Keys— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No) then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and filler words. Use correct tense and simpler phrases (e.g., 'I tend to leave keys in my room').

Example: No, I don't usually carry many keys. I often forget my room key at home, so I ask my landlord to make a spare that I keep when I go out.

Suggestion: Answer directly and give a concise specific example. Avoid exaggeration and incorrect expressions (e.g., 'a million spare keys'). Use one or two linking words for coherence ('so', 'because').

Example: Yes, I've lost my keys several times. For example, last month I misplaced them at a café, so I now keep one spare key with a close friend.

Suggestion: Be coherent and use clear vocabulary. Start with a topic sentence answering the question, then give a specific reason or example. Remove unclear words and correct phrases ('I often forget keys and lock myself out' rather than 'regular agility').

Example: Yes, I often forget my keys and sometimes lock myself out because I'm usually in a hurry. For instance, last week I left my keys on my desk and had to wait for my roommate to return.

Suggestion: This answer is generally clear but can be more structured. Begin with a direct opinion, then give 1–2 clear conditions and a brief reason. Use linking words like 'however' and 'because'.

Example: I think it depends. If the neighbour is trustworthy, it's fine to leave a spare key with them because they can help in emergencies; however, if you don't know them well, it's safer to give a spare to your landlord or keep it yourself.

× No, I don't. I really bring a lot of keys when I am when I go out, uh, you know, I have that habit of umm, left thinking leaving keys inside my room, so I need to ask the landlord to copy uh, my room keys to keep it with me.

✓ No, I don't. I usually bring a lot of keys when I go out. I have a habit of leaving keys inside my room, so I need to ask the landlord to copy my room keys so I can keep a copy with me.

Multiple present-tense and wording problems: 'really bring a lot of keys when I am when I go out' is awkward and mixes continuous form; use 'usually bring' for habitual actions (present simple). 'Left thinking leaving' is incorrect word choice and form — use 'a habit of leaving'. 'Copy uh, my room keys to keep it with me' has singular/plural and phrasing problems; use 'ask the landlord to copy my room keys so I can keep a copy with me.' Suggestion: use present simple for habits and simplify phrasing.

× That happened all that always happened to me. I always lost the key. I don't know where I left them. So I have a millions of spare keys so that I cannot, umm, you know, lost.

✓ That always happened to me. I always lose my keys. I don't know where I left them. So I have millions of spare keys so that I don't get locked out.

Tense and agreement errors: mixing past 'happened' with habitual meaning—use present simple 'always happens' or rephrase; here 'That always happened to me' corrected to 'That always happened to me' could be 'That always happens to me' if present habit; kept as 'That always happened to me' but better to match surrounding present: changed 'I always lost the key' (past) to 'I always lose my keys' (present habitual). 'I don't know where I left them' is fine. 'a millions' incorrect article/number — use 'millions' or 'a million'; 'so that I cannot ... lost' incorrect verb forms — corrected to 'so that I don't get locked out.' Suggestion: use present simple for habits and correct number/article and verb forms.

× Like I said, aliyah, there's a ragula ragula activity for me. There's already regular agility for me. Umm, like I don't know why I intend to forget every everything, especially the key. The key is main point. Whenever I go out, I leave my game inside my room, so I cannot go in.

✓ Like I said, it's a regular thing for me. I don't know why I always forget things, especially my keys. The key is the main point. Whenever I go out, I leave my keys inside my room, so I cannot get back in.

Many phrasing and structure issues: 'aliyah, there's a ragula ragula activity' is unclear and likely meant 'it's a regular thing'—use clear idiomatic expression. 'There's already regular agility for me' is incorrect word choice; replaced with 'it's a regular thing.' 'I intend to forget every everything' is wrong verb and redundancy; use 'I always forget things.' 'The key is main point' missing article — use 'the main point.' 'I leave my game' is likely 'keys' and 'so I cannot go in' awkward—use 'so I cannot get back in.' Suggestion: use simple clear phrases, correct articles, and consistent nouns.

× Umm, that's not safe actually, but it will depend. I would say if your neighbor is reliable. So you can leave your keys to your neighbor but you know if it's a stranger you better keep it with you or the landlord.

✓ Umm, that's not safe, actually, but it depends. I would say if your neighbor is reliable, you can leave your keys with them. But if it's a stranger, you'd better keep them with you or give them to the landlord.

Modal and pronoun issues: 'it will depend' is unnatural—use 'it depends.' 'I would say if your neighbor is reliable.' is a fragment; combine into a conditional clause. 'leave your keys to your neighbor' uses wrong preposition—use 'leave your keys with someone.' 'you better keep it with you' is informal and uses wrong pronoun; use 'you'd better keep them with you.' Suggestion: use correct modals ('you'd better') and appropriate prepositions and pronouns.