Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Ҳамин тавр давом диҳед, вале бояд рӯйхат ва таҳрири ҷавобатонро беҳтар кунед: ҷавобҳоро кӯтоҳ ва мустақим нигоҳ доред (максимум 3–4 ҷумла), такрорро пешгирӣ кунед, беайбӣ ва равшан шарҳ диҳед. Илова бар ин, аз калимаҳои такрорӣ (masalan, “small” ва “cute”) ва хатогиҳои грамматикӣ мисли “has a an” ё “the buildings” гӯё ё беҳтар истифода набаред. Истифодабарии калимаҳои пайвандӣ, мисолан “for instance” ё “because”, ҷавоби шуморо логикӣ ва табиӣ нишон медиҳад.

Example: I don’t often take photos of buildings, but I sometimes do when a building looks unusual or has an interesting shape. For instance, last week I photographed a small market because its colorful stalls and curved roof caught my eye.

Suggestion: Ҷавобро бештар табиӣ ва грамматикӣ тозатар кунед: оғоз кунед бо ҷумлаи мавзӯъ, сипас далелҳои мушаххас ва истифодаи пайвандҳоро (мисол: “because”, “for example”). Ҳамчунин исми кишварро бидуни артикл бигӯед («in Saudi Arabia», на «in the Saudi Arabia»), ва аз такрори «This is» худдорӣ намоед. Нуқтаҳои визуалӣ ва ҳисси шахсӣ илова кунед, то ҷавоб муфассалтар шавад.

Example: Yes. I would love to visit the Burj Khalifa in Saudi Arabia because it is the tallest building in the world. I’m curious to see its sleek design and the panoramic views from the observation deck.

× I don't often take photos of the buildings and there are different occasions I might take them, for example if the building is so unique and has a an unusual shape or figure.

✓ I don't often take photos of buildings and there are different occasions when I might take them, for example if a building is very unique and has an unusual shape or form.

Using the definite article 'the' before 'buildings' is incorrect when speaking generally; use no article. 'A an' is a typo and should be a single 'an' or 'a'; here 'an unusual' is correct. Add 'when' after 'occasions' to connect the clause. 'So unique' is informal and redundant; 'very unique' or simply 'unique' is better. 'Figure' is unnatural for building shape; use 'form'. Suggestions: remove unnecessary articles, fix typos, add 'when' for clarity, choose appropriate noun ('form').

× For example, recently I took a photo of a small market which was really small and cute.

✓ For example, recently I took a photo of a small market that was really cute.

The repetition 'small market... really small' is redundant; remove repeated adjective. Use 'that' instead of 'which' for essential clauses describing the market. The past tense 'took' is appropriate for 'recently'. Suggestion: avoid repeating the same adjective and prefer 'that' for defining clauses.

× Of course, there is a building I would like to visit.

✓ Of course, there is a building I would like to visit.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable, but 'there is a building I would like to visit' is slightly awkward; you could say 'Of course, there is a building I would like to visit' or more naturally 'Of course, there is a building I'd like to visit.' No change required for grammar; suggestion: contract 'I would' to 'I'd' in spoken English.

× This is located in the Saudi Arabia and has its name Burj Khalifa.

✓ It is located in Saudi Arabia and is called the Burj Khalifa.

Do not use 'the' before country names like 'Saudi Arabia' in this context. Use 'is located in Saudi Arabia'. 'Has its name' is unnatural; use 'is called' or 'is named'. Also add the definite article before 'Burj Khalifa' when using 'the' is optional; 'the Burj Khalifa' is common in English. Suggestion: replace 'This' with 'It', remove 'the' before the country, and use 'is called'.

× This is known as the tallest building in the world, which has fascinating and unique figure shapes, color.

✓ It is known as the tallest building in the world and has a fascinating, unique shape and color.

Use 'It' rather than 'This' for continuity. The relative clause starting with 'which' is awkward; join with 'and'. 'Figure shapes' is incorrect; use 'shape'. 'Color' should be singular and paired with 'shape' using 'and'. Use commas to separate adjectives 'fascinating, unique'. Suggestion: simplify the sentence structure, use correct noun 'shape', and list adjectives properly.