Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more natural and concise: start with a direct topic sentence, avoid unnecessary fillers, correct grammar (e.g. "it is difficult to notice" → "they are rare"), and add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Keep to no more than 3–4 sentences.

Example: No, there aren't many tall buildings near my home. I live in a small town, so most buildings are low-rise; for example, the tallest building here is only three storeys. However, when I visit the nearby city I notice many high-rises and skyscrapers.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence and improve grammar and cohesion. Replace awkward contrast phrasing with a natural alternative (e.g. "rather than" → "instead"). Add one brief reason and a specific example to enrich the answer.

Example: No, I don't usually take photos of buildings. Instead, I prefer photographing nature because I enjoy capturing colours and movement; for example, I often take close-ups of flowers and birds in the local park.

Suggestion: Start with a direct statement naming the building, correct grammar (e.g. "established next to" → "built near"; "it provides"), and add a specific reason and linking word to explain why you want to visit. Mention who you would go with and one concrete activity.

Example: Yes, I'd like to visit a new leisure complex built near my hometown. It provides a theatre, a shopping mall and several cafes, so I want to go with my family to watch a film and then have dinner at one of the restaurants.

× Actually no. I live in a small town where it is a difficult to notice any tall building.

✓ Actually no. I live in a small town where it is difficult to notice any tall buildings.

The phrase 'it is a difficult to notice' is ungrammatical. Use 'it is difficult to notice' or omit 'it' and say 'it is difficult to notice any tall buildings.' Also 'building' should be plural because 'any' refers to an unspecified number of buildings. Suggestion: say 'it is difficult to notice any tall buildings' or 'there are no tall buildings that are easy to notice.'

× However, I see many tall buildings in big cities.

✓ However, I see many tall buildings in big cities.

This sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed. Included for completeness.

× Actually, I do not like to take pictures of building rather than I prefer to take pictures of nature, such as birds, flowers, plants and so on.

✓ Actually, I do not like to take pictures of buildings; rather, I prefer to take pictures of nature, such as birds, flowers, and plants.

Use plural 'buildings' after 'pictures of'. 'Rather than' is used for comparison of verbs or clauses; here 'rather' plus comma is better to contrast preferences. Also include an Oxford comma for clarity. Suggestion: 'I do not like to take pictures of buildings; rather, I prefer photographs of nature.'

× Yes, a new building established in next to my hometown.

✓ Yes, a new building was established next to my hometown.

The original lacks a proper verb form and misuses 'in next to'. Use past passive 'was established' to indicate when the building came into being and 'next to' (no 'in'). If the building is ongoing or present, you could also say 'There is a new building next to my hometown.'

× It is provide many facilities like theatre, shopping mall, cafes, restaurants and many more.

✓ It provides many facilities like a theatre, a shopping mall, cafes, restaurants, and more.

Use the third-person singular present 'provides' to agree with singular subject 'it'. Also include articles where needed ('a theatre', 'a shopping mall') and change 'many more' to 'and more' for natural English. List items should be parallel.

× So I want to visit with my family members.

✓ So I want to visit it with my family.

After 'visit' we usually include the object ('visit it') rather than 'visit with' which implies accompanying. Also 'family members' is wordy; 'my family' is more natural. Suggestion: 'I want to visit it with my family.'