Walking— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical errors, inconsistent verb tenses, and some redundancy. Keep responses within 3–4 concise sentences, use consistent present tense, and add a brief reason or feeling to enrich your answer. Use linking words (for example, “so,” “because,” or “and”) to make it coherent.

Example: Yes, I walk every day with my best friend Yuna. We usually go to the playground after lunch and talk about schoolwork and personal things. I enjoy these walks because they help me relax and catch up with her.

Suggestion: The answer addresses the question but has many grammatical mistakes (verb forms, word order) and vague phrases. Use past tense consistently for childhood events, avoid repetition, and give one or two specific details about where you went or what you did.

Example: Yes, I often went for walks when I was a child. My mother usually took me to the nearby park after school because we had less homework then, and I remember playing on the swings and talking about my day.

Suggestion: Your answer gives reasons but contains grammar errors and some vague language. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific reasons with linking words (e.g., “for example,” “also”) and use correct verb forms. Avoid filler phrases like “I think” multiple times.

Example: People like walking in parks for several reasons. For example, elderly people enjoy the fresh air and light exercise, while younger people like me go to relax and feel closer to nature.

Suggestion: The idea is clear but the answer has awkward phrasing and some inaccurate or odd details (“pick up the starfish fishes,” “work and see”). Be precise about activities, use conditional structure correctly, and provide a reason why that place appeals to you.

Example: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk along the beach in Sanya. I would enjoy collecting shells, watching the sea, and feeling the warm breeze because it would be very peaceful.

Suggestion: This response answers the question but has multiple grammatical errors and unclear phrases (“went to work” likely means “went for a walk”). Use past simple consistently, correct subject-verb agreement, and be concise—state where you went and one or two details about the walk.

Example: Last Friday I went for a walk with my best friend Yuna after lunch. We walked to the school playground and talked about our final exams, complaining that the math test was very difficult.

× Sure, I take a walk every day with my friends at school.

✓ Sure, I take a walk every day with my friends at school.

This sentence is correct and matches the present habitual tense; no change needed.

× Every single day after lunch, my best friend Yuna and I went to the playground and take a walk and chat with each other.

✓ Every single day after lunch, my best friend Yuna and I went to the playground and took a walk and chatted with each other.

The sentence mixes past ('went') with present verbs ('take', 'chat'). Use past tense consistently: 'took' and 'chatted'. Ensure verb tense consistency for clear time reference.

× We share a lot of things.

✓ We share a lot of things.

This present simple sentence is correct if intended as a habitual action; no change required.

× Sure, when I was a child my mom always took me take a walk when I after school because when I was a child we have less homework and we have enough time to go to the park and work together and talk something at school.

✓ Sure, when I was a child my mom always took me for a walk after school because we had less homework and enough time to go to the park, play together, and talk about things at school.

Multiple issues: 'took me take a walk' is incorrect word order and verb form — use 'took me for a walk' or 'took me to take a walk'. 'when I after school' is ungrammatical so removed. 'we have' should be past 'we had' to match 'when I was a child'. 'work together' likely wrong verb in context — 'play together' fits. 'talk something' should be 'talk about things'. Maintain past tense consistency and correct prepositions and verb choices.

× For the elderly, I think maybe the fresh air makes them want to went to the park and exercise.

✓ For the elderly, I think maybe the fresh air makes them want to go to the park and exercise.

After 'want to' use the base verb form 'go', not past 'went'. 'Makes them want to go' is the correct structure.

× For the people like me, we like to get close to the nature and relax ourselves.

✓ For people like me, we like to get close to nature and relax.

'the nature' is incorrect—use 'nature' without an article. 'Relax ourselves' is awkward; native usage prefers 'relax'. Also remove redundant 'the' before 'people' and keep present simple correctly.

× If I had the chance, I would choose to go to Sanya, have a long walk, because on the beach I can pick up the starfish fishes and the shells and I can work and see.

✓ If I had the chance, I would choose to go to Sanya and take a long walk, because on the beach I could pick up starfish and shells and enjoy the view.

Use 'take a long walk' rather than 'have a long walk'. In a hypothetical conditional ('If I had...'), follow-up uses 'would' or 'could' not present 'can'; change 'can' to 'could'. 'Starfish fishes' is redundant—use 'starfish' (plural same as singular). 'the shells' can be 'shells'. 'I can work and see' is unclear—replace with 'enjoy the view' to convey intent. Maintain conditional mood consistency.

× Just last week, the Friday I went to work with my best friend Yuna after the lunch and I remember that we talk about the final exam and we complain the math exams is too difficult for us.

✓ Just last week, on Friday I went to the park with my best friend Yuna after lunch and I remember that we talked about the final exam and we complained that the math exam was too difficult for us.

Several errors: 'the Friday' should be 'on Friday'. 'Went to work' likely incorrect in context; changed to 'went to the park' to match earlier topic of walking. 'after the lunch' should be 'after lunch' (no article). 'we talk' should be past 'we talked' to match 'Just last week'. 'we complain' → 'we complained'. 'the math exams is' should be 'the math exam was' (subject-verb agreement and past tense). Added 'that' after 'complained' for clarity.