Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g., "people's work").

Example: Yes. There are many tall residential and office buildings near my home because several IT companies have offices in the area. As a result, many corporate employees live nearby, so developers have built many apartment complexes to meet the demand.

Suggestion: Give a direct topic sentence and add one specific reason with a linking word. Correct collocations ("on a daily basis") and avoid long redundant phrases.

Example: Not usually. Since I see the same buildings every day, they no longer seem interesting, so I rarely photograph them. However, I might take a photo if a building has unusual architecture or lighting.

Suggestion: Make the answer complete and grammatical. Start with a clear sentence naming the building/place and then explain why using linking words. Avoid trailing sentences and incomplete thoughts.

Example: Yes. I would like to visit and work at Wipro's headquarters because I admire their technology projects and corporate culture. Currently I work at Cognizant, so visiting Wipro would help me understand their work environment and prepare for a potential job transfer.

Suggestion: Provide a concise topic sentence and one or two specific reasons with linking words. Correct small errors (e.g., "as a bachelor" or "as a student"). Avoid overly long sentences and repetition.

Example: Yes. I prefer living in a tall apartment building because it is convenient and offers privacy. For example, as a bachelor, I appreciate the security and independent space these buildings provide.

× Yes, there are many tall buildings and apartments where I live because I live in a area where a lot of IT companies are building and a lot of corporate people stay due to the demand and people, people's work.

✓ Yes, there are many tall buildings and apartments where I live because I live in an area where a lot of IT companies are being built and many corporate employees live here due to demand and their work.

Incorrect use of the indefinite article 'a' before a vowel-starting noun 'area'; it should be 'an'. Also 'companies are building' is ungrammatical for passive construction; use 'are being built'. 'A lot of corporate people stay' is awkward; use 'many corporate employees live here'. Suggestions: use 'an' before vowel sounds, use passive 'be + past participle' for 'being built', and prefer 'employees' for formality.

× I don't really take photos of buildings or apartments because it is a part of my surrounding and I pass by it in a daily basis, so there is nothing new about it or surprising or exciting.

✓ I don't really take photos of buildings or apartments because they are part of my surroundings and I pass them every day, so there is nothing new, surprising, or exciting about them.

Several structural issues: singular/plural mismatch ('it' vs 'buildings or apartments'), incorrect phrase 'a daily basis' (use 'every day' or 'on a daily basis'), and awkward word order. Suggestions: match plural nouns with plural pronouns, replace 'a daily basis' with 'every day', and use parallel lists with commas.

× Yes, it is not only a building but a place where I want to work in future because currently I am working in a company named Cognizant and I want to shift to another company which is named as Wipro and I just love the.

✓ Yes, it is not only a building but a place where I want to work in the future because currently I am working at a company named Cognizant and I want to shift to another company named Wipro, and I just love it.

Errors include missing article 'the' before 'future', wrong preposition 'in' (use 'in the future'), incorrect preposition 'in a company' (use 'at' or 'for'), unnecessary 'which is named as' (use 'named'), and sentence fragment 'I just love the' missing the object 'it'. Suggestions: add 'the', use 'at' for workplaces, simplify 'named Wipro', and complete the object.

× Yes, I enjoy living in buildings and apartments because it is more convenient, you have your own space no one is bothering you in so it is more safe for you to live as a bachelors or a student and I think that's why I prefer.

✓ Yes, I enjoy living in buildings and apartments because it is more convenient: you have your own space, no one bothers you, and it is safer for a bachelor or a student to live there. I think that's why I prefer it.

Multiple structure and agreement problems: 'it is more convenient' followed by comma splice; 'no one is bothering you in' is ungrammatical and awkward; 'more safe' should be 'safer'; 'a bachelors' mixes singular and plural—use 'a bachelor' or 'bachelors' properly; sentence ends with missing object 'it'. Suggestions: break into clearer clauses, use 'safer', fix 'no one bothers you', and include the final object 'it'.

× I don't really take photos of buildings or apartments because it is a part of my surrounding and I pass by it in a daily basis, so there is nothing new about it or surprising or exciting.

✓ I don't really take photos of buildings or apartments because they are part of my surroundings and I pass them every day, so there is nothing new, surprising, or exciting about them.

Subject-verb and pronoun agreement: plural 'buildings or apartments' require plural verbs/pronouns ('they are', 'them'), not singular 'it is' and 'it'. Suggestions: ensure nouns and pronouns agree in number throughout the sentence.