词。

Example: Last weekend I walked around the lake near my home. Many people were sitting on the grass chatting, while others jogged along the path, which made the place feel lively and pleasant.

× I work a lot because of my job.

✓ I walk a lot because of my job.

原句与上文问句“Do you walk a lot?”语境不一致。考官问是否常走路，学生回答应直接说明自己常走路。将“work”改为“walk”以符合问题语境，且句子时态为一般现在时，描述习惯性动作，用现在时正确。

× I'm constantly walking around to bake and decorate cakes.

✓ I often walk around to bake and decorate cakes.

原句使用进行时“I'm constantly walking around to bake…”在表达工作中的经常性动作时，使用一般现在时比进行时更自然。把“I'm constantly walking”改为“I often walk”或“I constantly walk”以表达习惯性、经常发生的动作。

× Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?

✓ Did you often go outside for a walk when you were a child?

原句中“to have a walk”搭配不如“for a walk”自然；此外句子本身为一般过去时疑问句，保持过去时不变。将不自然的动词短语改成固定搭配“go for a walk”。（注意此句原为考官的话，仍作修正。）

× Yes, I did because my grandparents thought it is very important for health to exercise, so we work together every weekend in the park near my home.

✓ Yes, I did because my grandparents thought it was very important for health to exercise, so we would go together every weekend to the park near my home.

句中时态不一致：先用过去时“thought”，后接从句应使用过去时“was”。另外原句“we work together every weekend”与叙述过去习惯不符，应改为过去习惯表达，如“we would go together every weekend”或“we went together every weekend”。同时改正介词搭配为“to the park”。

× I think people like to walk in parks because park offers a peaceful environment and grass and trees can make people feel relaxed and comfortable.

✓ I think people like to walk in parks because parks/the park offer a peaceful environment, and the grass and trees can make people feel relaxed and comfortable.

名词单复数与冠词使用不一致。若用复数“parks”则动词应用复数“offer”；若指特定公园用“the park”并用单数动词“offers”。另外“grass and trees”在泛指时前面加定冠词“the”更自然（指公园中的草和树）。调整冠词和主谓一致以保持语法正确。

× I'd like to take a long walk in a large park with trees and grass and benches. I think the whole environment can make me refreshed.

✓ I'd like to take a long walk in a large park with trees, grass, and benches. I think the whole environment would make me feel refreshed.

“can make me refreshed”搭配不自然，应使用“make me feel refreshed”或“would make me feel refreshed”。句中为虚拟或假设情形，使用“would”更合适。还修正了列表中逗号和连词用法以提高可读性。

× Where did you go for a walk lately?

✓ Where have you gone for a walk lately?

问句用“lately”（最近）常与现在完成时连用以询问过去到现在的经历。将一般过去时“did you go”改为现在完成时“have you gone”更符合时间副词“lately”的用法。

× I went to a lake near my home last weekend. Uh, there were many people sitting on the grass and others were jogging around the lake.

✓ I went to a lake near my home last weekend. There were many people sitting on the grass, and others were jogging around the lake.

原句整体基本正确，只需微调标点与去掉口语填充“Uh”。“There were many people sitting…”与“others were jogging…”主谓一致且时态一致（过去进行时），保留过去时描述过去的场景是恰当的。