Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the response more grammatical, concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail using a linking word. Avoid sentence fragments and incorrect prepositions.

Example: Yes. There are many tall buildings near my home. For example, the Babylon Hotel is a striking landmark because of its glass façade and height, and I often see it when I walk in the neighborhood.

Suggestion: Be more fluent and accurate: state your habit, give a clear reason and one specific detail. Use linking words (because, so) and correct verb forms and articles. Avoid filler words like 'uh'.

Example: Yes, I love photographing buildings and often post the best shots on Instagram because it helps me save memories and share interesting architecture with friends.

Suggestion: Answer directly then provide one specific example with a reason. Use correct tense and articles, avoid repetition and fillers. Keep it to two or three clear sentences.

Example: Yes. One building I would like to visit is the Eiffel Tower in France because its design and city views are world-famous, and I want to see Paris from the top.

× Yes, there are many tall buildings near to my home.

✓ Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home.

Use 'near' without the preposition 'to' in this context. 'Near to' is nonstandard in modern English; say 'near my home' to show proximity. Suggestion: Use 'near' + noun (near my home).

× One of them. Is the. Babylon Hotel is very beautiful.

✓ One of them is the Babylon Hotel; it is very beautiful.

Original has fragmented sentences and redundant verbs. Combine fragments into a single clear sentence: 'One of them is the Babylon Hotel' and follow with a comment 'it is very beautiful.' Use a semicolon or two sentences to connect related ideas. Suggestion: Avoid sentence fragments and ensure subject and verb present in each sentence.

× Yes, I love to take photos of buildings and publish it on Instagram because I'm photographing and uh, I enjoy, uh, save the memory about everything I saw it.

✓ Yes, I love taking photos of buildings and publishing them on Instagram because I enjoy saving memories of everything I see.

Multiple issues: after 'love' both 'to take' and 'taking' are acceptable, but maintain parallel structure for verbs: 'taking' and 'publishing.' 'It' should be plural 'them' to match 'photos.' 'I'm photographing' is awkward and unnecessary; use simple present 'I enjoy saving memories.' 'Saw' should be present 'see' to match habitual action. Use gerund forms 'saving' after 'enjoy.' Suggestion: Keep verb forms parallel and consistent tense for habitual activities; match pronouns to plural nouns.

× Yes, there are many buildings that I wish I can see it uh, at future in future.

✓ Yes, there are many buildings that I wish I could see in the future.

Use past form of modal 'could' after 'wish' to express desire about something not yet realized. Remove the redundant pronoun 'it' after 'see' and use the phrase 'in the future' (not 'at future' or 'in future'). Suggestion: After 'wish' for present/future desires, use 'could' + base verb; use 'in the future.'

× One of them is Eiffel Tower in French.

✓ One of them is the Eiffel Tower in France.

Use 'the' before landmark names like 'Eiffel Tower.' Use 'in France' to indicate the country, not 'in French' which refers to the language. Suggestion: Use 'the' with famous landmarks and 'in + country' to indicate location.

× It's very beautiful tower and.

✓ It's a very beautiful tower.

Add the article 'a' before 'very beautiful tower' and remove the trailing 'and' which leaves the sentence unfinished. Complete sentences require a full thought. Suggestion: Use appropriate articles before singular countable nouns and avoid leaving conjunctions without continuation.