Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the answer more natural and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct tense and articles, and add one brief supporting detail using a linking word. For example, say where you live and contrast it with cities.

Example: I live in a rural area, so there aren’t any tall buildings near my home. Instead, there are mostly small houses and farmland, which makes the area very quiet and green.

Suggestion: Avoid fillers and improve grammar and word choice. Give a concise topic sentence, then add specific supporting details with linking words (e.g., 'because' or 'so') to explain your preference and mention occasional exceptions if any.

Example: Yes, I love photography, but I rarely photograph buildings because I prefer natural scenes. For instance, I often take pictures of mountains, beaches and flowers when I go hiking or travel.

Suggestion: Remove hesitations and correct expressions. Give a clear topic sentence and add one or two specific reasons using linking words (e.g., 'because' or 'so') to make the answer more informative and natural.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit the Burj Khalifa in the future because it is the tallest building in the world and offers amazing city views. Also, I want to see its architecture and take photos from the observation deck.

× I'm living in rural area, so nearby my home there was no tall building.

✓ I live in a rural area, so there are no tall buildings near my home.

Use simple present for states or regular facts ('I live'). Include the article 'a' before 'rural area'. Use 'there are' for plural existence and place the locative phrase 'near my home' after the noun phrase for natural word order.

× I'm living in rural area, so nearby my home there was no tall building.

✓ I live in a rural area, so there are no tall buildings near my home.

The noun phrase needs the indefinite article 'a' ('a rural area'). Also 'tall building' should be plural when referring generally ('tall buildings'). This correction overlaps with tense and plural issues; include articles correctly.

× Yes, I am a huge photo lover but uh I do not take photo of building uh I take photos of natural like mountain, beaches, flowers.

✓ Yes, I am a big photography lover, but I do not take photos of buildings; I take photos of nature, such as mountains, beaches, and flowers.

Use simple present for habitual actions ('I do not take', 'I take'). Use plural 'photos' and 'buildings' for general statements. Use 'photography lover' or 'big fan of photography' for natural expression. Use 'nature' rather than 'natural' and list nouns in plural and separate items with commas.

× Yes, I am a huge photo lover but uh I do not take photo of building uh I take photos of natural like mountain, beaches, flowers.

✓ Yes, I am a big photography lover, but I do not take photos of buildings; I take photos of nature, such as mountains, beaches, and flowers.

Use 'of' after 'photos' to indicate subject ('photos of buildings'). Use 'such as' to introduce examples. Ensure correct preposition choice and parallel noun forms.

× Yes, uh, in future I want to visit Burj Khalifa because, uh, it is a world largest building, uh, and it is my dream to visit there.

✓ Yes, in the future I want to visit the Burj Khalifa because it is the largest building in the world, and it is my dream to visit it.

Use 'in the future' for time expression. Use 'the Burj Khalifa' with the definite article. Use the superlative form 'the largest' with the phrase 'in the world' for correct comparison. Use the pronoun 'it' not 'there' to refer to the building.

× Yes, uh, in future I want to visit Burj Khalifa because, uh, it is a world largest building, uh, and it is my dream to visit there.

✓ Yes, in the future I want to visit the Burj Khalifa because it is the largest building in the world, and it is my dream to visit it.

Proper nouns of famous buildings often take the definite article ('the Burj Khalifa'). Also use 'the largest' (superlative) and include 'in the world'. Use 'it' to refer back to the building rather than 'there'.