Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then give one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition and filler sounds (e.g., “uh”). Correct articles and word order (e.g., “There aren’t any skyscrapers near my house, but I can see some in the distance”).

Example: There aren’t any skyscrapers near my house, but I can see some in the distance. For example, on clear days I can spot a group of high-rise buildings with illuminated windows, which look especially bright at sunrise. I enjoy visiting tall buildings for the view.

Suggestion: Answer directly and avoid hesitation and repetition. Use a clear structure: state habit, then give specific examples and a brief reason. Use appropriate vocabulary (e.g., “historic buildings,” “landmarks,” “photograph” instead of “click”).

Example: Not usually. I prefer photographing historic buildings and famous landmarks because they have interesting details and stories. For instance, I would photograph an iconic skyscraper like the Burj Khalifa to capture its height and architectural features.

Suggestion: Be fluent and specific: give a clear topic sentence then add concise supporting details and a reason. Correct grammar (e.g., “I’d love to visit the Burj Khalifa in Dubai; it’s the tallest building in the world”). Replace vague phrases like “eye-catching” with precise descriptions of what you expect to see.

Example: Yes. I’d love to visit the Burj Khalifa in Dubai because it’s the tallest building in the world. I want to go to the observation deck to enjoy panoramic views of the city and take photos of the skyline at sunset.

× There are no the skyscrapers are not there around my house, but I can see them far away.

✓ There are no skyscrapers around my house, but I can see some far away.

The definite article 'the' is incorrectly used with 'skyscrapers' after 'no'. When saying 'no' before a plural noun, omit 'the' (Article errors - ID 22). Also 'are not there around my house' is awkward; use 'around my house' and contrast with 'I can see some far away' for clarity. ID:22

× Uh, there are the lights on the on these buildings.

✓ Uh, there are lights on these buildings.

The phrase 'the lights on the on these buildings' has unnecessary definite article 'the' and a repeated preposition 'on'. Use 'lights on these buildings' to refer generally to lights present on those buildings (Incorrect use of the definite article - ID 17). ID:17

× It shines whenever there is a sunrise.

✓ They shine at sunrise.

'It shines' is incorrect because 'lights' is plural; use 'they shine'. Also 'whenever there is a sunrise' is wordy; 'at sunrise' is natural. This involves adverbial timing and subject-verb agreement (Incorrect adverb placement and subject-verb agreement - ID 20 and related ID 27). ID:20

× I love to go on a tall building I love.

✓ I love visiting tall buildings.

'Go on a tall building' is unnatural; native speakers say 'visit' or 'go to' a building. The repeated 'I love' creates poor sentence structure. Rephrase to 'I love visiting tall buildings' for grammatical and stylistic correctness (Sentence structure errors - ID 26). ID:26

× Not usually, but I'll like to take the pictures of the building, which are historical, like mansions or uh, like, uh, the tallest building of the earth.

✓ Not usually, but I would like to take pictures of historic buildings, such as mansions or the tallest buildings in the world.

'I'll like' is incorrect; use 'I would like' for preference (Modal verb usage - ID 4). 'The pictures of the building, which are historical' is wordy and incorrect plural agreement; use 'pictures of historic buildings'. 'Tallest building of the earth' should be 'tallest buildings in the world.' ID:4

× I would definitely click the picture of that building.

✓ I would definitely take a picture of that building.

In English, 'take a picture' is the natural verb phrase; 'click the picture' is influenced by other varieties. Rephrase for natural sentence structure (Sentence structure errors - ID 26). ID:26

× Other than that, uh, I would not like to click a picture of.

✓ Other than that, I would not want to take pictures of them.

The original ends abruptly and lacks an object ('of' without object). Use 'take pictures of them' or 'take pictures' to complete idea. This is a sentence structure and completeness issue (Sentence structure errors - ID 26). ID:26

× As I have mentioned that I love to go to Dubai to watch out Burj Khalifa.

✓ As I mentioned, I would love to go to Dubai to see the Burj Khalifa.

'Watch out Burj Khalifa' is incorrect: 'watch out' is wrong verb and 'Burj Khalifa' needs 'the' as a specific building. Use 'see the Burj Khalifa.' Also revise 'As I have mentioned that' to 'As I mentioned' for conciseness (Incorrect use of pronouns/article and sentence structure - IDs 12 and 17 and 26). ID:12

× It is the tallest building of the earth and I have to I want to go on the top and see the view of the city.

✓ It is the tallest building in the world, and I want to go to the top and see the view of the city.

Use 'in the world' rather than 'of the earth' (idiomatic). 'I have to I want to' is redundant and incorrect; choose 'I want to'. Use 'go to the top' (not 'on the top'). This addresses article and preposition usage and redundant verbs (Incorrect use of the definite article/prepositions and sentence structure - IDs 17, 11, 26). ID:17

× It would be a really eye-catching.

✓ It would be really eye-catching.

'A really eye-catching' is ungrammatical because 'eye-catching' is an adjective and needs a noun after the article 'a' (e.g., 'a really eye-catching sight') or drop the article: 'really eye-catching.' Remove 'a' to correct adjective use (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs - ID 13). ID:13