Walking— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise, address the question directly, avoid tense/confusion and redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. "Yes, I walk a lot") then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar ("by walking" or "a 20-minute walk") and remove overlapping phrases like "like love".

Example: Yes, I walk a lot. For example, when I worked at my previous job the office was a 20-minute walk from home, so I usually walked there whenever I wasn’t in a hurry.

Suggestion: Answer directly then give one or two specific details. Fix grammar and fluency issues (capitalization, extra words, pronoun errors). Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect reason to effect. Keep within 3–4 sentences.

Example: Yes, I often walked when I was a child because I was very active. For instance, I used to walk to school and play outside with friends, which kept me energetic and healthy.

Suggestion: Begin with a clear opinion ("People like walking in parks because...") then support with specific reasons and an example. Improve grammar ("one of the exercises", "keeps people fit") and avoid filler words like "like" and "just". Use linking words such as "because" and "so" for coherence.

Example: People like walking in parks because it improves both physical fitness and mental well-being. For example, a short walk among trees can reduce stress and help someone feel calmer and more focused.

Suggestion: This answer has confusion (says "work" instead of "walk") and mixed tenses. Start with a clear statement of preference and give a specific location and reason. Keep it concise and correct grammar ("I would love to walk", "help digestion"). Avoid repeating "whenever I get the chance" multiple times.

Example: I would prefer to take a long walk in a nearby park. I especially enjoy walking after lunch because a 20–30 minute walk helps digestion and makes me feel refreshed for the afternoon.

Suggestion: Be fluent and remove hesitations ("umm", repeated phrases). Start with a clear topic sentence and add specific details (time, place, reason, duration). Use linking words like "because" and "so" to explain cause and effect. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Example: I recently walked in the park near my home after a heavy dinner. I intended to walk for five minutes to aid digestion, but because I felt relaxed I ended up walking for about 30 minutes.

× Yes, I do work a lot in my daily routine.

✓ Yes, I work a lot in my daily routine.

The auxiliary 'do' is unnecessary with the simple present affirmative. Use the simple present 'I work' to state habitual actions. Remove 'do' to form correct grammar.

× Actually when I was working, my office was just like 20 minutes away by walk from my home.

✓ Actually, when I was working, my office was just about 20 minutes' walk from my home.

Use 'about' or 'just about' rather than 'just like' for approximate time. The correct noun phrase is '20 minutes' walk' and not 'by walk'. Use the possessive form with minutes to indicate distance/time.

× So whenever I'm not in a hurry or have still have time to spare, I would always like love to walk from my home to the office.

✓ So whenever I'm not in a hurry or still have time to spare, I would always love to walk from my home to the office.

Remove the redundant 'have' and 'like' before 'love'. 'Like love' is incorrect collocation. Use either 'like to walk' or 'love to walk'; here 'would always love to walk' fits the conditional nuance.

× Well, a Walking was a part of my daily routine while growing up.

✓ Well, walking was part of my daily routine while growing up.

Do not capitalize 'Walking' and do not use the indefinite article 'a' with the gerund 'walking' when referring to the activity generally. Use 'walking' (uncountable activity) and 'part of my routine' (no 'a').

× I was an active child who was involved in lots of physical activities and that includes walking as well because when I walk I it just keeps me moving and I feel very energetic.

✓ I was an active child who was involved in lots of physical activities, and that included walking as well because when I walked it kept me moving and I felt very energetic.

Tense must remain in the past. 'Includes' should be 'included' to match past; 'when I walk' should be 'when I walked' and 'it just keeps' should be 'it kept' to maintain past narrative. Remove the extra pronoun 'I' before 'it'.

× According to me, like walking is one of the exercise that keeps a person fit not just physically but mentally as well.

✓ In my opinion, walking is one of the exercises that keep a person fit not just physically but mentally as well.

Use 'In my opinion' instead of 'According to me'. 'Walking' is fine as gerund. 'One of the exercises' requires plural 'exercises' and the relative clause must use plural verb 'that keep' to agree with 'exercises'.

× Sometimes when people are very stressed or they need a break, they usually tend to go for a walk so that it just makes their brain very calm and peaceful.

✓ Sometimes when people are very stressed or need a break, they tend to go for a walk because it makes them feel calm and peaceful.

Reduce redundancy: 'usually tend to' is repetitive; use 'tend to'. 'So that it just makes their brain very calm' is awkward — use 'because it makes them feel calm and peaceful'. Place adverb 'usually' or 'sometimes' appropriately; here 'sometimes' is sufficient.

× For me personally, I would love to work whenever I get the chance.

✓ For me personally, I would love to walk whenever I get the chance.

The sentence uses 'work' but context asks about taking a long walk; the correct verb is 'walk'. The modal 'would love to' is fine with 'walk'.

× It really doesn't matter whether it's a park or even the outdoor spaces of my office.

✓ It really doesn't matter whether it's a park or the outdoor spaces of my office.

Remove the unnecessary 'even' which is awkward here. The contraction 'doesn't' correctly expresses present general truth.

× So whenever I get the chance, I usually walk, especially after my lunch break so that whatever I have eaten, it could be digested easily.

✓ So whenever I get the chance, I usually walk, especially after my lunch break so that what I have eaten can be digested easily.

Use 'what I have eaten' rather than 'whatever'; use 'can be digested' instead of 'could be digested' because this is a general result, not a hypothetical. 'Can' indicates ability/result.

× Last time when I went for a walk, it was just umm in the park near my home.

✓ The last time I went for a walk, it was just in the park near my home.

Use 'The last time I went' rather than 'Last time when I went'. 'Just' is acceptable; remove filler 'umm' in formal responses.

× It was after my dinner. I it was a heavy dinner.

✓ It was after my dinner; it was a heavy meal.

Combine fragments and remove the extra pronoun 'I'. Use 'meal' instead of repeating 'dinner' for variety. Ensure sentence has a clear subject and verb.

× So I went to I went there for a walk and I meant it to go for just for 5 minutes, but I ended up umm taking a long walk for 30 minutes.

✓ So I went there for a walk and I meant to go for just five minutes, but I ended up taking a long 30-minute walk.

Remove duplicated phrase 'I went to I went'. Use 'meant to go for' for intended action. Spell out numbers in speech writing ('five') or use numerals consistently; '30-minute' is a compound adjective before 'walk'. Remove filler 'umm'.