Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và súc tích. Tránh lặp từ, sửa ngữ pháp (there aren't → there aren't any tall buildings), và cấu trúc câu mạch lạc hơn. Thêm một câu mô tả ngắn về ngôi làng để làm rõ ý (ví dụ: population, surroundings) và dùng liên từ nếu cần.

Example: No, there aren't any tall buildings near my home because I live in a small, quiet village. The area mostly has low houses and farms, so the skyline is very open and green.

Suggestion: Bạn nên nói rõ loại công trình bạn thích chụp và lý do một cách ngắn gọn, sửa lỗi số nhiều/số ít (photo → photos, building → buildings) và tránh lặp. Dùng từ vựng cụ thể hơn như "architectural details" hoặc "historic buildings" và nối ý với liên từ để câu mượt.

Example: Yes, I love taking photos of buildings, especially domes and other interesting architectural details. Photography helps me capture memorable moments and appreciate design features I might otherwise miss.

Suggestion: Cố gắng phát biểu rõ ràng: nêu tên toà nhà rồi giải thích lý do cụ thể (kiến trúc, cảnh quan, cao độ). Loại bỏ tiếng ừ ờ và các từ thừa. Dùng liên từ để mở rộng ý (for example, because, since) và cung cấp một chi tiết cụ thể về nơi bạn đã thấy nó.

Example: Yes, I'd like to visit Landmark 81 because I've seen many photos and videos of it on social media. It looks very tall and modern, and I'm curious to see the view from the top and its interior design.

Suggestion: Bạn cần sửa từ sai (orthopedic → a high-rise / a tall building) và diễn đạt ý rõ ràng: nêu lý do tại sao muốn sống ở tòa cao tầng (view, tiện nghi) và có thể đề cập nhược điểm ngắn gọn. Tránh nói lắp và dùng câu hoàn chỉnh, tối đa 2–3 câu.

Example: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it would offer great views of the city and usually has convenient facilities like shops and gyms. However, I would also consider the noise and higher living costs before deciding.

× No there aren't. No there aren't any top building to building tall buildings near my house because I live in quite a village.

✓ No, there aren't any tall buildings near my house because I live in a quiet village.

The sentence has several structural and word-choice issues: 'top building to building tall buildings' is meaningless and should be 'tall buildings'; 'quite' is the wrong word form and should be 'quiet'; missing commas after 'No'. Improve by simplifying the clause order: subject 'there', verb 'are', determiner 'any', adjective 'tall', noun 'buildings', and use the correct article 'a' with 'quiet village'. Suggestion: Read the sentence slowly, remove redundant words, and use a simple noun phrase 'a quiet village'.

× A village.

✓ A village.

This fragment is acceptable as a short clarification but stands alone awkwardly in formal responses. If kept, it should connect to the previous sentence: 'I live in a quiet village.' Suggestion: Combine fragments into one full sentence to improve clarity.

× So there the area.

✓ So the area is rural.

The original is ungrammatical and missing a verb; 'there the area' is not a correct structure. Use a subject 'the area' and verb 'is' with adjective 'rural' or phrase 'is quite rural'. Suggestion: Use complete subject-verb-object or subject-linking verb-complement structures.

× No no ha I have tall buildings my village.

✓ No, no. I don't have tall buildings in my village.

This sentence lacks auxiliary 'do' for negation and misses the preposition 'in'. Also 'ha' is filler noise that should be omitted. For negation in present simple, use 'do not' + base verb. Suggestion: Use 'I don't have' + location with 'in'.

× Yes I I love taking photo of building a a Dome only buildings.

✓ Yes, I love taking photos of buildings, especially domes.

Several issues: 'photo' should be plural 'photos' to match general hobby; 'building a a Dome only buildings' is wordy and ungrammatical. Use noun plural and a clearer modifier 'especially domes'. Also include commas and remove duplicate words. Suggestion: Use '-ing' noun 'taking photos' and plural 'buildings' for general statements.

× I love taking photo everything because it's helped me capture moments memorable moments.

✓ I love taking photos of everything because it helps me capture memorable moments.

Tense and form errors: 'it's helped' mixes present perfect with context; 'helps' (present simple) is appropriate for habitual action. 'photo everything' needs 'photos of everything'. Duplicate 'moments' removed. Suggestion: Use present simple 'helps' for general truths and plural 'photos'.

× Yes, I yes, I would to uh see landmark 81 uh, I watch it everywhere like tiktok, Facebook, Instagram.

✓ Yes, I would like to see Landmark 81. I see it everywhere on TikTok, Facebook, and Instagram.

Modal construction error: 'would to see' is incorrect; use 'would like to see'. Also verb tense/usage: 'I watch it everywhere' should be 'I see it everywhere' and include preposition 'on' before social media names. Capitalize proper nouns. Suggestion: Use 'would like to' for polite desires and 'see it everywhere on' for encountering content on platforms.

× I see it's very beautiful and unique.

✓ I think it's very beautiful and unique.

Saying 'I see' is awkward here; to express opinion use 'I think' or 'it looks'. 'It's' is fine as contraction but ensure clarity. Suggestion: Use verbs that express opinion for subjective statements.

× MMM, yes, I want to live in orthopedic if I can.

✓ Yes, I want to live in a high-rise building if I can.

The original uses 'orthopedic' incorrectly (wrong word). This is lexical rather than strict grammar; corrected sentence substitutes an appropriate noun phrase. Ensure verb 'want' is correct for first person. Suggestion: Choose accurate vocabulary: 'high-rise building' or 'a tall building'.

× I think it's very beautiful when I can sees the views.

✓ I think it's very beautiful when I can see the view.

Subject-verb agreement: after modal 'can', use base form 'see' not 'sees'. Also 'views' can be singular 'the view' or plural 'the views' — choose consistently; 'the view' is natural here. Suggestion: After modal verbs use base verb form; check noun number consistency.

× Is is the view at UH.

✓ Is that the view of it?

This fragment 'Is is the view at UH.' is ungrammatical with repeated 'is' and unclear reference 'UH'. To form a question, clarify the subject and use one verb. If asking whether the view is from Landmark 81 or a place, use 'Is that the view from there?' Suggestion: Remove duplicate words and clarify what 'UH' refers to; form a complete question structure.