Walking— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct, use correct verbs and simple sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a brief reason and an example if needed. Use correct prepositions and avoid repetition. For example, say whether you walk a lot now, explain your usual transport, and state why.

Example: Not really. I rarely walk these days because I usually take my motorbike to school—my school is quite close to my house, so riding is faster and more convenient.

Suggestion: Clarify tense and meaning: use past simple for childhood activities. Give a direct answer, then specific activities with linking words. Avoid grammatical errors like 'work' for 'played' and use plural agreement.

Example: Yes, I went outside a lot when I was a child. I often played sports with my friends, such as football, badminton and volleyball, which kept me active and social.

Suggestion: Structure your answer: give two clear reasons with correct vocabulary and linking words. Use 'relax' not 'work to really stress'. Be specific about benefits (fresh air, exercise, relaxation). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Example: People like walking in parks mainly because it helps them relax after a busy day and enjoy fresh air. In addition, walking or light exercise in a park improves fitness and mental wellbeing.

Suggestion: Use conditional form correctly and be concise. Start with the conditional clause and give clear reasons (trees, fresh air, nice views). Avoid confusing words like 'work' for 'walk' and 'accommodation between work'.

Example: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk in a big city park because the trees and fresh air are relaxing, and I could enjoy the scenery while getting some exercise.

Suggestion: Use past or present simple consistently and correct nouns (neighborhood, father). Give one or two clear details (time, who with, purpose). Avoid unclear phrases like '1/2 cooking day'.

Example: Lately, I usually walk around my neighborhood with my father in the evening after dinner. These walks help us relax and sleep better.

× Actually now I don't usually walk and instead of that I often use my motto to moving because I I have to go to school and UH isn't located far with my house.

✓ Actually, I don't usually walk now; instead, I often use my motorbike to get to school because my school isn't located far from my house.

Errors: incorrect word order and tense placement ('now' placement), wrong noun 'motto' instead of 'motorbike', incorrect verb form 'to moving', wrong preposition 'with' and incorrect contraction 'isn't located far with my house'. Suggestions: place 'now' after auxiliary or at end ('I don't usually walk now'), use correct vocabulary ('motorbike'), use infinitive or purpose structure for movement ('to get to school'), and use 'far from' to indicate distance. Ensure clear clause separation with punctuation.

× Oh actually when I was a child I work more than now.

✓ Oh actually, when I was a child I worked more than I do now.

Error: wrong verb tense — use past tense 'worked' to match 'when I was a child'. Also compare with present using 'do now'. Suggestions: maintain consistent past tense for past time expressions and use a comparative structure ('more than I do now').

× I usually hang out with my friend to playing sports like football, badminton or volleyball.

✓ I usually hang out with my friends to play sports like football, badminton, or volleyball.

Errors: preposition/verb form combination 'to playing' should be infinitive 'to play' or use gerund without 'to' ('playing'). 'Friend' should be plural 'friends' if referring generally. Suggestions: use 'to play' after 'hang out with' or say 'hang out with my friends and play'. Maintain plural for general activities.

× A People like to walk in park for several reason.

✓ People like to walk in parks for several reasons.

Errors: extraneous 'A' at sentence start; missing plural 'parks' for general reference; 'reason' should be plural 'reasons'. Suggestions: remove 'A', pluralize nouns when speaking generally, and use 'for several reasons'.

× Firstly I think after a hard working day people like to work to really stress and realize.

✓ Firstly, I think after a hard working day people like to relax and unwind.

Errors: 'work to really stress and realize' is incorrect word choice and form; 'stress' is a noun/verb but context needs 'relax'; 'realize' is wrong. Suggestions: use appropriate verbs 'relax' or 'unwind' to express reducing stress.

× Secondly, what I think is enjoying to the sport so they can keep their feet and improve their health.

✓ Secondly, I think they enjoy sports so they can keep fit and improve their health.

Errors: 'enjoying to the sport' wrong verb form and preposition; 'keep their feet' incorrect idiom — should be 'keep fit'. Suggestions: use 'enjoy sports' (verb + noun), and use correct idioms like 'keep fit'.

× If I have a chance to work I will go to the park and work because in the in the park it have a lot of tree and it bring the fresh atmosphere and I can accommodation between work and see this view.

✓ If I had a chance to go for a walk, I would go to the park because the park has many trees and it brings a fresh atmosphere, so I can relax between work and enjoy the view.

Errors: incorrect conditional form — the question asked 'Where would you like...' so second conditional ('If I had..., I would...') is appropriate. Wrong verb 'work' used instead of 'walk' or 'go for a walk'; 'it have' should be 'it has'; 'a lot of tree' should be 'many trees'; 'bring the fresh atmosphere' -> 'brings a fresh atmosphere'; 'accommodation between work' incorrect — likely 'relax between work' or 'take a break between work'. Suggestions: use second conditional for hypothetical situations, correct subject-verb agreement, pluralize nouns, and choose appropriate verbs/phrases ('relax', 'enjoy the view').

× In the evening after I eat dinner, I usually walk around my neighbor with father.

✓ In the evening after I eat dinner, I usually walk around my neighborhood with my father.

Errors: 'neighbor' (person) used instead of 'neighborhood' (area); missing possessive 'my' before 'father'; preposition 'around' is fine but noun choice and possessive required. Suggestions: use 'neighborhood' for area and include possessive pronouns for family members.

× It now helps us to relax after 1/2 cooking day and feel comfortable when we go to the bed.

✓ It helps us relax after a half-day of cooking and feel comfortable when we go to bed.

Errors: awkward placement 'now' — unnecessary; '1/2 cooking day' should be 'a half-day of cooking' or 'half a day of cooking'; 'go to the bed' should be 'go to bed' (no article). Suggestions: use natural time expressions ('a half-day'), omit unnecessary articles before 'bed', and place adverbs appropriately.