Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be clear, concise and use correct grammar. Start with a direct topic sentence, give specific details, and avoid repetition. Use correct number expressions and comparative forms. Organize into 2–3 sentences and include linking words (for example, "For example", "Also").

Example: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home. For example, one building has about fifteen floors and another is around twenty-four floors, which is the tallest in my village. There are also some medium-height buildings nearby.

Suggestion: Provide a direct answer and follow with specific reasons using correct grammar and vocabulary. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid filler words. Mention particular features you like and give a brief example.

Example: Yes, I often take photos of buildings because I appreciate their varied architecture. For instance, I like photographing colourful façades and intricate elevations, as these details look very vibrant in pictures.

Suggestion: Answer directly and give accurate, specific information. Avoid inaccuracies (Burj Khalifa is in Dubai) and vague guesses about facts. Use linking words to add details and mention why you want to visit. Keep to 2–3 clear sentences.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit the Burj Khalifa in Dubai because it is the tallest building in the world. I read articles about its observation deck and impressive design, and I would like to see the panoramic view from the top.

Suggestion: Be clear and avoid contradictory or confusing statements. Start with a direct opinion, then give 1–2 specific reasons using correct vocabulary (e.g., "afraid of heights", "prefer a small house"). Use linking words to make your reasons coherent.

Example: No, I would not like to live in a tall building because I am slightly afraid of heights. Instead, I prefer a small, one- or two-storey house because it feels more comfortable and private.

× Yeah, they have some buildings near to my home.

✓ Yeah, they have some buildings near my home.

Use 'near' without 'to' when indicating proximity. 'Near to' is nonstandard in this context; native usage is 'near my home'.

× 1 building is like 15 floors I think and then the one is 21 four, I think that is the one is the highest one in my village and there are few, but there are like medium ones, not the taller, this is the one more taller than the everyone.

✓ One building has about 15 floors, and another has 21 floors; I think that is the tallest in my village. There are a few others that are medium-sized, not very tall.

Multiple issues: incorrect numeral phrasing and plural agreement ('1 building' should be 'One building has'; '21 four' is incorrect, use '21 floors'); comparative form misuse ('more taller' is redundant; use 'tallest' or 'taller than everyone' but better 'tallest'); article and quantifier errors ('there are few' should be 'there are a few' to mean some). Suggestions: use clear subject-verb structure, correct plural nouns ('floors'), and proper comparative/superlative forms.

× Yeah, I do take photos of buildings because, uh, some buildings having the, uh, variety architectures like the elevations and everything is looking very vibrant and everything has some kind, so I wanna take those ones.

✓ Yeah, I do take photos of buildings because some buildings have a variety of architectural styles; the façades look very vibrant and interesting, so I want to take pictures of them.

'Some buildings having' is incorrect; use the simple present 'have' to state a habitual fact. 'Variety architectures' should be 'a variety of architectural styles'. 'Everything is looking' is awkward; use 'the façades look' for present simple description. Also avoid informal contractions like 'wanna' in formal speech; use 'want to'. Suggestion: use correct noun phrases ('a variety of'), present simple for habitual facts, and consistent vocabulary ('take pictures of them').

× Yeah, there is one building I would like to visit. It's a Burj Khalifa in Abu Dhabi and everyone saying it's a huge building, I think 1, not 5 or something floors and they have huge swimming pool and everything.

✓ Yeah, there is one building I would like to visit. It's the Burj Khalifa in Dubai and people say it's a huge building; I think it has more than 100 floors and there are huge swimming pools and many facilities.

Multiple issues: article and proper noun errors ('a Burj Khalifa' is wrong; use 'the Burj Khalifa' or correct city 'Dubai' not Abu Dhabi). 'Everyone saying' should be 'people say' or 'everyone says' (subject-verb agreement). 'I think 1, not 5 or something floors' is unclear; replace with accurate or plausible estimate using 'it has'. 'They have huge swimming pool' needs pluralization/agreement: 'there are huge swimming pools' or 'it has a huge swimming pool'. Suggestion: use correct articles for famous landmarks ('the'), correct place name, present simple for reported opinions, and proper noun-verb agreement.

× I read a article about that one.

✓ I read an article about it.

Use 'an' before a vowel sound; 'article' begins with a vowel sound so 'an article' is correct. Also 'that one' is informal and can be replaced with 'it' or 'that building'. Suggestion: use 'an' before vowel sounds and choose clear referents.

× Yeah, I don't think I don't want to live in a tall man because I'm little bit scared of her.

✓ No, I don't want to live in a tall building because I'm a little bit scared of heights.

This sentence has multiple pronoun and lexical errors: 'tall man' and 'her' are incorrect referents; the speaker means 'tall building' and fear of heights. The double negation 'I don't think I don't want' is confusing; use a single negative. 'Little bit' needs article 'a'. Suggestion: express the idea directly: 'I don't want to live in a tall building because I'm a little bit scared of heights.'

× It's so I'd rather stay in the tall buildings.

✓ So I'd rather stay in low-rise buildings.

Contradictory and unclear: 'It's so I'd rather stay in the tall buildings' conflicts with previous statement about not wanting tall buildings. Likely intended meaning is preference for shorter houses. 'The tall buildings' is wrong choice; use 'low-rise buildings' or 'shorter houses'. Suggestion: make the contrast clear and maintain consistency with prior sentence.

× I prefer the small ones, like one or two floors are just individual house that's comfortable for me.

✓ I prefer small ones, like one- or two-floor individual houses that are comfortable for me.

Adjective-noun order and plurality need correction: 'one or two floors are just individual house' is ungrammatical. Use 'one- or two-floor individual houses' or 'individual houses with one or two floors'. Also remove unnecessary article 'the' before 'small ones' in general statements. Suggestion: use correct hyphenation for compound adjectives and match plural forms.

× I'm not into the big buildings.

✓ I'm not into big buildings.

Definite article 'the' is unnecessary when speaking generally. Use 'I'm not into big buildings' to express a general preference. Suggestion: omit 'the' for general statements about categories.