Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 문장 구조와 문법을 바로잡고, 불필요한 말버릇(um, uh)을 줄이며 응답을 더 간결하고 자연스럽게 만드세요. 주제 문장으로 바로 답하고 이유를 덧붙이며 연결어를 사용해 문장을 정돈하세요. 예: 주어-동사 일치(‘I am living’ -> ‘I live’), 수량 표현 정리(‘a lot of tall buildings’), 수동적 중복 제거(‘surrounded by tall buildings’).

Example: Yes. I live in an apartment, and there are many tall buildings nearby. Because the whole neighborhood is full of apartment towers, I’m surrounded by high-rise buildings.

Suggestion: 과거/현재 시제와 관사 사용을 정확히 하세요(‘did sometime’ → ‘do sometimes’, ‘that buildings’ → ‘those buildings’). 불필요한 머뭇거림을 줄이고, 구체적 이유와 예시를 논리적으로 연결하세요. 연결어(For example, because, so)를 사용해 흐름을 매끄럽게 하세요.

Example: Yes, I do sometimes. I like to photograph buildings when their design is unusual or eye-catching. For example, when I visited Singapore, I took photos of Marina Bay Sands because its architecture is very distinctive.

Suggestion: 의도를 명확히 표현하고 문장을 간결하게 하세요. 중복 표현(‘I want to when I want to go’)과 발음/철자 오류(‘airfield tower’, ‘Rand mark’)를 바로잡으세요. 건물 이름이나 특징을 정확히 말하고 이유와 기대를 한두 문장으로 정리하세요.

Example: I would like to visit the Eiffel Tower in Paris. It’s an iconic landmark with a unique iron structure, and I want to see the views from the top because it’s not something you can experience everywhere.

× Oh yes, I have a lot of uh tall buildings and nearby home umm because I living in apartment.

✓ Oh yes, there are a lot of tall buildings near my home because I live in an apartment.

'a lot of buildings' requires a plural noun and appropriate subject; original has 'I have a lot of tall buildings and nearby home' which is incorrect word order and possession. Use 'there are' to state existence of plural items (Grammar Problem Type 3 and 1), and change 'living in apartment' to simple present 'live in an apartment' for correct verb form. Suggestion: use 'there is/there are' for existence and ensure noun number agreement and correct subject-verb form.

× The apartment is like a tall building, so I'm surrounding by the tall buildings.

✓ The apartment is a tall building, so I'm surrounded by other tall buildings.

Use 'surrounded by' (past participle adjective) not 'surrounding by'. Also 'like a tall building' is unnecessary and unnatural; use 'is a tall building'. Use 'other' to indicate additional buildings. Suggestion: use correct participle form 'surrounded' and appropriate preposition 'by' with passive participle.

× Ah, yes, I did sometime, uh, like, uh, some kinds of looks.

✓ Ah, yes, I sometimes did, like, take photos of different looks.

'Sometime' vs 'sometimes': use 'sometimes' for frequency. 'Did sometime' is wrong tense/word choice; better: 'I sometimes took photos' or 'I sometimes do'. Maintain simple past if talking about past occasions: 'I sometimes took photos'. Suggestion: use correct adverb 'sometimes' and match verb tense to context.

× The structure is unique.

✓ The structure is unique.

Sentence is grammatically correct; no quantifier error. No correction necessary. Suggestion: keep as is.

× I take some photos of that buildings.

✓ I take some photos of those buildings.

Use plural demonstrative 'those' with plural noun 'buildings'. 'That' is for singular; 'those' matches plural. Suggestion: match demonstratives to noun number.

× Uh, for example, when I go went to the Singapore, the Marina Bay Sands is really unique structures.

✓ For example, when I went to Singapore, the Marina Bay Sands was a really unique structure.

Use simple past 'went' for a completed trip. Omit article before country name 'Singapore'. 'Marina Bay Sands' is a singular complex, so use singular 'structure' and match tense: past 'was'. Suggestion: use correct tense for past events, drop unnecessary articles before proper nouns, and ensure singular/plural agreement.

× I want to when I want to go to the airfield tower because this is the Rand mark of the Paris and I want to see the structures is really unique and it's not a common thing, so I want to see.

✓ I want to visit the Eiffel Tower in Paris because it is a landmark and its structure is really unique; it's not common, so I want to see it.

Original has redundant and misordered phrases: 'I want to when I want to go' is incorrect; use a clear infinitive 'I want to visit'. 'Airfield tower' is wrong word for Eiffel Tower. 'Rand mark' should be 'landmark'. 'the Paris' should be 'Paris' without article. 'structures is' has subject-verb and number errors; use 'its structure is' or 'the structure is'. Also add object 'it' for 'see it'. Suggestion: simplify sentence structure, correct word choice for proper nouns, and ensure subject-verb agreement and proper article use.