Walking— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve grammar and clarity: use correct tense, concise structure, and link ideas. Start with a clear topic sentence about current habit, then briefly give reason(s) with linking words. Limit to 2–3 short sentences.

Example: Yes, I walk most evenings now because it helps me exercise and unwind. For example, walking clears my mind and helps me forget daily stress.

Suggestion: Correct past tense and reduce repetition. Provide one specific detail (where or an activity) and use linking words to connect ideas.

Example: Yes, I often walked with my family after dinner when I was a child. We usually strolled around our neighborhood park and I remember my grandparents telling stories as we walked.

Suggestion: Good content and coherence; improve sentence accuracy and shorten long sentences. Use varied vocabulary and clearer linking phrases.

Example: People enjoy walking in parks because the peaceful surroundings and fresh air help relieve stress and clear the mind. In addition, parks are convenient for light exercise and meeting friends for a chat.

Suggestion: Improve grammar, use conditional structure, and be more specific about location and feelings. Keep it concise and use linking words to show result.

Example: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk in the mountains I love, through a quiet forest. Listening to birds and breathing fresh air would refresh me and help me forget city noise.

Suggestion: Use correct past tense, remove hesitations, and organize details: say where, what happened, and why it was interesting. Be specific about what you observed.

Example: Recently I walked in the small park near my house. I met a few stray dogs and enjoyed watching people exercising and chatting, which I found interesting because everyone seemed relaxed.

× Yes, I usually working every evening when I was a child and I think it's a good way to exercise and relax my mind and you can. Comp Contemporarily, forget some stress and anxiety.

✓ Yes, I usually worked every evening when I was a child, and I think it's a good way to exercise and relax my mind; you can consequently forget some stress and anxiety.

The original uses 'working' where a past tense verb 'worked' is required because the time reference is 'when I was a child' (past). This is a tense error and incorrect verb form. Also 'Comp Contemporarily' is unclear and likely intended as a connector such as 'consequently' or 'as a result'. Suggest using a past simple for habitual past actions and a clear linking adverb. Grammar problem type ID:10

× Yes, I often go outside to have a walk with my family every evening when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I often went outside for a walk with my family every evening when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present simple 'often go' with the past time marker 'when I was a child'. Use past simple 'went' for habitual actions in the past. Also 'have a walk' is acceptable but 'for a walk' is more natural in this context. Grammar problem type ID:6

× We enjoy working after dinner and we have many good memories with walking with my grandparents.

✓ We enjoyed walking after dinner and we have many good memories of walking with my grandparents.

'Enjoy' should be past simple 'enjoyed' to match past context. 'Working' is incorrect; likely meant 'walking'. Use 'memories of walking' rather than 'memories with walking'. Also avoid repeating 'with'. Grammar problem type ID:8

× I think people like walking in the parks is because they offer the peaceful nature environment where you can hear birds sing and breathe fresh air and which helps relieve stress and clear your mind.

✓ I think people like walking in parks because parks offer a peaceful natural environment where you can hear birds sing and breathe fresh air, which helps relieve stress and clear your mind.

The original has a faulty clause structure: 'people like walking in the parks is because' is ungrammatical. Remove the extra 'is' and adjust noun phrases ('peaceful natural environment' is correct). Place the relative clause 'which helps...' after the clause it modifies. Also 'parks' without 'the' is more general. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Maybe I will go some mountains I really like, take a long walk in the forest, hearing the birds singing and fresh air around me like I am refreshed and I can forgot about the noise from city center.

✓ Maybe I will go to some mountains I really like and take a long walk in the forest, hearing the birds sing and the fresh air around me; I will feel refreshed and can forget about the noise from the city center.

Add preposition 'to' after 'go' and connect clauses with 'and'. Use base verb 'hear the birds sing' (not 'hearing the birds singing' as a main clause) or keep as participial phrase but use 'sing'. 'I am refreshed' should be 'I will feel refreshed' to match future 'Maybe I will'. 'Forgot' is past; use 'forget'. Add article 'the' before 'city center'. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Well, it's not far away from my house, I just go uh, nearby park in my communities and I also met some St. dogs walking outside like me and I really like observe other person in the park.

✓ Well, it's not far from my house; I just went to a nearby park in my community, and I also met some stray dogs walking outside like me. I really like observing other people in the park.

Use past simple 'went' for a recent past action when asked 'Where did you go... lately?'. 'Nearby park' needs article 'a nearby park' and 'my communities' should be 'my community'. 'St. dogs' likely means 'stray dogs'. Use 'observing' (verb + -ing) and plural 'people' not 'person'. Also split run-on sentence into clearer clauses. Grammar problem type ID:5

× It's really interesting.

✓ It was really interesting.

Because the student described a past event ('I went... lately' and 'I met...'), the comment should be in past 'It was really interesting'. This aligns tense across the narrative. Grammar problem type ID:12