Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, correct small grammar errors, and avoid unnecessary words. You can add one brief detail (e.g., what makes it noticeable).

Example: Yes. There is one tall building near my home — a large supermarket. It stands out because of its glass facade and bright signage, so I notice it whenever I leave the house.

Suggestion: Give a direct response, then briefly explain why using linking words (e.g., because, so). Avoid repetition and improve grammar and word choice (e.g., 'groceries' not 'grocery things').

Example: Not really. Because it’s only an ordinary supermarket I see every day, it doesn’t seem special enough to photograph. I usually only take photos of interesting or historic buildings when I travel.

Suggestion: Organize your answer: start with a clear topic sentence naming the building, then add one or two specific reasons using linking words. Correct grammar and avoid filler words. Mention concrete details about the building to show knowledge.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit the Petronas Twin Towers (KLCC) in Kuala Lumpur. I want to see the skybridge and observation deck because the towers are famous for their height and unique design, and I’ve heard the view from the top is amazing.

Suggestion: Expand your one-word answer with a brief reason and, if possible, a contrasting detail. Use linking words like 'because' and 'however' to make it coherent and natural.

Example: No, I wouldn’t want to live in a tall building because I prefer having a garden and more outdoor space. However, I can see the appeal of apartments in tall buildings for people who enjoy city views and convenience.

× Yes, there is one big building near to the my home which is a supermarket.

✓ Yes, there is one big building near my home which is a supermarket.

The sentence has an extra definite article 'the' before 'my home' and an unnecessary preposition 'to' after 'near'. Use 'near my home' without 'to' and remove the extra 'the'. Also 'one big building' is fine with 'there is' for existence. Grammar problem type ID: 22

× Not really because the building just a supermarket where I can see every day because it's close to my house and it's just a building that we need to go in order to buy the grocery things.

✓ Not really, because the building is just a supermarket that I see every day; it's close to my house and we just go there to buy groceries.

Multiple issues: missing verb 'is' after 'building' (sentence without a verb / sentence structure), awkward clause ordering and repetition. Replace 'the building just a supermarket' with 'the building is just a supermarket'. Use 'that I see every day' and 'we just go there to buy groceries' for natural phrasing. Remove wordy 'in order to' and incorrect 'grocery things'. Grammar problem type ID: 23

× Of course, I dream too busy what the the building which is located far away from my home, which is the KLCC tower.

✓ Of course, I often dream about visiting a building that is located far from my home, which is the KLCC Tower.

Problems: 'dream too busy' is incorrect phrase and unclear (incorrect word choice and sentence structure). Use 'often dream about visiting' to express desire. Remove duplicate 'the the' and use 'far from my home' not 'far away from my home' (both ok but 'far from' is concise). Capitalize proper noun 'KLCC Tower'. Grammar problem type ID: 26},{