Food— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and concise supporting details. Use linking words to contrast preferences and give specific examples. Keep answers within 3–4 sentences and avoid unclear phrases (e.g., “egg Pearl”).

Example: I usually prefer Thai food, especially dishes like pad thai or tom yum, because I enjoy bold, spicy flavors. However, when I'm in a hurry, I choose Japanese food such as sushi or bento boxes because they are quick to eat and convenient. Overall, my choice depends on how much time I have.

Suggestion: Start with a clear statement about childhood preferences, use correct verb forms and specific details, and avoid irrelevant information (or explain it). Use linking words to add reasons or memories. Limit to 2–4 sentences.

Example: When I was young, I liked fried and fast foods such as fries, burgers, and fried chicken because they tasted good and were convenient. I often went to chains like KFC and McDonald's with my family, and I remember collecting small toys that came with the meals.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer and then briefly explain. Correct pronouns/verbs and use linking words like 'however' or 'but' to clarify exceptions. Provide a specific example (seasonal dish) if possible. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Example: No, I don't usually change what I eat with the seasons; I tend to eat the same kinds of dishes year-round. However, if a seasonal ingredient is available, such as fresh strawberries in summer, I will choose it because it tastes better then.

Suggestion: Answer directly and clearly: state whether it changed and explain how with specific details. Use correct tense and concise linking words (e.g., 'but', 'because'). Avoid filler sounds. Provide a clear example of the current preference.

Example: My favourite food hasn't changed much — I still love noodles. However, my preference for spice has decreased, so now I prefer milder noodle dishes or noodles in tom yum soup with less chili than I used to tolerate.

× My favorite food is depend on my days.

✓ My favorite food depends on the day.

Subject-verb agreement and tense: 'is depend' is incorrect because 'depend' should be conjugated for the third-person singular subject 'favorite food' as 'depends'. Also 'my days' is vague; use 'the day' to mean 'on different days'. Use present simple for habitual situations. Suggestion: Use 'depends on' for things that vary, and match verb to subject (depends).

× If I have times I enjoy Thai food because I care like an egg Pearl a lot of dish.

✓ If I have time, I enjoy Thai food because I really like dishes such as egg pearls.

Multiple issues: 'have times' should be 'have time' (singular) and present simple 'enjoy' is fine. 'I care like' is incorrect; use 'I really like' or 'I care for'. 'an egg Pearl a lot of dish' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'dishes such as egg pearls'. Suggestion: Keep present simple for habitual preference and use correct nouns/plurals and adverb 'really'.

× But if I in a rush hour I prefer Japanese food because you can finish.

✓ But if I'm in a rush, I prefer Japanese food because you can finish it quickly.

Verb be missing: 'If I in a rush' requires 'I'm' (present tense contraction). 'rush hour' is unnecessary; 'in a rush' is natural. 'because you can finish' is incomplete; add object 'it' and adverb 'quickly'. Suggestion: Include appropriate form of 'to be' and complete the clause with object and adverb to clarify meaning.

× What kind of food did you like when you were young? -> I like a fry food like a junk food.

✓ I liked fried food, like junk food.

Question asks about the past, so use past simple 'liked' rather than present 'like'. 'a fry food' is wrong form: use adjective 'fried' and no indefinite article for uncountable/general category. Suggestion: Use past tense for past-time questions and correct adjective form.

× I enjoy to go to the fast food brand Ryker, KFC, McDonald's and I love to collect the a souvenir from.

✓ I enjoy going to fast-food chains like Burger King, KFC, and McDonald's, and I love collecting souvenirs from them.

After 'enjoy' use gerund form 'going' not 'to go'. 'fast food brand' better as 'fast-food chains' or specific brand names; 'Ryker' likely meant 'Burger King'. 'love to collect' can be 'love collecting' (gerund preferred). 'the a souvenir from' is incorrect; use 'souvenirs from them'. Suggestion: Use gerunds after 'enjoy'/'love' and correct noun phrases and pronouns.

× Do you eat different foods at different times of the year? -> I don't think so, Ice always eat the food that I like is not depend the different time of the year, but if I want to eat it even the time is hard to find, I will eat it.

✓ I don't think so. I always eat the foods I like regardless of the time of year, but if I really want something that is hard to find, I will eat it when I can.

Many issues: 'Ice' is typo for 'I'. 'always eat' is okay but 'eat the food that I like is not depend the different time of the year' is ungrammatical. Use 'regardless of the time of year' to express independence from seasons. 'even the time is hard to find' unclear; rephrase to 'if I really want something that is hard to find'. Maintain present simple for habitual actions and future 'will' for willingness. Suggestion: Use clear connectors like 'regardless of' and correct word order.

× Has your favourite food changed since you were a child? -> It's not change Mart.

✓ It hasn't changed much.

'It's not change Mart' is ungrammatical. The correct form uses present perfect negative 'hasn't changed' to refer to change since childhood. 'much' expresses small degree of change. Suggestion: Use present perfect for actions or changes that relate to a time period up to now.

× I love a noodle and I still love it, but it's changed a little bit about the level of those spicy because right now I can't tolerate the more spicy food.

✓ I love noodles and I still do, but my tolerance for spicy food has changed a little because I can't tolerate very spicy food anymore.

Use plural 'noodles' for the general food. 'I still love it' okay but 'I still do' is natural. 'it's changed a little bit about the level of those spicy' is incorrect; use 'my tolerance for spicy food has changed a little'. Use present perfect 'has changed' for change over time. 'the more spicy food' should be 'very spicy food' or 'extremely spicy food'. Suggestion: Use natural collocations ('tolerance for spicy food') and correct tense.

× So I love uh, noodle with a Tom Yum soup.

✓ So I love noodles with Tom Yum soup.

Use plural 'noodles' for the general dish and omit article before 'Tom Yum soup'. 'a Tom Yum soup' is usually 'Tom Yum soup' or 'a bowl of Tom Yum soup'. Suggestion: Use correct article usage for uncountable/meal names (no article) or specify 'a bowl of' if countable.