Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct basic grammar (plural/singular, prepositions), and avoid irrelevant details. Use one or two supporting details and linking words to make it coherent. For example, say where you live, whether tall buildings are common, and why you like or dislike them.

Example: Yes. There are many tall buildings near my home because I live in a large city. For example, several office towers and apartment blocks are only a ten-minute walk away, which makes the area feel busy and modern.

Suggestion: Answer directly, then give one clear reason and a brief example. Use linking words (because, although, however) and correct verb forms. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Example: Not really, because I grew up in a big city and tall buildings are part of my everyday life. However, when I was younger I used to take many photos of buildings during family trips.

Suggestion: Clarify the building name and location, use formal phrasing (want to instead of wanna), and give a specific reason why you want to visit. Correct location facts and structure the answer with a topic sentence plus one supporting detail using linking words.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit the Tokyo Skytree because it offers panoramic views of the city from its observation deck. I have never been there, and I think the view at sunset would be especially impressive.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer, then balance reasons for and against using linking words (but, although). Correct grammar (want to live, afraid of earthquakes) and avoid trailing off. Provide one clear detail about the view or concerns.

Example: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because I enjoy the wide city views from high floors. However, I am sometimes worried about earthquakes, so I would choose a building with strong safety measures and earthquake-resistant design.

× Yes, uh, there are a lot of tall building in my near my home and I live in coffee and it's quite big city in this area and I love visiting Osaka and there's a lot of.

✓ Yes, uh, there are a lot of tall buildings near my home. I live in Kobe and it's quite a big city in this area, and I love visiting Osaka.

Errors: 'building' should be plural 'buildings' because 'a lot of' requires a plural count noun (Grammar Problem Type 1). 'in my near my home' is incorrect word order and preposition; correct is 'near my home' (this also touches preposition/order but primary is plural). 'I live in coffee' is likely a misheard city name; corrected to 'Kobe'. Missing article before 'big city' fixed to 'a big city'. Suggestions: use plural nouns with quantifiers like 'a lot of'; place 'near my home' after the noun; include articles with singular count nouns ('a big city').

× Not so much because I'm used to living the big city, so it's kind of my normal daily life. So I don't take a lot of picture of the whole building. But when I was young I took a lot of picture.

✓ Not so much because I'm used to living in the city, so it's kind of normal for my daily life. I don't take a lot of pictures of whole buildings. But when I was young I took a lot of pictures.

Errors: 'the big city' is unnatural here; use 'living in the city' for general statements (Grammar Problem Type 14). 'a lot of picture' should be 'a lot of pictures'—quantifier 'a lot of' requires plural count noun (also Grammar Problem Type 1 & 14). 'the whole building' better as 'whole buildings' when referring to entire structures in general. Suggestions: Use plural nouns with 'a lot of' and use 'in the city' for habitual residence. Maintain consistent plurality when comparing past and present actions.

× Yes, I really wanna go with CBS card which are located in Syria, Tokyo and it's quite famous for its beautiful view from their top, top and so I've never visited there so.

✓ Yes, I really want to go to the CBS Tower which is located in Shiba, Tokyo, and it's quite famous for its beautiful view from the top, and I have never visited it.

Errors: 'wanna' is informal; use 'want to' in test context. 'go with CBS card' is incorrect preposition and noun choice; use 'go to the CBS Tower'. 'which are located' disagree in number; 'tower' is singular so use 'is located' (Subject-verb agreement, Grammar Problem Type 27). 'Syria, Tokyo' is wrong location—likely 'Shiba, Tokyo' or similar; corrected to 'Shiba, Tokyo'. 'their top' should be 'the top' or 'its top' for the tower (Incorrect use of pronouns, Grammar Problem Type 12). Suggestions: use correct noun names, match subject and verb in number, use formal wording 'want to', and use 'the top' or singular possessive for buildings.

× Yes, I hope I can live there because it's really, I can see a lot of very beautiful view from there.

✓ Yes, I hope I can live there because I can see a lot of very beautiful views from there.

Errors: 'I can see a lot of very beautiful view' mixes plural and singular; 'a lot of' requires plural 'views' (Grammar Problem Type 1 & 6). Also the phrase 'it's really,' is incomplete and unnecessary; removed for clarity. Suggestions: ensure noun number matches quantifiers and keep present-tense verbs consistent for current hopes.

× But when I was younger, I was very scared of the earthquake, so I didn't want it to leave the highest building. But for me it's.

✓ But when I was younger, I was very scared of earthquakes, so I didn't want to live in the highest buildings.

Errors: 'scared of the earthquake' is better as plural 'earthquakes' when speaking generally (Grammar Problem Type 5). 'didn't want it to leave the highest building' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'didn't want to live in the highest buildings'—'leave' is wrong verb and pronoun 'it' is incorrect (Incorrect use of pronouns and verb, Grammar Problem Types 12 and 5). Final fragment 'But for me it's.' is incomplete and removed. Suggestions: use 'live in' for residence, match nouns (earthquakes), and avoid dangling pronouns; complete sentences fully.