Food— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more natural and concise: give one main favourite, explain briefly why, and avoid repetition/unnatural phrasing. Use linking words to add a reason. Keep answer to 2–3 sentences.

Example: My favourite food is fried chicken, especially chicken sandwiches with a spicy sauce. I love it because the meat is juicy and the sauce adds a lot of flavour, which makes it a comforting meal.

Suggestion: Provide a direct topic sentence and then add a short specific detail or example using a linking word. Avoid hesitation words like “umm” and use past tense consistently.

Example: When I was young, I enjoyed eating fast food such as burgers and fries. Because they were convenient and tasted good to me, I ate them often after school.

Suggestion: Make the answer clearer and more specific: state how your diet changes with seasons and give one or two examples, using linking words to connect ideas. Keep sentences natural and concise.

Example: Yes, I do. My diet changes with the seasons; for example, I eat more fresh salads and fruit in summer, but in winter I prefer warm soups and stews to stay warm.

Suggestion: Answer directly and clearly: state whether it has changed, explain why with specific reasons and examples, and avoid awkward grammar. Use past and present tenses correctly and keep to 2–3 sentences.

Example: Yes, my favourite foods have changed since childhood. I used to eat a lot of fast food like pizza and burgers when I was a child, but now I prefer healthier meals such as grilled chicken and salads because I pay more attention to my diet.

× My favorite food is chicken sandwiches and deep fry chicken with extra sauce.

✓ My favorite foods are chicken sandwiches and deep-fried chicken with extra sauce.

The subject 'My favorite food' lists two items, so the noun should be plural ('foods') or rephrase. Also 'deep fry chicken' is incorrect form: use adjective 'deep-fried' before 'chicken'. Use hyphenated adjective 'deep-fried' and plural agreement 'are' for compound subject.

× Umm, the food I like when I was young includes fast food.

✓ Umm, the food I liked when I was young included fast food.

The main clause refers to the past ('when I was young'), so verbs should be in past tense: 'like' -> 'liked' and 'includes' -> 'included'. Maintain consistent past tense to match the time frame.

× Yes I do. I eat different foods at different times of the year because it shows different months with different seasons.

✓ Yes, I do. I eat different foods at different times of the year because different months have different seasons.

The phrase 'it shows different months with different seasons' is awkward and ungrammatical. Use present simple 'have' to state a general fact: 'different months have different seasons.' Also add a comma after 'Yes' for natural speech pacing.

× Yes, I also think that because I watch myself how I had grown up when I was just a child, I used to like eating fast food, pizza, burgers, et cetera, others and.

✓ Yes. I also think that when I look back at how I grew up as a child, I used to like eating fast food such as pizza and burgers.

The original sentence has multiple structural problems: incorrect tense sequence ('had grown up' is unnecessary), awkward phrasing ('watch myself how I had grown up'), and redundant/incorrect list ending ('et cetera, others and'). Use 'when I look back' or 'when I think about' and simple past 'grew up' to describe past development. Replace 'et cetera, others and' with 'such as' and list examples. Break into clearer clauses and remove extra conjunctions.