Food— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence naming the dish, then give 2–3 specific supporting details using linking words (for example, "because" or "and"). Correct grammar (e.g., "Nepal's national food" → "Nepal's national dish") and avoid redundant phrases like "the most thing is."

Example: My favourite dish is Dal Bhat Tarkari, Nepal's national meal. It usually includes steamed rice, spiced lentils and a variety of seasonal vegetables, and is often served with pickles and a meat or curry. I like it because the flavours are balanced and most ingredients are fresh and organic.

Suggestion: Answer directly and avoid filler words. Begin with a clear topic sentence about the food you liked as a child, then describe it with specific, accurate vocabulary and linking words. Avoid unclear phrases and correct names (e.g., "Tiramaki" likely "tamagoyaki" or "tiramaki" unclear; describe ingredients precisely).

Example: When I was younger I loved sushi, especially maki rolls with fresh fish and rice. The rolls often include fish roe and are low in fat, so I felt they were healthy. I liked them because they tasted light and fresh.

Suggestion: Be clearer and more grammatical. Start with a direct yes/no plus reason, then give a specific example and use linking words like "because" and "for example." Replace vague phrases like "change my city for the stories" with "travel to different cities."

Example: Yes, I eat different foods throughout the year because I travel to different cities for visits. For example, in the hills I eat more hearty stews, while by the coast I try fresh seafood. This means my diet changes with the local specialties.

Suggestion: Give a clear opinion and explain with specific reasons and examples. Avoid vague or incorrect words (e.g., "cults," "pools are fending"). Use linking words such as "because," "so," and "for example," and keep to 2–3 supporting sentences.

Example: Yes, my tastes have changed over the years because I have tried many international cuisines while travelling. For example, I now prefer lighter, spicier dishes like Thai curries instead of the simple foods I ate as a child. This change is because I enjoy experimenting with new flavours.

× It is a Nepal's national food.

✓ It is Nepal's national food.

Using the definite article 'a' before a possessive construction with 'Nepal's' is incorrect. Say 'Nepal's national food' without 'a'. This is because 'Nepal's' already marks possession, so the article is unnecessary.

× It is a composite.

✓ It is a combination of dishes.

The word 'composite' is grammatically acceptable but unnatural here. A native phrasing is 'a combination of dishes' which clearly describes a meal made of several items. Keep the sentence structure simple: subject + linking verb + noun phrase.

× It comes with lentils, rice, vegetables and few curries.

✓ It comes with lentils, rice, vegetables and a few curries.

The phrase 'few curries' without an article implies scarcity; when you mean 'some', use 'a few'. Add 'a' to indicate a small number rather than almost none.

× And the most thing is it this is very organic.

✓ The most important thing is that it is very organic.

The original sentence has word order and extra words causing confusion. Use the common pattern 'The most important thing is that + clause' and place 'very organic' after 'is'.

× The first thing is I'm still young and I like Japanese food called Tiramaki.

✓ First, I'm still young and I like a Japanese dish called Tiramaki.

Use 'a' before 'Japanese dish' to introduce one example. 'First,' is a better discourse marker than 'The first thing is'. Maintain present simple for preferences. Also use 'dish' rather than 'food' when naming a specific item.

× It comes from a chronicle save with, uh, fish eggs, uh, it is very healthy for human life.

✓ It is made with fish eggs and is considered very healthy.

'Chronicle save' is incorrect and unclear. Simplify to 'made with' to describe ingredients and combine clauses with 'and' or make two sentences. 'For human life' is awkward; 'considered very healthy' is more natural.

× And most of the tea, most of the eggs are raw.

✓ Most of the time, most of the eggs are raw.

The original 'tea' is likely a mispronunciation of 'time'. Use 'Most of the time' to indicate frequency. The present participle form is not required; correct phrase is 'most of the eggs are raw.'

× Yes, I eat different foods at a different time of the year because most of the time I change my city for the stories, for the visiting purpose.

✓ Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year because I often move cities for work or visits.

'At a different time of the year' should be 'at different times of the year' for plural occasions. 'Change my city' is unnatural; use 'move cities' or 'travel to different cities'. 'For the stories' is unclear; replace with 'for work or visits' depending on context. Prepositions and word choices needed correction.

× So every city has their own traditional food and I try it by air wise, sometimes even weekly wise.

✓ So every city has its own traditional food and I try them, sometimes even every week.

Use 'its' to agree with singular 'every city' (not 'their'). 'Try it' should match plural 'foods' so use 'try them'. Phrases 'by air wise' and 'weekly wise' are nonstandard; replace with 'sometimes even every week.'

× Has your favourite food changed since you were a child? Student: Yes, food has been changing year by year because nowadays we are exploring many places, many cults are and and time wise and is wise.

✓ Yes, my food preferences have changed year by year because we are exploring many places and cultures over time.

Use present perfect 'have changed' to respond to 'since you were a child'. 'Food has been changing' is awkward; 'my food preferences have changed' is clearer. 'Many cults' is incorrect for 'cultures'. Remove redundant words 'and and time wise and is wise' and use 'over time'.

× We have different taste. So much of pools are fending when outside and now.

✓ We have different tastes, so many people prefer eating out now.

'Different taste' needs plural 'tastes' to agree with 'we'. 'So much of pools are fending when outside and now' is unclear and ungrammatical; interpret as 'many people prefer eating out' and rephrase. Correct pronouns and noun forms to make meaning clear.