Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct grammar: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail. Avoid repetition (e.g. "because" twice) and use correct word forms (e.g. "I live" not "I am living").

Example: Yes. I live in a densely populated city, so there are many tall residential and office buildings nearby. For example, my apartment faces a cluster of modern high-rises built in the last five years.

Suggestion: Correct grammar and tighten phrasing. Use a topic sentence, then give a specific example and one reason. Fix singular/plural agreement ("buildings are") and avoid vague words like "quite" repeated.

Example: Not usually. Buildings are part of my everyday scenery, so I only photograph them when something stands out — for example, I took photos of an old colonial-style theatre last month because of its ornate façade.

Suggestion: Make the answer more natural by using past or present perfect for fascination and adding a brief reason why. Keep it within a couple of sentences and add one concrete detail about the tower.

Example: Yes. I would like to visit Guangzhou Tower in Guangdong Province because I’m fascinated by its striking design and twisting shape. I’ve seen pictures of its light displays at night and would love to see them in person.

Suggestion: Clarify and correct vocabulary ("hate" is incorrect; likely "heights"). Use one clear reason first, then a supporting detail with linking words (e.g. "also"), and avoid speculation without specifics. Keep it within two sentences.

Example: Not really. I’m afraid of heights, and I’m also concerned that tall buildings can sway in strong winds, which would make me feel uncomfortable.

× Definitely yes, because I am living in a city and because of the population there are lots of tall buildings near here.

✓ Definitely yes, because I live in a city and, due to the population, there are lots of tall buildings nearby.

Use simple present 'I live' for habitual or permanent states rather than 'I am living' which implies a temporary situation. Replace 'because of the population' with 'due to the population' for natural phrasing and change 'near here' to 'nearby'. Also add a comma for clarity.

× To be honest, not really because the buildings is quite normal in my life.

✓ To be honest, not really because the buildings are quite ordinary in my area.

The subject 'the buildings' is plural so the verb must be 'are' not 'is'. Replace 'normal in my life' with 'ordinary in my area' to convey that buildings are not remarkable. 'Ordinary' is a more natural adjective here.

× I just take photos if I find that the buildings are quite unique or special.

✓ I just take photos if I find buildings that are quite unique or special.

This sentence is mostly correct but can be made more natural by moving 'that' and removing the extra article. No tense change needed; keep simple present for habitual action. This correction improves word order and conciseness.

× Yes, I want to visit the Guangzhou Tower, which is in Guangdong province, and I was fascinated by its unique styles and special structures.

✓ Yes, I want to visit the Guangzhou Tower, which is in Guangdong province, because I am fascinated by its unique style and special structure.

Use present tense 'I am fascinated' to match the present desire to visit; 'was fascinated' implies a past reaction. Also 'style' and 'structure' are usually uncountable or singular when referring to the tower's design, so use singular forms for natural English.

× Not really, because I am afraid of the hate.

✓ Not really, because I am afraid of heights.

The phrase 'afraid of the hate' is incorrect; the intended meaning is fear of high places, which is 'afraid of heights'. This is a lexical error; correct the word to convey the intended meaning.

× Moreover, when it is windy heavily, maybe the residents living in tall buildings would feel the shake of the buildings.

✓ Moreover, when it is very windy, residents living in tall buildings may feel the building shake.

Adverb placement: 'windy heavily' is unnatural; use 'very windy' or 'in heavy winds'. 'Maybe' combined with 'would' is redundant; use 'may' for possibility. 'Feel the shake of the buildings' is awkward; 'feel the building shake' or 'feel the buildings shake' is more natural. Also simplify plural agreement: 'residents' with plural 'buildings' is fine but 'building shake' focuses on motion.

× It is terrible.

✓ That would be terrible.

'It is terrible' is grammatical but less natural in this context. Using 'That would be terrible' matches the conditional or hypothetical tone about how experiencing shaking in tall buildings would feel. This improves register and cohesion with previous sentence.