Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Perbaiki pelafalan, tata bahasa dan kelancaran. Hindari pengulangan kata (mis. "it's it's") dan kesalahan struktur (mis. "it's walls made of glass"). Gunakan kalimat topik yang jelas, lalu tambahkan detail spesifik dengan linking word. Contoh fokus: sebutkan jarak atau jumlah, jelaskan fitur secara singkat, dan hindari kalimat panjang yang kurang teratur.

Example: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home. One notable example is a heart hospital about five minutes away; its glass facade reflects the sunlight beautifully, making it stand out during the day.

Suggestion: Kurangi penggunaan filler seperti "uh" dan ulangan kata. Perbaiki grammar (mis. "catch my attentions" → "catch my attention"). Jelaskan alasan singkat dan berikan contoh konkret memakai linking words seperti "unless" atau "only when" untuk koherensi.

Example: No, I usually don't take photos of buildings unless there is something interesting nearby, such as a dramatic sunset or the moon, which creates a nice contrast.

Suggestion: Perbaiki grammar dan pengulangan kata (mis. "Yes it is", "I I", "Do do"). Gunakan kalimat topik langsung dan jelaskan alasan secara spesifik. Sertakan linking words seperti "because" atau "to" untuk menunjukkan tujuan atau alasan.

Example: Yes. I would love to visit the Burj Khalifa because I am curious how the city looks from the top and whether the surrounding buildings appear very small from that height.

Suggestion: Perbaiki struktur kalimat dan grammar (mis. "very exhausting" → "would be exhausting"; remove repeated words). Berikan alasan yang terperinci dan gunakan linking words seperti "because" atau "so". Sebutkan contoh konkret dari preferensi Anda untuk membuat jawaban lebih berisi.

Example: No, I wouldn't like to live in a tall building because I think it would be exhausting and impersonal. I prefer simpler, wooden houses because they feel warmer and more traditional.

× It's it's walls made of glass, it reflects sunlight and it's quiet wonderful when we see it at the day.

✓ Its walls are made of glass; they reflect sunlight and it's quite wonderful when we see it during the day.

Incorrect uses: 'It's it's' repeats and uses contraction incorrectly; 'it's' (it is) used instead of possessive 'its'; 'walls made of glass' requires a passive verb 'are made'; singular/plural agreement: 'walls' needs plural verb 'they reflect'; 'quiet' is wrong word, should be adverb 'quite'; 'at the day' incorrect preposition and article, use 'during the day'. Suggestions: use 'its' for possession, use passive 'are made' for material, ensure subject-verb agreement, use correct adverb 'quite', and use 'during the day' for time expression.

× I'm not interested in taking photos of buildings except, uh, if there are objects near, uh, behind it or beside it that, that catch my attentions.

✓ I'm not interested in taking photos of buildings except, for example, when there are objects near, behind, or beside them that catch my attention.

Errors: 'except, uh, if' awkward — use 'except when' or 'except for example, when'; 'it' refers to 'buildings' (plural) so use 'them'; 'catch my attentions' incorrect plural of 'attention' and article — use singular 'attention'. Suggestions: use 'when' for time clauses, match pronouns to plural nouns, and use uncountable noun 'attention' in singular.

× Yes it is. I would like to visit one of the tallest building in the world, it's Burj Khalifa.

✓ Yes, I would. I would like to visit one of the tallest buildings in the world; it's the Burj Khalifa.

Problems: 'Yes it is' is unnatural answer to 'Is there a building...' — 'Yes, I would' or 'Yes' is better; 'one of the tallest building' needs plural 'buildings'; missing article before 'Burj Khalifa' — 'the' is customary with famous buildings. Suggestions: choose the appropriate short response, use plural after 'one of the', and include definite article for unique landmarks.

× I wonder how the world look like when I I am in the top of that skyscraper.

✓ I wonder what the world looks like when I am at the top of that skyscraper.

Errors: word order and verb form 'how the world look like' — in English use 'what... looks like' and 'looks' for third person singular; 'in the top' should be 'at the top'; duplicate 'I I'. Suggestions: use 'what... looks like' for appearance questions, match verb to singular subject, and use 'at the top' for location.

× Do do the buildings around it look very small?

✓ Do the buildings around it look very small?

Error: duplicated auxiliary 'Do do'. Suggestion: use single 'Do' for question formation.

× I think living in a tall building very exhausting.

✓ I think living in a tall building is very exhausting.

Missing linking verb 'is' to connect subject complement. Suggestion: include 'is' after subject to form a complete clause.

× And actually I don't really like the modern kind of building.

✓ Actually, I don't really like modern buildings.

'the modern kind of building' is unnatural and singular; better to use plural 'modern buildings' or 'modern kinds of buildings'. Suggestions: use plural noun form and remove unnecessary articles for general statements.

× I prefer the simple one, for example, the building that that makes that made of wood.

✓ I prefer simpler ones; for example, buildings that are made of wood.

Problems: 'the simple one' is vague and singular while general preference should use plural 'simpler ones' or 'simple ones'; 'the building that that makes that made of wood' is ungrammatical — duplicate 'that', incorrect verb 'makes', and wrong form 'made' without auxiliary. Use relative clause 'buildings that are made of wood'. Suggestions: express general preference with plural and form relative clauses correctly with 'are made' for passive.