Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Reduce repetition and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific examples with linking words. Use correct articles and plural forms.

Example: Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home. For example, there is a large university campus and several high-rise office blocks. In particular, the main business tower is much taller than the surrounding buildings.

Suggestion: Be more precise and connect ideas with linking words. Use correct verb agreement and avoid vague phrases. Explain one clear reason and give a brief example.

Example: Yes, I often take photos of buildings. I especially like taking selfies in front of tall landmarks because they have historical and architectural significance. For example, I photographed an old city hall last month to remember its unique façade.

Suggestion: Provide a clear topic sentence and a specific reason with correct vocabulary. Avoid fragments and unclear words. Mention one or two features you want to see and connect them logically.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit the Metropolitan Museum of Art, often called the Met. I want to see its grand architecture and the diverse art collections inside, especially the European paintings and the ancient sculptures.

Suggestion: Speak in complete sentences and use correct word forms. State your preference then give specific reasons and link them smoothly. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and correct vocabulary such as 'skyline' or 'high-rise'.

Example: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because I enjoy the skyline views, especially at night. For instance, from a high-floor apartment I could see the city lights and feel more relaxed after work.

× My city has a a lots of tall buildings such as hospital, university and.

✓ My city has a lot of tall buildings such as hospitals and a university.

The phrase 'a a lots' is incorrect: 'a lot' or 'lots' are correct forms; 'lots' does not take 'a'. Also 'hospital' should be plural 'hospitals' when listed generally, and 'university' needs an article 'a' or be plural for parallel structure. I changed to 'hospitals and a university' for natural parallelism.

× Business building, in particular business building is much taller than any buildings.

✓ The business buildings, especially one particular business building, are much taller than other buildings.

Original is ungrammatical and unclear. I made the subject plural 'business buildings' and clarified 'one particular business building' as an example. Changed 'is' to 'are' to agree with plural subject and 'any buildings' to 'other buildings' for correct comparison and natural phrasing.

× Absolutely yes. I like taking a selfie with taller building.

✓ Absolutely, yes. I like taking selfies with tall buildings.

'A selfie' singular with 'a taller building' is possible but awkward; more natural is plural 'selfies' and 'tall buildings'. Also 'taller' is comparative without a reference; use 'tall' for general preference. I adjusted number agreement for natural English.

× That is because buildings has a lot of meaning.

✓ That is because buildings have a lot of meaning.

'Buildings' is plural, so the verb must be plural 'have' not 'has'. This is a subject-verb agreement error.

× For example, building history is really important for many people.

✓ For example, a building's history is really important to many people.

'Building history' is awkward; use possessive 'a building's history' or plural 'buildings' histories'. Also 'important for many people' is acceptable but 'important to many people' is more natural.

× Absolutely, yes. I want to go to Metropolitan Museum called the mat.

✓ Absolutely, yes. I want to go to the Metropolitan Museum called the Met.

Proper noun needs article 'the Metropolitan Museum'. 'the mat' seems to be a misspelling; corrected to 'the Met', a common short name. Sentence structure improved by placing article and correct name.

× That is because the building is Cody Architecture and.

✓ That is because the building has a grand architectural style.

Original 'Cody Architecture' is incorrect and incomplete. Likely intended to say 'cozy' or 'copy' or 'a certain style'; I interpreted as praising the architecture. Changed to a grammatical, descriptive phrase: 'has a grand architectural style.' Ensure adjective use describes 'architecture' correctly.

× Absolutely, yes. That is because I like. Watching a skies skip view, especially night city view.

✓ Absolutely, yes. That is because I like watching the skyline, especially the city at night.

Original has sentence fragment 'That is because I like.' and awkward phrase 'skies skip view'. I combined into one sentence using gerund 'watching' followed by correct noun 'the skyline' and 'the city at night' for clarity.

× So uh, if I have a chance I would like to live in their taller building.

✓ So, uh, if I have the chance I would like to live in a taller building there.

'Their' misuses pronoun (no antecedent). Use 'there' to indicate location, and 'a taller building' is the intended noun phrase. Also 'the chance' is more natural than 'a chance' in this context.