Food— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence naming a favourite (or stating none), then give 1–2 specific reasons or examples. Avoid fillers (uh, um) and repetition. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., the specific food name) and keep to 2–4 sentences. Link ideas with simple connectors like because or and.

Example: I don't have a single favourite food, because I enjoy many dishes. However, I particularly like falafel because it is popular in my country and has a crunchy texture and fragrant spices. I often eat it with salad or pita bread.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence naming the foods you liked as a child, then explain why with specific details. Avoid unclear words (e.g., 'Monday') and repetitive phrases. Use simple linking words like because or so and keep to 2–3 sentences.

Example: When I was young I liked many foods, especially milk and fresh fruit. I liked milk because it helped me grow and fruit because it was sweet and easy to eat as a snack. So my childhood diet was simple and healthy.

Suggestion: Answer directly (yes or no), then give 1–2 clear, specific examples of seasonal changes in your diet and why they happen. Avoid irrelevant or confused details and reduce hesitations. Use linking words like for example or because to connect ideas.

Example: Yes, I eat different foods depending on the season. For example, in summer I prefer salads and cold fruits because they refresh me, while in winter I eat more soups and stews to keep warm.

Suggestion: Start with a clear yes/no statement about whether your favourite food changed. Then briefly describe what you liked before and what you like now with specific examples and reasons. Remove filler words and repetitions; use linking words like but or however.

Example: Yes, my favourite food has changed a little. As a child I preferred simple vegetables like boiled carrots and onions, but now I enjoy a wider variety such as roasted vegetables and salads because they have more flavour and different textures.

× I don't have a specific favorite food because I really like range of a wide range of foods.

✓ I don't have a specific favorite food because I really like a wide range of foods.

The phrase 'range of a wide range' is redundant and incorrectly ordered. Use the quantifier phrase 'a wide range of' before the noun 'foods'. Suggestion: place 'a' before 'wide range' and remove the extra 'range'.

× I would say I really like uh, follow because Follow is a very international food in my country.

✓ I would say I really like falafel because it is a very popular international food in my country.

The word 'follow/Follow' appears to be a mispronunciation or wrong word; use the correct noun 'falafel' (or the intended dish) and replace the repeated noun with the pronoun 'it' to avoid repetition. Also 'very international food' is awkward; 'a very popular international food' is clearer.

× When I was young I was like all food, but I really like Monday because Monday include vital, vital and nutrients.

✓ When I was young I liked all kinds of food, but I especially liked mung bean soup because it included vitamins and nutrients.

The student mixes present and past tenses. 'When I was young' requires past tense: 'liked' and 'included'. 'I was like all food' is ungrammatical; use 'liked all kinds of food'. 'Monday' seems to be a wrong word; likely 'mung bean soup' or a dish — replace with intended noun. 'vital, vital and nutrients' is incorrect; use 'vitamins and nutrients'.

× Yeah, it's really interesting question for me.

✓ Yes, that's a really interesting question for me.

Use 'Yes' instead of 'Yeah' in more formal test speech and include the demonstrative 'that' to refer to 'question'. The original lacks the determiner 'a/that' before 'really interesting question'.

× I sometimes face this problem when I my when I will on my work.

✓ I sometimes face this problem when I am at work.

The original repeats fragments and mixes tenses and word order. Use present simple 'I sometimes face' with the clause 'when I am at work' to show the situation. Remove extra words 'my' and 'will' which are incorrect here.

× I sometimes different foods during my driving car different times, for example.

✓ Sometimes I eat different foods while driving, for example.

The original is missing a verb after 'I sometimes' and has awkward noun phrases. Use 'I eat different foods' and 'while driving' to express simultaneous action. Place 'for example' at the end for clarity.

× When I was young, followers include, uh, vegetables, for example, onion, umm, onion rides, uh, oil, uh, oil and other, uh, vegetables.

✓ When I was young, my meals included vegetables, for example onions, rice, oil and other vegetables.

After 'When I was young' use past tense: 'included' rather than 'include'. The word 'followers' is incorrect; use 'my meals' or 'my diet'. Also correct list items: 'onions, rice, oil' and remove filler words. Ensure plural 'onions' and consistent nouns.

× Uh, but at the moment it's include, uh, different vegetables.

✓ But at the moment it includes different vegetables.

For present time use present simple 'includes' (third person singular) not 'include'. Also replace 'it' with the appropriate noun if needed (for example, 'my diet includes...'). Ensure subject-verb agreement: third person singular requires '-s' on the verb.