Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Content is relevant but unclear and ungrammatical. Improve by giving a clear topic sentence, one or two specific supporting details, and correct vocabulary. Use linking words (for example, because, so, and) properly and avoid repetition. Keep answer to 2–4 concise sentences. Focus on specific benefits (housing, space efficiency, proximity to amenities) and correct word choices (e.g., "tall buildings" not "top buildings", "people to live" not "people to stay").

Example: Yes. There are many tall buildings near my home because Taiwan is a small and densely populated island. For example, high-rise apartments allow more people to live in a small area, and they often provide easy access to shops and public transport, which makes daily life more convenient.

Suggestion: Meaning is understandable but grammar and vocabulary are inaccurate. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a specific example with a reason, using linking words (for example, because, for instance). Correct word choice and tense will improve clarity. Keep to 2–4 sentences and avoid filler phrases.

Example: Yes, I often take photos of buildings, especially unusual or historic ones. For instance, I photographed an old medieval tower because it was huge and had fascinating stonework, and I wanted to remember the atmosphere and share the image with my friends.

Suggestion: The answer is largely unintelligible and off-topic. Respond directly with a clear topic sentence naming a particular building you'd like to visit, then give one or two specific reasons (location, history, architecture, personal interest). Use correct vocabulary and simple, grammatically correct sentences. Keep it concise and coherent.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit the National Palace Museum in Taipei because I am interested in Chinese art and history. It contains many ancient artifacts and I think seeing them in person would help me understand history better.

× So top, top buildings can provide more people to stay to live.

✓ Tall buildings can accommodate more people to live in.

The student used plural 'buildings' but phrased 'provide more people to stay to live' which is ungrammatical and redundant. 'Accommodate' is the correct verb for housing people; 'to stay to live' is redundant. Use singular/plural correctly and a clear verb: 'Tall buildings can accommodate more people to live in.'

× And I think top building is very good for Taiwan because it also provides people that can have a large place to study because you have some puppies.

✓ And I think tall buildings are very good for Taiwan because they provide people with more space to study.

Errors: incorrect demonstrative/pronoun agreement ('top building' should be 'tall buildings' or 'a tall building'), misuse of 'that' and awkward clause 'can have a large place to study because you have some puppies.' Likely 'puppies' is wrong word; removed. Use plural agreement and correct relative pronoun: 'they provide people with more space to study.'

× Yes, I will take photos with buildings, especially some special building like Next let's monks.

✓ Yes, I take photos of buildings, especially of special buildings like temples.

Use 'take photos of' not 'with' when photographing subjects. 'Some special building' needs plural or article; 'Next let's monks' is unclear—probably 'temples' or 'monasteries.' Correct preposition and noun forms: 'I take photos of buildings, especially of special buildings like temples.'

× I took a photo with wounding tower because this building is tending to be a very interesting.

✓ I took a photo with the leaning tower because this building was very interesting.

Tense consistency: 'took' is past, so description should be past 'was' not 'is tending to be.' 'Wounding tower' is likely 'leaning tower.' Use past simple description: 'because this building was very interesting.'

× This is the first time I saw a tower is very huge and old tower, so I will take a photo to recall this memory.

✓ It was the first time I had seen such a huge, old tower, so I took a photo to remember it.

Original has run-on and mismatched tenses. For past experience use past perfect 'had seen' or simple past 'saw' depending on context; here past perfect clarifies sequence. Use noun modifiers in correct order 'huge, old tower.' Use 'took a photo to remember it' for purpose in past.

× Yes, I would like to leave this dash to replace because it is more cautious people, so you have more members and also most of the time you are more close to your coffee transportation.

✓ Yes, I would like to move here because it is safer for people, there are more amenities, and it is usually closer to public transportation.

Sentence is unclear with wrong pronouns and nouns: 'leave this dash to replace' and 'more cautious people' are incorrect. Likely intent: 'move here' and 'safer for people.' 'Members' should be 'amenities' or 'services'; 'coffee transportation' is likely 'public transportation.' Replace with clear pronouns and noun choices and parallel structure.

× So I'm a student, it's no convenient for me to take a business vacation to school.

✓ Because I am a student, it is not convenient for me to go on a long trip or take a holiday away from school.

Use of 'it's no convenient' is wrong—should be 'it is not convenient.' 'Take a business vacation to school' is unclear; likely means 'go on a long trip away from school' or 'go on vacation.' Correct negation and clearer vocabulary: 'it is not convenient for me to go on a long trip away from school.'