Walking— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise and directly answer first, then give one or two clear supporting details. Use correct tense and simpler sentences. Avoid repetition and filler words.

Example: No, I don't walk much now because I work long hours. When I was younger I used to walk and play cricket regularly, so I was much more active then.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence, use correct past tense, and give one specific example. Limit to two or three sentences and use linking words like 'also' or 'so' appropriately.

Example: Yes. When I was a child I often went for walks with my family and friends, and we also played games in the park. Because of those activities I was quite fit back then, but I am less active now.

Suggestion: Give a direct reason, then add one or two specific benefits using linking words. Use natural phrasing (fresh air, meet others) and correct pronouns.

Example: People like walking in parks because of the greenery and fresh air, which helps them relax. Also, parks are social places where you can meet friends or see other people exercising.

Suggestion: Answer clearly with correct conditional phrasing and give specific details about the place and why you would choose it. Avoid hesitation and repetition.

Example: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk along the riverfront in my city, which is a peaceful seafront area. I like it because of the open views and fresh breeze, and it is pleasant for a long stroll.

Suggestion: Use past tense for recent actions and finish your sentence. State the place and the reason concisely, avoiding repetition. For example: 'Lately I have been walking at night because the streets are quieter.'

Example: Lately I have been walking at night because my neighborhood is very crowded during the day, so evenings are quieter and more comfortable for walking.

× No, in this time I don't walk a lot but when I was when I was young I woke a lot and I also play and play cricket so that I have to run also so and but in nowadays I have to work and going go for job so I don't have much.

✓ No, at this time I don't walk a lot, but when I was young I walked a lot and I also played cricket, so I had to run. Nowadays I have to work and go to my job, so I don't have much time.

Errors: incorrect present tense phrasing 'in this time' and 'in nowadays'; wrong verb forms 'woke' and 'play' instead of past 'walked' and 'played'; awkward structure 'going go for job'. Reason: tense shifts between present and past must be consistent and verbs must use correct forms for past vs present. Suggestion: use 'at this time' or 'nowadays' for present, use past simple for habits in the past (walked, played), and use 'go to work' or 'go to my job' for present routines. (grammar_problem_type_id:6)

× Yes, when I was tired I daily go for a walk with my friends and family also and I play I was I play games also so at that time I also walk and run also and I can get I I was fit at the time but nowadays I don't feel.

✓ Yes, when I was tired I would go for a walk daily with my friends and family, and I also played games, so at that time I also walked and ran, and I was fit then, but nowadays I don't feel fit.

Errors: mixed present and past ('go' and 'play' used with past time expressions); incorrect auxiliary and missing words. Reason: describe past habitual actions using past simple or 'would' for repeated past actions; verbs should be consistently in past ('went', 'played', 'walked', 'ran'). Suggestion: use 'would go' or 'went' for daily past actions and keep tense consistent; add 'fit' after 'feel'. (grammar_problem_type_id:5)

× In the park they have much greenery so you can feel all, uh, feel fresh air and you and there were many other other people also so you can communicate and enjoy with him also.

✓ Parks have a lot of greenery, so you can breathe fresh air, and there are many other people, so you can talk to them and enjoy yourself.

Errors: incorrect prepositions and pronouns ('feel fresh air' should be 'breathe fresh air'; 'communicate and enjoy with him' wrong preposition and pronoun). Reason: use 'breathe' when referring to air; use 'talk to' or 'speak with' for interacting with people; plural pronoun 'them' or reflexive 'yourself' for enjoyment. Suggestion: replace 'feel' with 'breathe', use 'there are' for existence, and 'talk to them' or 'enjoy yourself'. (grammar_problem_type_id:11)

× I think I will go in nine cities seashore side. It is, uh, it's given name is riverfront. They that, that is very good and I, I like that place also. So I, I went, I will go there and walk there around.

✓ I think I would go to the seashore in the city called Riverfront. That place is very nice and I would like to go there and walk around.

Errors: incorrect future and conditional forms ('I think I will go in nine cities seashore side' unclear), wrong preposition 'in' and word order. Reason: express hypothetical preference with 'would' or a simple future 'will' depending on context; use 'to the seashore' or 'to the riverfront' and 'called' to name a place. Suggestion: use clear structure: 'I would like to go to the seashore at the Riverfront and walk around.' (grammar_problem_type_id:7)

× Nowadays I go to I go walk in the night because where I am living there, there there were many much crowd. Ma, there is many crowded. There is many crowded. So I I only prefer that that we I am going there in the.

✓ Nowadays I go for walks at night because where I live there is a lot of crowding during the day. So I prefer to go at night.

Errors: incorrect tense and grammatical number ('there were many much crowd', 'there is many crowded'); repetition and incomplete sentence. Reason: use 'where I live' for present location, 'there is a lot of crowding' or 'it is very crowded' for present state; avoid repeated words and finish the sentence. Suggestion: simplify to 'I go for walks at night because it is very crowded during the day, so I prefer going at night.' (grammar_problem_type_id:6)