Part 1
Examiner
What is your favourite food?
Candidate
My favorite food is ramen with cheese because I really going for uh, Japanese or Chinese cuisine.
Examiner
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Candidate
I have been enjoying a portion of rice with chicken. And my taste, uh, doesn't change its time over.
Examiner
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Candidate
No I don't. I am all for inconsistency or consistency. I usually eat spicy foods and. Oh, you're dead.
Examiner
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Candidate
By over the time my taste of the food is changed because uh, it's getting bored and my Organism doesn't demand it if I eat a lot, only one type of the food. So my taste is changing every year.
What is your favourite food?
Score: 45.0Suggestion: Сформулируйте ответ более грамотно и кратко: начните с прямого утверждения, затем добавьте одно-два конкретных пояснения. Избегайте слов-паразитов и грамматических ошибок (например, "I really going for" → "I really like"). Употребляйте связку для ясности: "because" или "as" и уточните, что именно вам нравится в блюде (вкус, текстура, сочетание ингредиентов).
Example: My favourite food is cheese ramen. I like it because the rich broth and melted cheese combine to create a creamy, comforting flavour, and I enjoy the contrast between the soft noodles and the cheesy texture.
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Score: 40.0Suggestion: Ответьте в прошедшем времени и прямо: назовите блюдо, затем дайте конкретную причину и, при необходимости, добавьте сравнение с настоящим. Избегайте неопределённых выражений и неверных временных форм ("I have been enjoying" → "I used to enjoy"). Употребляйте связки: "when I was young" и "still" или "now" для сравнения.
Example: When I was young, I used to enjoy rice with chicken. I liked it because it was simple and filling, and even now I often choose similar homely meals because they remind me of my family.
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Score: 20.0Suggestion: Дайте чёткий, вежливый и связный ответ. Начните с короткого утверждения (Yes/No), затем объясните причину. Избегайте бессмысленных фраз и неполных предложений. Используйте связующие слова: "because", "however", "in summer/winter" и приведите конкретный пример сезонного блюда, если есть.
Example: No, I don't change my diet much with the seasons because I prefer spicy food year-round. For example, I often eat hot soups in winter and spicy salads in summer, but the core flavours I like remain the same.
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Score: 35.0Suggestion: Отвечайте ясно и логично: начните с прямого ответа (Yes/No), затем объясните причину и приведите пример. Избегайте буквальных переводов с родного языка (например, "Organism"), лишних слов и пауз. Используйте связки: "because", "so", "for example" и сформулируйте причину простыми словами: "I get bored" или "I like to try new things".
Example: Yes, my favourite foods have changed over time because I get bored if I eat the same thing all the time. For example, I liked plain chicken and rice as a child, but now I prefer more varied dishes like ramen with cheese or spicy meals.
× My favorite food is ramen with cheese because I really going for uh, Japanese or Chinese cuisine.
✓ My favorite food is ramen with cheese because I really like Japanese or Chinese cuisine.
The original sentence omits the main verb 'like' after 'really' and uses 'going for' incorrectly. Use the simple present 'like' to express a general preference. Suggestion: use subject + verb (I really like) for habits/preferences.
× What kind of food did you like when you were young? Student: I have been enjoying a portion of rice with chicken.
✓ When I was young, I enjoyed a portion of rice with chicken.
The question asks about a past state, so use the simple past 'enjoyed' not the present perfect continuous 'have been enjoying'. Use past tense for completed or habitual actions in the past. Suggestion: use 'enjoyed' for past habits.
× And my taste, uh, doesn't change its time over.
✓ And my taste hasn't changed over time.
The phrase 'doesn't change its time over' is ungrammatical. Use present perfect 'hasn't changed' plus 'over time' to indicate a period from past to present. Suggestion: use 'hasn't changed over time' to express continuity.
× No I don't. I am all for inconsistency or consistency.
✓ No, I don't. I prefer consistency.
The original 'I am all for inconsistency or consistency' is contradictory and awkward. Use a clear conjunction or verb to state preference. Suggestion: choose one option and use 'prefer' or 'am all for' plus one noun.
× I usually eat spicy foods and. Oh, you're dead.
✓ I usually eat spicy foods.
The sentence is fragmented: 'and.' is incomplete and 'Oh, you're dead.' is irrelevant. Remove fragments and keep the complete thought. Suggestion: avoid unfinished clauses and irrelevant remarks.
× By over the time my taste of the food is changed because uh, it's getting bored and my Organism doesn't demand it if I eat a lot, only one type of the food.
✓ Over time my taste in food has changed because it gets boring if I eat only one type of food a lot, and my body no longer craves it.
Multiple issues: wrong preposition 'By over the time', incorrect passive 'is changed', incorrect noun capitalization 'Organism', awkward phrasing 'doesn't demand it'. Use 'Over time' + present perfect 'has changed', 'gets boring', 'eat only one type of food a lot', and 'my body no longer craves it'. Suggestion: use natural collocations ('taste in food', 'get boring', 'my body') and consistent tense.
× So my taste is changing every year.
✓ So my taste changes every year.
Both present continuous and simple present can be used, but for habitual action 'every year' use simple present 'changes' rather than 'is changing'. Suggestion: use simple present for regular, repeated actions.