Walking— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Perbaiki tata bahasa dasar dan kejelasan ide. Gunakan kalimat topik yang langsung menjawab, lalu beri satu atau dua detail pendukung dengan kata penghubung yang tepat. Hindari pengulangan dan kosakata yang tidak tepat (mis. "roll my flat").

Example: Not really. I rarely walk during weekdays because I work indoors, but I try to walk on weekends to get fresh air and exercise. For example, I often go for a 30-minute walk around my neighborhood to relax.

Suggestion: Perbaiki pengulangan dan struktur kalimat. Mulai dengan jawaban langsung, lalu jelaskan alasan secara singkat menggunakan penghubung seperti "because" atau "so" dan perhatikan penggunaan kata depan yang benar.

Example: Yes, I did. When I was a child we often walked because my school was nearby and we also spent time playing outside. So walking was a normal part of my daily routine.

Suggestion: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan pengulangan kata "because". Gunakan struktur yang lebih ringkas dan kosakata tepat seperti "fresh air", "trees", "socialize". Berikan 1–2 alasan jelas dengan penghubung yang sesuai.

Example: People like walking in parks because they offer fresh air and greenery, which is relaxing. Also, parks provide a social atmosphere where people can meet friends or exercise together.

Suggestion: Perhatikan pemilihan kata (mis. "hell" salah konteks; maksudnya mungkin "hill") dan tata bahasa. Jawab langsung, lalu beri alasan singkat dengan kata penghubung. Perbaiki bentuk kata dan struktur seperti "I would go to a hill or a mountain".

Example: If I had the chance, I would go for a long walk in the hills or mountains because the fresh air and birdsong are very relaxing. The surrounding trees and views would help me feel calm and refreshed.

Suggestion: Perbaiki kejelasan dan tata bahasa; beberapa frasa tidak jelas (mis. "I really got war"). Jawab langsung tentang kegiatan terakhir, gunakan past tense yang benar, dan sebut satu atau dua aktivitas spesifik sebagai detail pendukung.

Example: Recently, I went for a walk around my neighborhood last weekend. I wanted a break from work, so I walked to get some fresh air and do a bit of grocery shopping.

× I rarely walk because my work and I work inside of the building but I know the walk is good for healthy so I work on the weekend. Just roll my flat to get the fresh air.

✓ I rarely walk because my work and I work inside the building, but I know walking is good for health so I walk on the weekend. I just stroll around my flat to get fresh air.

Penggunaan preposisi dan frasa tidak tepat: gunakan 'inside the building' (tanpa 'of'), gunakan 'on the weekend' atau 'at the weekend' untuk kegiatan akhir pekan, dan 'around my flat' bukan 'roll my flat'. Selain itu, gunakan gerund 'walking' setelah 'know' untuk menyatakan kebiasaan umum dan gunakan 'for health' atau 'for my health' bukan 'for healthy'. Saran: perbaiki preposisi, gunakan gerund setelah kata yang relevan, dan pilih kata kerja yang tepat seperti 'walk' atau 'stroll'.

× When I was a child, yes I did because most of our activity just to go to school and play. Uh, however, however, my school is near so we always walk to go to there.

✓ When I was a child, yes I did because most of our activities were just going to school and playing. However, my school was near so we always walked there.

Bentuk waktu lampau harus konsisten: gunakan past tense untuk kebiasaan di masa lalu ('activities were', 'going', 'playing', 'walked'). 'Go to there' tidak benar; gunakan 'there' saja. Saran: gunakan plural 'activities' dan past tense untuk semua kata kerja yang menggambarkan masa lalu.

× I also think walk in the park is a good idea because you can walk with a fresh air because the park must have a lot of trees and there is also many people so you can socialize with them. So I think walk in the park is really recommended.

✓ I also think walking in the park is a good idea because you can breathe fresh air; parks usually have a lot of trees and many people, so you can socialize with them. So I think walking in the park is highly recommended.

Gunakan gerund 'walking' setelah 'think' saat membicarakan kegiatan umum. 'With a fresh air' salah; gunakan 'breathe fresh air' atau 'get fresh air'. 'Must have' tidak tepat untuk opini umum; gunakan 'usually have' atau 'often have'. 'There is also many people' salah karena subjek jamak: gunakan 'there are many people' atau reword. Saran: gunakan gerund untuk kegiatan, perbaiki preposisi dan verb agreement.

× If I had a change I would go to hell or a mountain because there we can get the fresh air and the sound of the bird chirping is really relaxing. The trees are make you comfortable so I would like to go to there.

✓ If I had the chance I would go to the hills or a mountain because there we can get fresh air and the sound of birds chirping is really relaxing. The trees make you feel comfortable, so I would like to go there.

Beberapa kesalahan preposisi dan pilihan kata: 'change' should be 'chance'. 'Go to hell' is inappropriate and likely misworded; 'go to the hills' or 'go to a hill' fits. 'Get the fresh air' -> 'get fresh air'. 'Bird chirping' should be 'birds chirping'. 'The trees are make you comfortable' incorrect grammar; use 'trees make you feel comfortable'. 'Go to there' should be 'go there'. Saran: periksa pilihan kata, hapus artikel yang tidak perlu, dan gunakan struktur subjek-kata kerja yang benar.

× I really got war but uh, on the weekend I walk around my neighborhood so just forget for just for have a new activities outside work and just do some grocery shopping.

✓ I really got busy, but on the weekend I walk around my neighborhood to take a break from work and to do some grocery shopping.

'Got war' tampaknya salah ketik untuk 'got busy'. Gunakan tense yang konsisten: jika berbicara tentang kebiasaan sekarang, gunakan present simple 'I walk'. Frasa 'forget for just for have a new activities' tidak jelas; diganti menjadi 'to take a break from work' untuk menjelaskan alasan. 'A new activities' salah karena artikel dan bentuk jamak; gunakan 'some new activities' atau reword. Saran: perbaiki kata yang salah ketik, gunakan bentuk yang tepat untuk tujuan/niat ('to take a break'), dan pastikan kesesuaian artikel dan jumlah.