Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 文法と発音の明瞭さを改善してください。特に冠詞と単数・複数の一致（"one tall buildings" → "one tall building" または "tall buildings"）を直し、話の流れを簡潔にすることで自然さが増します。具体的には、最初に主題文をはっきり述べ（"Yes, there is a tall building near my house."）、次にその建物の名前と特徴を補足し、結論で短く感想を言う練習をしてください。

Example: Yes, there is a tall building near my house called Companies Tower. It isn't very tall compared with skyscrapers, but it stands out in the neighborhood. I often notice it when I walk past because of its glass façade.

Suggestion: 流暢さと語彙の選択を改善しましょう。繰り返し（"of of"）や不必要な間投詞（"uh"）を減らし、適切な動詞の形（"take photo" → "take photos"）を使うと自然です。理由や具体例を一つ加えると説得力が増します。例えば、なぜ撮るのか・どんな建物かを説明する練習をしてください。

Example: I don't usually take photos of buildings, but I sometimes photograph very unique ones. For example, I took pictures of a modern museum nearby because its curved design looked interesting in different lights.

Suggestion: 答えが不明瞭で文の構造が崩れています。まず直接に質問に答え（"Yes, I would like to visit..."）、次に具体的な建物名や理由を述べてください。略語や不完全な表現（"UH Maj. measure of architecture" や "visit period"）は避け、明確な説明を練習すると良いです。たとえば、訪れたい大学の建築学部の建物名や興味の理由を述べる練習をしてください。

Example: Yes, I would like to visit the architecture building at WA University. I'm planning to study architecture there, so I'm curious about their studio spaces and design labs to see how students work.

Suggestion: 感情の表現は良いですが、語彙と文法の正確さを改善してください。'scared of tall like hate' は意味が不明瞭なので、正しい表現（"afraid of heights"）を使い、理由を一つか二つ具体的に述べましょう。また発話は簡潔にして一貫性を保つと自然です。

Example: No, I don't want to live in a tall building because I am afraid of heights. I would feel anxious on high floors and prefer a low-rise house where I feel more comfortable.

× Yes, there are one tall buildings around my house which is uh, companies tower and it's not that tall but I think it's tall.

✓ Yes, there is one tall building around my house, which is a company tower; it's not very tall, but I think it is tall.

複数形と単数形の誤り。'there are one tall buildings' は主語数が一致していないため、'there is one tall building' のように単数形にする必要がある。また 'companies tower' は所有格や冠詞が欠けているため 'a company tower' など正しい名詞句に直すべきである。改善点: 数を示す語に応じて名詞の単複を一致させ、冠詞や所有の使い方を確認すること。

× I don't really take photos of of buildings, uh. But when it comes to very unique buildings, I may take photo.

✓ I don't really take photos of buildings, but when it comes to very unique buildings, I may take a photo.

動名詞や可算名詞の使用の誤り。'take photos of of buildings' は重複と前置詞の二重使用。'take photo' は可算名詞なので単数形には冠詞が必要で、通常複数を言うなら 'take photos'。改善点: 'take photos of' を定型表現として覚え、単数形の場合は 'a photo' を付ける。

× Yes, I. I'm going to enter UH Maj. measure of architecture in WA University, so I would like to visit period.

✓ Yes. I'm going to enter the architecture program at WA University, so I would like to visit (the campus).

文の構造と語順が不自然。'UH Maj. measure of architecture' は意味が不明瞭で、適切な名詞句に置き換える必要がある。'visit period' は口語的に不適切で 'visit the campus' など具体化するべき。改善点: 受験や専攻を表す一般的な表現（'enter the architecture program'）を使い、訪問対象を明確にする。

× Honestly I don't really want to live in tall buildings because I'm scared of tall like hate and I feel. Fear every day. It's I don't want to.

✓ Honestly, I don't really want to live in tall buildings because I'm scared of heights and feel fear every day; I don't want to.

形容詞と名詞の誤用。'scared of tall' は不自然で、正しくは 'scared of heights'（高さが怖い）。また語順と句のつながりが断片的で、'feel fear every day' のようにまとまった表現にする必要がある。改善点: 固有の表現 'scared of heights' を使用し、文をつなげて流暢に話す練習をする。