Food— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence naming your favourite food, then add 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., articles, verb forms) and avoid repetition.

Example: I particularly enjoy pizza and burgers. For example, I love cheese pizza because the melted cheese and crispy crust are comforting, and I often choose a beef burger with fresh lettuce and tomato when I want something more filling. I also like sweets occasionally because they lift my mood.

Suggestion: Answer directly with past tense and give one or two specific examples and a reason. Use linking words (for example, because) and correct grammar (past tense, articles). Keep it under five sentences.

Example: When I was young, I loved sweet foods, especially chocolate and candy. For example, I often ate chocolate bars after school because they made me feel excited and were easy to share with friends.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence and then add specific examples or a short reason if relevant. Use linking words (however, usually) and avoid hesitation words. Improve clarity and grammar.

Example: Not really — our diet stays quite consistent year-round. Usually we eat staples like chicken, fish or meat served with rice or bread, and we often have soups or salads as sides depending on the season.

Suggestion: Use past and present tenses correctly and explain the change with a specific reason and example. Avoid unclear phrases and incorrect vocabulary (e.g., 'soil salt'). Keep sentences clear and connected with linking words (but, now, because).

Example: Yes, my preferences have changed. As a child I ate a lot of sweets, but now I prefer savory dishes with more salt and stronger flavors because I enjoy more complex tastes and healthier options.

× I like much food, for example pizza, pizza who has a lot of cheese and I like burger I like it so much. Also I like sweets. When I eat sweet I feel happy.

✓ I like a lot of food, for example pizza, pizza that has a lot of cheese, and I like burgers; I like them so much. Also I like sweets. When I eat sweets I feel happy.

The student used 'much' incorrectly with a countable concept and singular/plural nouns. Use 'a lot of' for general quantities (quantifier error, ID 14). 'Pizza who' is wrong because 'who' refers to people; use 'that' for things (pronoun choice, ID 12). 'Burger' should be plural when speaking generally and pronouns must agree: 'I like burgers; I like them' (singular/plural and pronoun agreement, IDs 1 and 12). 'When I eat sweet' should be 'When I eat sweets' because 'sweet' in this context is countable and plural. Suggestion: use 'a lot of' for quantity with uncountable or plural nouns, use 'that' for things, make nouns and pronouns agree in number, and use plural for general likes of countable items.

× When I was young, I think I like sweet food much because all children like chocolate candies like that. This is is a special when I was kind to eat candy.

✓ When I was young, I think I liked sweet foods a lot because all children liked chocolate candies. It was a special time when I used to eat candy often.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses incorrectly (present tense used with 'When I was young'). Use past forms for habitual past actions (ID 6). 'I like sweet food much' should be 'I liked sweet foods a lot' (quantifier and plural adjustments, IDs 14 and 1). 'Like that' is unnecessary and awkward. 'This is is a special when I was kind to eat candy' is ungrammatical: use 'It was a special time' and 'used to eat candy' for past habitual actions. Suggestion: keep past tense consistent, use 'used to' for past habits, and correct pluralization of 'food' when listing types.

× I'm not changing my food a lot. We eat I think all the year, same food like chicken, fish, meat with rice or with bread. Uh, we like some soups and salad. This is uh, our food.

✓ I don't change my food a lot. I think we eat the same foods all year round, like chicken, fish, and meat with rice or bread. We also like some soups and salads. This is our food.

The original uses present continuous 'I'm not changing' inappropriately for a habitual/general fact; use simple present 'I don't change' (present tense issue, ID 6). 'We eat I think all the year' needs reordering and idiomatic 'all year round' and 'the same foods' (article and plural issues, IDs 22 and 1). 'Salad' should be plural when speaking generally: 'salads'. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual routines, use 'the same' with plural nouns when appropriate, and use idiomatic time expressions like 'all year round'.

× Yes, I change my favorite food. When I was young I like much sweets, but now when I when I'm old I like a lot food with have some soil salt more.

✓ Yes, my favorite food has changed. When I was young I liked sweets a lot, but now that I am older I like savory foods with more salt.

The response mixes present and past incorrectly. 'I change my favorite food' should be past passive/perfect 'my favorite food has changed' to describe a change over time (tense issue, ID 5/7). 'I like much sweets' is incorrect; use 'I liked sweets a lot' (past tense and quantifier, IDs 5 and 14). 'When I when I'm old' should be 'now that I am older' (tense and word choice). 'I like a lot food with have some soil salt more' is ungrammatical and unclear: likely intended 'I like savory foods with more salt' (word choice and noun phrase structure, IDs 13 and 26). Suggestion: use past simple or present perfect to describe changes since childhood, use clear adjectives like 'savory' and correct word order.