Walking— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but has many repetitions, grammar mistakes and is a bit long. In English (Bangladesh) try to give a clear topic sentence, avoid repeating words, use correct tense and keep it within 2–3 sentences. For example, start with "Not really" then explain briefly why using simple past/present perfect where needed.

Example: Not really. These days I stay at home a lot because I am preparing for an important exam, so I don’t have time to walk often.

Suggestion: Good idea and content, but grammar and sentence structure need fixing. In English (Bangladesh) use past tense consistently for childhood, avoid repeating phrases, and combine ideas with linking words like "because" and "so" to make it coherent.

Example: Yes, I often went outside as a child because I was very outgoing. I played football with my friends and spent time playing with my neighbours, so I was always outdoors.

Suggestion: Answer is unclear and confused. In English (Bangladesh) give a direct topic sentence (e.g. "People like parks because...") then give 2 clear reasons with linking words. Use simple vocabulary and avoid filler words.

Example: People like to walk in parks because the air is fresher and the environment is calm. Also, parks are safer and quieter than busy roads, so people can relax or exercise peacefully.

Suggestion: Good idea but unclear reference and grammar errors. In English (Bangladesh) name a place clearly, use conditional correctly, and give 1–2 specific reasons with linking words like "because" or "so".

Example: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk in the park near my house because it is calm and full of trees. The green surroundings help me feel relaxed and peaceful.

Suggestion: You mentioned the place but the answer has grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. In English (Bangladesh) use past tense for recent events, keep sentences concise, and give specific details (when, where, why). Avoid adding unrelated or unclear words.

Example: Last weekend I walked in Riverside Park near my house. I chose it because the route follows the riverbank and the scenery and fresh air help me relax after a busy week.

× Not not really. I don't don't work too much at at the time and because I have preparing for my exam so many of time I stay in the home because I have to study.

✓ Not really. I don't work much at the moment, and because I am preparing for my exams, I often stay at home to study.

The student used incorrect present tense forms and extra words. Use 'at the moment' for current time, 'am preparing' (present continuous) for an ongoing action, 'often' instead of 'so many of time', and 'stay at home' not 'in the home'. Remove duplicated words. Suggestion: practice present continuous for ongoing actions and simple present for routines.

× Yeah, when I was a child, I often go outside and because I am a outgoing person, when I was a child, I go to go for playing football and hang out with my friends and playing with my neighbors. So that's why I always go to outside.

✓ Yeah, when I was a child, I often went outside. Because I was an outgoing person, I used to play football, hang out with my friends, and play with my neighbors. So that's why I always went outside.

The sentence mixes past and present forms. Use past simple ('went') for repeated past actions, 'used to' or past simple for habitual actions, and correct verb forms 'play' -> 'played'. Also remove redundant phrases like 'go to go'. Suggestion: use past simple for habits in the past and avoid mixing tenses.

× So that's why I always go to outside.

✓ So that's why I always went outside.

The preposition 'to' is unnecessary before 'outside'. Use 'went outside' for past actions. Suggestion: remember 'outside' functions as an adverb, not requiring 'to'.

× People like to walk in the parking because in the park and they have mini and they have mini this person to for work and then so that's people too for work.

✓ People like to walk in parks because parks are green and peaceful. They can relax and take a break from work there.

Original is unclear with incorrect articles and word choice ('the parking', 'mini this person'). Use plural 'parks' for general statements and correct noun phrases. Suggestion: keep sentences simple and use correct articles: 'in parks' for general habits.

× In the park. On the other hand, when we saw the busy road and traffic and that is.

✓ In contrast, when we see busy roads and heavy traffic, parks feel calmer and safer.

Fragments and tense mismatch ('saw' past vs general statement). Combine fragments into one clear sentence and use present simple for general truths. Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments; ensure subject and verb present.

× I would like to say #11 because it is the near near my house and this place is quite calm and green and there is a lot of trees and then when I see this trees I feel relaxed. So I have had.

✓ I would like to go to location number 11 because it is near my house. This place is quite calm and green, and there are a lot of trees. When I see these trees, I feel relaxed.

Use 'near' (not 'the near near'), correct plural agreement 'trees' with 'there are', and 'these' for nearby plural nouns. Remove unfinished fragment 'So I have had.' Suggestion: break into short sentences and check subject-verb agreement and demonstratives.

× I went for a walk in the Riverside Park near my house house in the last weekend and the route follows the riverbank operating place in scenery and fresh air so I often choose it and to relax after every week. The combination of that is drugs on the water and.

✓ I went for a walk in Riverside Park near my house last weekend. The route follows the riverbank and the scenery and fresh air make it pleasant, so I often choose it to relax after a week of work.

Use 'last weekend' without 'the', keep past simple 'went', and correct verbs and noun phrases ('scenery', 'fresh air'). Remove unclear fragment 'drugs on the water'. Use present simple for habitual preference ('I often choose it'). Suggestion: express events in clear past tense and habits in simple present; avoid unclear words.