Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct grammar; open with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details using linking words. Avoid unclear phrases like "I love sharing at these buildings" and the fragment "For a long time."

Example: Yes — I live in Mumbai, so there are many tall, modern buildings near my home. For example, several residential towers and office blocks line the main road, which gives the area a skyline-like feel.

Suggestion: Good content and clarity but compress repetitive ideas and add a linking phrase to connect reasons or habits. Use one strong example to show when and why you take photos.

Example: Yes, I often take photos and short videos of buildings because I find their designs beautiful. For instance, I usually photograph the skyline at sunset when the light highlights the glass facades.

Suggestion: Answer is clear and relevant; improve cohesion by using linking words and slightly more varied vocabulary. Replace repetitive sentence starters and give one specific reason or detail about what you want to see inside.

Example: Yes — I would love to visit the Burj Khalifa in Dubai because it is the tallest building in the world and has impressive interior design. In particular, I want to see the observation deck at sunset when the city and sky create dramatic colors.

× It is a home to amazing architecture and buildings.

✓ It is home to amazing architecture and buildings.

Using 'a' before 'home' is incorrect here. The phrase 'be home to' is an idiomatic construction meaning 'contain' or 'feature', so 'a' should be omitted. Suggestion: learn the fixed expression 'be home to' and use it without an article.

× I love sharing at these buildings.

✓ I love hanging out at these buildings.

The verb 'sharing' is incorrect and the preposition 'at' with 'sharing' doesn't convey the intended meaning. Likely intended meaning is to spend time there, for which 'hang out' is appropriate. 'Hanging out' is the present participle but here used as a gerund after 'love'. Suggestion: use verbs that collocate with the intended activity, e.g., 'visit', 'hang out', 'spend time'.

× For a long time.

✓ I have been doing that for a long time.

'For a long time.' is a sentence fragment lacking a subject and verb. It should be attached to the previous sentence or expanded into a full sentence using proper tense, e.g., present perfect continuous 'I have been doing that for a long time.' Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments by including subject and verb and matching tense to context.

× Yes, I love looking and taking photos and videos of these buildings.

✓ Yes, I love looking at and taking photos and videos of these buildings.

After 'love', gerunds are fine, but the verb 'look' requires the preposition 'at' when referring to observing something. The original omitted 'at'. Suggestion: use correct verb-preposition pairs, e.g., 'look at', 'look for'.

× It is my dream to visit the Burj Khalifa in Dubai as it is the tallest building in the world.

✓ It is my dream to visit the Burj Khalifa in Dubai because it is the tallest building in the world.

Using 'as' to mean 'because' is understandable but can be ambiguous or formal; 'because' is clearer in spoken answers. This is not a strict grammatical error but a register/clarity issue in 'as' usage. Suggestion: use 'because' for clear causal explanation in spoken responses.

× It is also accompanied by some very beautiful architecture and interior.

✓ It also features very beautiful architecture and interiors.

'It is also accompanied by' is passive and awkward when describing a building's features; 'it' as subject is fine but 'accompanied by' suggests an external agent. Also 'interior' should be plural or 'interior design' to match meaning. Suggestion: use active verbs like 'feature' and correct noun form 'interiors' or 'interior design'.

× Also, the building looks very pretty during sunset as it makes the building look more dramatic and colorful.

✓ Also, the building looks very beautiful at sunset because the light makes it look more dramatic and colorful.

'Pretty' is informal; 'beautiful' is better for architecture. 'During sunset' is acceptable but 'at sunset' is more natural. 'As it makes the building look' wrongly uses 'it' ambiguously; specify 'the light' as the subject. Suggestion: prefer clearer subjects and natural prepositions ('at sunset') and choose appropriate adjectives for context.