Walking— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Jaga jawaban lebih singkat dan langsung (maksimal 3-4 kalimat), perbaiki tata bahasa (tenses dan artikel) dan hindari kata pengisi seperti 'furthermore'. Tambahkan satu atau dua detail spesifik untuk memperkuat jawaban.

Example: Not really. I work from home as a freelancer, so I usually travel by ride-hailing apps when I go out. I only walk around the house to do chores, such as sweeping or taking out the trash.

Suggestion: Perbaiki konsistensi tense dan struktur kalimat; gabungkan ide agar lebih natural dan hindari kesalahan bentuk kata kerja (mis: 'took'). Jelaskan satu contoh kegiatan yang dilakukan saat berjalan untuk menambah spesifikasi.

Example: Yes, I did. Almost every day after I finished my homework, I would go outside to walk and play with my friends, such as riding bikes or kicking a ball.

Suggestion: Jawaban sudah relevan tetapi ulangan kata dan struktur perlu dirapikan; hilangkan pengulangan dan gunakan linking word yang tepat. Tambahkan contoh efek positif yang spesifik.

Example: People enjoy walking in parks because the environment is relaxing; there are many trees, fresh air, and peaceful paths that help reduce stress and improve mood.

Suggestion: Lengkapi kalimat yang terpotong dan perbaiki pengulangan kata. Berikan detail konkret (mis. jenis hewan atau bunga) serta alasan pribadi mengapa ingin berjalan di sana.

Example: I'd like to take a long walk in the campus forest near my house because it has a variety of trees, wildflowers, and small animals like squirrels; walking there would feel peaceful and refreshing.

Suggestion: Jawaban tidak langsung menjawab pertanyaan (asked 'Where did you go for a walk lately?') dan berulang-ulang. Perjelas bahwa Anda berjalan di lokasi tersebut, perbaiki tata bahasa dan tambahkan satu detail spesifik tentang pengalaman terbaru.

Example: Recently I went for a walk in the town's large campground. It's a popular park for both young people and adults, and I enjoyed walking along the lakeside trail there.

× No I don't. I'm a freelancer and I am mostly working in my house and furthermore I use online transportations wherever I go.

✓ No, I don't. I'm a freelancer and I mostly work at home; furthermore, I use online transportation whenever I go out.

Use commas after interjections and avoid continuous tense when stating habitual actions (use 'I mostly work' not 'I am mostly working'). 'In my house' is unnatural for routine—use 'at home'. 'Online transportation' is an uncountable concept, so use singular 'transportation' not 'transportations'. Use 'whenever I go out' for clarity.

× I only walk when I do chores around my house like sweeping and washing the dishes.

✓ I only walk when I do chores around the house, like sweeping and washing the dishes.

After 'like' use gerund forms 'sweeping' and 'washing' correctly; keep 'the house' for natural reference. This sentence already used -ing correctly but needed article adjustment and minor wording for naturalness.

× Yes, I did. It was almost every day. Whenever I came back from the schools and I have done all of my course in the house.

✓ Yes, I did. It was almost every day. Whenever I came back from school and had finished all of my homework at home,

Mixing past simple ('came') with present perfect ('have done') is incorrect here. Use past perfect 'had finished' to show the action completed before going out. 'From the schools' should be 'from school' for general routine. 'Course' is incorrect; use 'homework' or 'my studies' depending on meaning.

× I would go outside, took a walk and played.

✓ I would go outside, take a walk and play.

When using 'would' to describe habitual past actions, follow with the base form of verbs ('take', 'play'), not past tense 'took'. Keep verbs parallel in form.

× I think it's because the atmosphere that the park could provide, like there are many trees there and of course the the air is also fresh and it's calming.

✓ I think it's because of the atmosphere that the park provides: there are many trees, the air is fresh, and it's calming.

Use 'because of' to link cause. 'That the park could provide' is wordy and uses conditional modal unnecessarily—use 'that the park provides'. Remove duplicate 'the the'. Use parallel structure for the list and commas to separate items.

× I would like to walk in the the campus forest near my house.

✓ I would like to walk in the campus forest near my house.

Remove duplicate 'the the'. 'In the campus forest' is acceptable; ensure single article and no repetition.

× I heard that there are various trees in the forest and I could see some tiny animals and there are some flowers that yes I.

✓ I heard that there are various trees in the forest; I could see some small animals and some flowers there.

Original sentence is disfluent ('that yes I'). Use clear clauses and punctuation: semicolon or conjunction to connect ideas. Use 'small animals' rather than 'tiny' for naturalness and place 'there' to indicate location.

× Lately I worked in the camping ground.

✓ Recently I worked at the camping ground.

'Lately' often pairs with present perfect for recent actions; if using past simple, 'recently' is better. Use preposition 'at' rather than 'in' for places like 'camping ground'.

× It's one of the biggest park in my in my town.

✓ It's one of the biggest parks in my town.

Use plural 'parks' after 'one of the' and remove duplicate 'in my'. Also use 'in my town' once.

× It's really popular among youngsters and also among adults. Umm the.

✓ It's really popular with youngsters and adults.

Use 'popular with' rather than 'popular among' for natural collocation (both are possible but 'with' is simpler). Remove filler 'Umm the'. Combine items in one concise sentence.