Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cải thiện cấu trúc câu và phát âm, trả lời trực tiếp ngắn gọn rồi bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ dư thừa; dùng câu ngắn, rõ ràng và liên kết logic bằng từ nối như 'however' hoặc 'but'. Ví dụ nêu rõ số tầng và mô tả ngắn về khu vực.

Example: No, there are no tall buildings near my home. My hometown is a small rural area, so most buildings are low — the tallest ones are about five storeys high. However, there are a few small hotels and houses scattered around the town centre.

Suggestion: Trả lời trực tiếp, sửa ngữ pháp và hoàn thiện ý. Nên dùng từ vựng chính xác (e.g., 'interesting', 'background that draws my attention') và kết thúc câu thay vì bỏ lửng. Thêm lý do và ví dụ cụ thể để làm câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.

Example: No, I don't usually take photos of buildings. I find natural scenes more interesting, so I tend to photograph landscapes or trees that catch my eye. For example, I like taking pictures of a row of blooming trees near my house because of their colours and shape.

Suggestion: Trả lời thẳng và mở rộng bằng lý do cụ thể. Sử dụng liên từ để liên kết ý (e.g., 'because', 'so') và mô tả rõ hơn về tòa nhà, chức năng và mục tiêu nghề nghiệp. Tránh câu quá ngắn, cung cấp thêm chi tiết về thời gian hoặc lý do cá nhân.

Example: Yes, there is a building I would like to visit. It's an English language centre in the city centre because it offers advanced teacher training courses. I hope to join it as a teacher in the future to improve my teaching skills and work with international students.

× To be honest, no, because my hometown is a small countryside, so this there are some kind of accommodation which you related to a small house or the hotel, but it's just about the highest is five floors.

✓ To be honest, no. My hometown is a small rural area, so there are only small types of accommodation like houses or small hotels, and the tallest building is only about five floors.

The original sentence has multiple structure and word choice problems: incorrect phrase 'a small countryside' (use 'a small rural area'), unnecessary conjunctions and pronouns ('so this there are'), and awkward relative clause 'which you related to'. Also word order 'the highest is five floors' is incorrect. Suggest breaking into shorter sentences, use plural 'there are', correct nouns and clearer phrasing. Use: 'so there are only small types of accommodation like houses or small hotels, and the tallest building is only about five floors.'

× To be honest, no. This is because I don't find it have any interest thing that I have to take photo with.

✓ To be honest, no. I don't find buildings interesting enough to take photos of.

The sentence shows incorrect verb forms and awkward noun phrases: 'I don't find it have any interest thing' is ungrammatical. Use the pattern 'find something + adjective' (find buildings interesting) and correct verb 'to take photos of' rather than 'take photo with'. Keep present simple for habitual actions.

× I just usually take photo with some background which is draw my attention.

✓ I usually just take photos of backgrounds that draw my attention.

Errors include word order, incorrect verb form 'which is draw', and incorrect preposition 'take photo with'. Use plural 'photos', place adverb 'usually' appropriately, and use relative clause with correct verb 'that draw my attention'.

× For example it can be some beautiful trees or.

✓ For example, it might be some beautiful trees or other scenery.

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. Add a suitable noun ('other scenery') to complete the list and use modal 'might' for possibility. Also include a comma after 'For example'.

× Oh yes, obviously. There is a building located in the center of my city.

✓ Oh yes, obviously. There is a building located in the center of my city.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable but check context: 'There is' correctly introduces existence. No change required.

× This is a professional center about English and I want to join it as a teacher in the future.

✓ It is an English language center, and I want to join it as a teacher in the future.

Improve word choice and noun phrase: 'professional center about English' is awkward; use 'English language center'. Present simple 'I want' is appropriate for a future intention when followed by 'in the future'.